ArHi FF -True Lies- Chapter 3 | Page 31 - Page 8

Originally posted by: MariahMohan

I'm hooked! Need I say more? That was fabulous.

Khushi as an assassin is just... wow! Only you, Avi, only you. I'm going to be addicted to this one, I can tell.

I just hope that Arnav doesn't start out as a man she is ordered to kill or something. Oh lawd! There I go with my crazy fantasies. Hehehe.
-Ann

Hi Avi, 😊

What? 😲 "An Indescribable Emotion" will be adding soon but there is so much more to cover. 😔

Coming to this new fan fiction…Wow! Khushi is an assassin; I wonder what led her to this. Khushi introduction was no less than a movie intro of the main female action actress. ⭐️ You have done a great job describing the whole situation. 👏

Waiting to see what Arnav's character is. I am guessing that Arnav will be the hero according to a comment I read earlier on this thread.

Really excited about this fan fiction I have already unconfirmed plot of the story building up in my mind…lol…😆 But I am sad that "An Indescribable Emotion" will be ending soon. 😔 It's my favorite work of yours like I have said many times before. Oh well! Every good thing has to end sometime. 😊

Originally posted by: Rimz_k09

Hi Avi, 😊

What? 😲 "An Indescribable Emotion" will be adding soon but there is so much more to cover. 😔

Coming to this new fan fiction'Wow! Khushi is an assassin; I wonder what led her to this. Khushi introduction was no less than a movie intro of the main female action actress. ⭐️ You have done a great job describing the whole situation. 👏

Waiting to see what Arnav's character is. I am guessing that Arnav will be the hero according to a comment I read earlier on this thread.

Really excited about this fan fiction I have already unconfirmed plot of the story building up in my mind'lol'😆 But I am sad that "An Indescribable Emotion" will be ending soon. 😔 It's my favorite work of yours like I have said many times before. Oh well! Every good thing has to end sometime. 😊

Originally posted by: shay1990

RES!

Because Avi threatened us all

Edited*

So here i am as promised! I was actually going to copy and paste my email to you like Anissa (lol) but i can't seen to find it So I'll save that for chaptaaahhh waaan 😉

HAYYYEEE!!!

The intensity. The gripping moment. The disgustingly beautiful descriptions... You blow my mind Avinaash. You really do, How the hell do you expect me to give you negative feedback?! You tell me that now? *looks intently at Avi*

EXAAACTLLYY!

It's just not possible *folds arms defiantly*

The fact that you have managed to create something so different and so off the scale is beyond me. And you have done it so elegantly my little amazing darling you!

You just know Khushi is going to be BADASS in this! My kind of Khushi 😉
You don't want to mess with her... Assassin jo ban gayi woh.

So to end... My favourite part? Pure and simple, this line:

Appearances ruled the World.

Why? Because it's bang on! This line punched me in the face with it's realism. Fantastic Avi.. You are FANTASTIC! Because appearances DO rule the world. It's all a mask... It's all a lie. #RealTalk

So that's it from me. But one more thing though..

I love you ❤️

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Oh. My. Cheesecakes!

Khushi's an assassin?! Boss!

Omg I'm so excited for this story! It'll be a pleasure to see this version of Khushi.

From the bubbly, cheery girl that loves and cares for anyone and everyone that we are accustomed with to this fearless, trained killer!

Absolutely wonderful!

And now I wonder how Arnav will fit into this!

Do continue soon hon :) it's a brilliant concept!

Thanks, Pria

Originally posted by: TRND86

WOW that took some time to sink in. This is completely different from what you have written so far. It was brilliant. The hunter & it's prey! I could feel the adrenaline running through Khushi & man is she in control! I could also smell the fear of the prey. Khushi is badass & a chameleon. she knows how to blend in & not get caught by standing out. Who is going to look at a simple grirl in an Anarkali walking around. I am usually impressed by the confident Arnav in the stories & love the bubbly Khushi but this Khushi has me scared a little. Let's see what kind of character Arnav is going to be give. Is he going to be a cop? I have only read the prologue & my mind is racing! 👍🏼