#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys =D Thread 4 is here 🥳

It is all because of those few who continue to read. Thank you so much!! I hope you all will continue reading this FF and show your love. I get really sad when I don't get the expected likes


Little something about this FF:

I, Khushi, is here to present my own version of D3 after all the mess-ups that began since Kria's exit. Everything about SwaRon is in my way. KriyAnsh is my way as well.
Though the craziness of the other characters might not be there that much... I can write but maybe involving that many characters in one scene might make it a mess 😳 They will be there of course but maybe less? I obviously won't be using them as advertisers in the show; that much I can promise you 😳 The plot is what I wished it would be... Im sure many of you would love to read it 😳





Lastly, a surprise! All of you already know, I will be updating this FF regularly! Yes, that means I will be giving a part every OTHER day and since it's every other day.. parts might seem a bit short 😳 I might update twice in a day if I get mind-blowing response on an update 😉 So keep a regular visit at this thread because I am just going to keep on updating Since it's regular, I wish to get comments and likes from you guys regularly as well. Once or twice is okay if you're late but please don't disappear without letting me know [:$[] Though I'm wondering if I should since the response is dropping due to exams.

Now I present:




*Banner on its way 😛*



Color key:

(yes, I will color code the parts so the dialogues can be made out easily and you can also tell who says what. The colors given will stay same throughout the FF.)

Kriya Shivam Smriti Swayam Rey Sharon Vishakha Neha Rinni Simmi Bharat RDX Vicky Nilesh Amar Nicole Taani


(rest will be added as they make their entry )

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guzarish.

Add this [Guzarish.] ID as your buddy to receive PMz on this FF. I usually use --silvermist-- for all my D3 works but this I want to keep separate for 2 reasons. 1- in silvermist, there are many who don't read the pmz resulting in me just sending pmz for no gain. 2. secret 😛



Any requests sent to my original ID [..first.rain..] will be deleted as I DO NOT send out pmz on updates from that account.

Thanks.
Khushi.

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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I n d e x .

**All page numbers (except for Page 1) are hyper-linked**
[OS] The dramatic return of... *NEW*
#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3
#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11
#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18
Part 19 Page 21
Part 20 Page 60
Part 21 Page 82
Part 22 Page 100
#5 Guzarish [My version D3]




Color key:

Kriya Shivam Smriti Swayam Rey Sharon Vishakha Neha Rinni Simmi Bharat RDX Vicky Nilesh Amar


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Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Author's Note.
Hey guys! How are you all doing? Fine I hope. I know many of you are having exams. All the best for them 🤗 I just want to say that don't forget to come back after exams 😳 As it is, this FF is being written only for you guys. So there won't be a point to continue if you guys leave. Do come back :D It makes me really happy to read the fast comments and all the like!

I feel the need to clear some things. I did NOT stop my other works due to low response. It's personal reason for stopping them =) Am I disappointed with decreasing readers with each update? Yes! But I'm going to keep on updating Guzarish hoping everyone comes back after their exams are finished!

And can I get a bit more encouragement from you all? I feel less motivated to update seeing the constant drop.. I realize it's exam time and I encourage you all to focus on studies too... But... 😳And if the encouragement keeps on coming, we might get Kriya back by New Year 😉

That's all. Take care and all the best for exams once again 🤗 Loads of love!
Ps: New update will be soon... Seeing that I last updated less than 24 hours ago 😳
-Khushi.

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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(This all begins during the time when Kriya has to leave and she makes the decision of choosing her friends over her love.)

What happens when the person you loved from the bottom of your hearts betrays you? Or so you think that. The secrets are kept hidden thinking it will save others the heart break. Instead, what happens? More hearts are broken as a result! The chapters that were to remain closed, reopens with the new twists in their lives. Whether they like it or not, it the life's 'Guzarish' that they have to accept and live with while striving the find the end of the rainbow. What all will they have to go through in order to reach that? Keep on reading to find out!


All the characters are same as the show. It is just the events of my imagination that shape them differently from what they are in the show. Imagine them all like they were in February time before the real creative messed it up. Not that hard right? As it is, we all are yearning to see the real characters we fell in love with.

But, whenever a new character comes or I feel as if a CS for an already existing character needs to be given, I will add it here and also let you all know =)


Just a list of characters:

Girls: Kriya Ghai, Sharon Raiprakash, Neha, Vishakha, Rinni, Simmi, Taani.

Boys: Reyansh Singhania, Swayam Shekhavat, Vicky, Bharat, Amar, Nilesh and Shivam.

Professors: RDX and Karan Mallik (Yup, he's there) 😉 along with Nicole. At times, the principal + VP.

Others: Smriti Ghai


Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res😛
Unres

1st again yay

Congrats for the 4th thread

Ur demand is complete so update soon


Edited by lil_devil_himu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pata hai aaj subah main first page aise hi gaana sunne ke liye khol ke baithi thi...

NS i didn't read parts before letter...

i didn't miss something huge nah???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Himu- i had said no comments 😛

Casper- haha i do the same sometimes 😳 Uhm not really.. unless you want to read the parts of smriti-kriya. You can find them easily through color code..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nope...

smriti kriya nhi padhna..

mereko KR se matlab hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Smriti-Kriya affects KR so I suggest you read them..

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