#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22 - Page 5

Originally posted by: shaani2209

RDX aur Nicole dont have their Family and friends kya??? that they are making their students manage the wedding..? 😳 ... ROFL!! I dunno. I just let it be like it was in the show 😆

event management company ko bata dete, curtains wagera lagane ko😆 paise bachne ki kya jarurat thi😛 Kanjoos hai na sab 🤣

anyways...chodo ab toh shaadi ho chuki😆and thank you for ending it in one update itself..taking the torture of imagining them as event management students was a tough job😆*jus joking* LMAO! I completely understand that. Bichare students.

start intro of the update was nicely done...liked kria-smiriti part...finally, soon her mom might succeed in getting back to talking terms with her daughter... waiting for that... Yes... it's very near ;)

i liked the rey teasing swayam part...that nano SwaRon moment under the curtains was lovely, nicely put... thank you!

no time to watch the episode..but i still do have it in my mind...yes..one of the phase for SwaRon that cannot be forgotten..

i Really loved the way you have handled SwaRon in this update...from they being in the room part to the after wedding the lift part...*sorry not giving detail review, running out of time but i really loved it* It's kay. Glad you loved that!!

the rey's imagination part was nice too..liked how u involved kria in the wedding...

and yeah can understand vishaka's situation too, being a spectator of someones hurt feeling's is really a tough job...and its worse when u know both the sides of the coin...I agree to that. I suppose I can do justice to her character as I can personally connect to it 😆

all in all...long and a fast pace update...thanks for the pm...Thanks!! There will be many fast pace updates back to back for some time..

Originally posted by: asmaju

Amazing Update dear...-- aww 🤗

Aww I loved it very much..
this was perfect..
The feel great .Im really glad to know :D As always 😛
And the way the Shoes were kept into font act was fabulous..
Twists me not going ton tell..
Dimag mai bohut sare aa rahe hai..hehe you will just read then ;)
Swayam drop-ping Sharon..Aww I so feel I could see such scenes soon..YUP
Those cute scenes increase the charm of the show..Ab I'm surely planning to do few things..aww!
Koi CVS ko bulao..Plz unhe yeah padao...Please koi kar do 😆

Rey remembering Kria ans the Diwali moments..Having the pics and the sweet memories..
Kria's reaction to Smritti was bit pensive I n feel..
I mean cant Smritti feel ki Kria is upset and at-lest tell her the truth for the decision... ruko kahi yeah tho twist nahi hai nah...SHHH! 😆☺️
And Vishika noticing Rey..I don't have words to explain how happy i feel seeing the true friend side of Kria <3 Im glad to know that :D

And to note Acha I never though so ki u have discont with the likes cause you are not one to stop writing as such..Yes.. I'm not the one..
And i TOO HOPE YOU GET UP THE LIKES SOON AND nEXT THREAD YAAY Me waiting eagerly...I see 80 likes on last update.. just seen.. it really makes me super super duper happy.

Originally posted by: asmaju

Haan 10 more days..Aaj 10th hai..
Kal woh silly net wqala aalke check marega ki prob kya hai uske anmol net mai..
Baad mai I',m free shayad usse bhi pehele download kar lun agar woh kal jaldi aake check kar lke tho..

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

Awsome khushi Thanks Shaffy!
love da way you made entry of kria in rey's mind Glad to know!!
n his feeling dam awsome Aww thank you!

wah!!! kria soo rude to his mom hehe...no seriously i hvn't xpected dat...bt i lyk da dialouges bold- his? 😆 Well, I dunno... Im not sure if I over did it there or not.. I just thought it was needed as she doesn't know the reason na.. though glad you liked the dialogues :D

swaron track nyc
as usual sweet scenes Thank you ji!
overall awsome update

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Thanks for the pm and awesome update :]

Nikki <3