#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22 - Page 14

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Its ok khushi enjoy urself

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Hey!! Read da whole FF today in a go n loved it to da core😳 dat was fabolous piece of work👏 don't hav words to define😊 b/w update soon n pm me too wheneve updated😉

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Waitin eagerly fr d update 😊

Originally posted by: sweetcharu

update

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First thing- first. My Christmas breaks are on! So I'm free till like after New Year. I can give many updates 😉
So there goes Taani's entrance. She's neither a friend. Nor his sister 😛 And new SwaRon track starting as well. Little something on Smriti-Kriya as well. I'm sure you'll have it guessed 😃 Can I get some honest views on Taani? Forget about her character in the show. Like I've said, she's nothing like the character in the show. I want to see some honest comments... Also, for SwaRon too please? That will really help me shape SwaRon track properly further 😳
Thank you so much for the 80+ likes on the last update! It really made my day when I saw it. It's been a while since I got that. Hope it continues 😳 It really does encourage me to continue. So thanks to all the like-rs, comment-ers and silent readers alike.
Now can I get maybe more or same likes and comments as well? New update with at least 70+ likes 😳 And comments, the more the merrier 😉
Many want Kriya back by New year. So my only advice is, that'll only happen if everyone continues to read and like and comment regularly 😉 😛
Like + Comment guys! 🤗Love, Khushi.

sorry for short comment...

My lucvk saves me..
Old time..
back after vaish
Res

From the start this chapter had a different kind of feel ..I dnt know if its with all but S i felt a bit strong feeling.. that was definitely on a good note..
And with the revoving of Vishika moving out after sometime and giving him..
The entry of a new character..By no way could I guess ki you give just a massive entry to Taani..Seriously saying I loved it..That had a very beautiful twist.Thank God woh behan nahi bani Swayam ki..It looaes the feel ki she did something deserving to gain the place so just wish ki she gets a place iof she is deserviong..On a personal front I would also like to see Vishika handle few things here as a head being shown a very mature and handled character here...
Smritti seeing the messages in Kria's laptop...Sorry I felt a typical mothers feel here...Acha now moving that glimpse of Sharon made Smritti thik about her..
The ring aww I loved it..Koi mujhe aise ek ring dila do...
And the shock that he go0t hearing Rai prakash..it was very intersting..
My goodness I thought that u had made a double update par dekha tho note..
I'm seeing 50+likes 2day..hope 70+ comes up in a day or two..

Loved it...