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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

finally read both chapter 3 and 4 and both the chapters are awesome... loved them

in chapter 3 loved rathore's concern for riya and how he yelled at arjun was superb...

what i love the most is riya's unconditional love for arjun despite knowing that he doesn't love her...

after reading chapter 4 all i can say is i just love arjun's character :) the way he came back for her was just fantastic...

that flashback scene when arjun changed riya's clothes was just amazing... loved it...

hope arjun saves riya from that pshyco sikander...

precap seems interesting...eagerly waiting for the next part

update soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Hey... waiting for ur update,...

jaldi do nah!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Hey finally i read it..
really sorry for late comments..
Ariya 😳😳😳 last part was simply superbb..
u portryd d feelings of arjun very well..we can see dat he loves her n relly want her back,he want to gve her all d happiness 😭😭 i hope she'll b fine..
shree-chotu behaviour awwwww it shows there cncern n sympathy 2wards riya....n they r relly upset d way arjun treated her..
finally they got d lead..rathod gave him last chance i know h'll nt prove him wrng..
ohoo arjun know d size of riya's dresses 😊😊😊
A BIG HOW???????????
interrogation part was superbb...
it was bit funny i know arjun was really very serious wen he asked wat if fat or skinny girl turned up??? 😛😛
arjun waz telling him about prfit n loss uff..
Arjun-stonehearted aww loved diz dialouge..
I hope th'll find riya soon..
ariya's flashback..itz amazing..
poor riya shez shivering..😭😭😭😭
he ran back for her aww 😳
hiz care,love can be seen...ariya's hug *happy*
riya's unconscious aww i loved d way arjun handled her changed her dress..he was worried for her..he accept her as his wife aww m damm happy now...her glow was returning back..awww😳😳

precap is superb intrestng..yes yes he came for riya.. m juz waitng for ur next part...n sikender's face :)
tnku for such a nice updatee dear..
*CLAPS* 👏