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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all..

As I told earlier.. BEHOLD!!!

PRERSENTING,

Vidyut Jamwal as "SIKANDAR"

I just LOVED him as the negative lead in the movie, "Force" .. so thought of making him my negative lead too..what say..like it or not? Do tell..

CHAPTER FIVE

(flashback continues)

Soon after few hours, she started to become warm, as she was near the fire, both the fires, the wooden fire and Arjun himself. The colorless face she had, started to become a bit pinkish, the color returned and her form now looked at peace.

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Soon it was evening, the fire died an hour ago even though Arjun woke up several times to add more logs in it but then he too was tired and didn't notice when the sleep took over. Riya wakes up and sees Arjun sleeping on the near by chair and she herself sleeping on the couch. Her head shook a bit and she held it lightly to maintain her vision. Last thing she remembered was she locked in the balcony and then her name being called!

She inhaled sharply as she remembered what happened, He came! For me!

And then she remembered some blurry visions of him calling out to her, to keep herself in conscious. And then she remembered how he rubbed her hands, how much worried his hands were! They were cold themselves but still tried to create warmth. Just for her!

She tried getting up from the couch but before she could get up, she fell back on it. The faint sound of her falling made him jerk up from his sleep.

He bolted up and held her small form to himself. He hugged her, not intentionally though but he did, by mistake, as he forgot for a while that he needed her to be away from him.

Riya closed her eyes and let her heart feel the warmth she wanted to feel from ages, his warmth. She felt his arms holding her like she imagined every night, before sleeping. She just wanted him to embrace her and sleep like this forever! Riya was lying on the bed and Arjun was hugging her. Soon her emotions got turned up and as her heart started beating like a maniac and was on verge of bursting out, she couldn't control but cry out of happiness. She soon sobbed and Arjun held her tighter. Riya too tried to embrace him, but he was so muscular and she was so weak that she could barely move her arms.

Arjun felt her shaking again as she sobbed, he thought she was cold again. He quickly broke the hug and saw her, her tiny nose, red with sobbing. His heart reached out for her and he made her lie on it again as he was holding her a bit above the couch. As the warmth of his arms was removed she felt cold too.

Riya's back touched the cold base of the couch and an unknown fear engulfed her, fear of loosing Arjun again.

"Riya," Arjun asked as he saw and touched her face, "Riya, are you okay?" the love and care was dripping down from each word he spoke to her and Riya again got overwhelmed with happiness.

"I, I – am fine." Riya said, but as her throat was dry her voice was hoarse and she gulped down slowly to make it better so she can speak.

Arjun saw her doing that and rushed for water on the side table. He poured a glass and looked at her, he will need to pick her up, in order to make her drink.

Riya looked at him and then the glass of water. She knew she was thirsty and to drink water she needed to get up, but how? She gathered her courage and tried getting her palms near her waist in order to put her weight on them and get up, she was going well but then she fell on the couch again. Arjun quickly held her up and made her sit by giving her the support of his hand. His hands on her waist gave sparks to her veins.

From the other hand Arjun fetched the glass and made it lay on her dry lips, Riya bowed her head down and tasted it, it felt like heaven, water never tasted so good! She then drank it like a thirsty baby. It was like she hadn't had water from ages! Some of water drops slipped out and formed a line from her lips to her chin. She was so thirsty she bent her head more into the glass in order the access the liquid on the bottom but Arjun took the glass away and poured again in it, so that she can drink nicely. He held her back firmly, and the glass on her lip made him feel jealous. He wanted to take it away and break it! The way she was trying to lick it!! DAMN! But then he thought- What am I thinking!?

She finished drinking and took a deep breath, she was weak and tired. She laid her head on his shoulder and partly on the hand he was holding her back from. She was now at peace. Her thirst, both of water and love, started to get fulfilled.

Arjun slowly as if she is the most precious thing, put her on the couch again and covered her with the blanket. He saw the drop of water still lying on her lip and some on the lower part of her face.

Nasty drops! Get outt!! Saying so in his mind he took his back of the hand towards her lips and cleaned them, removing even the traces of the droplets being there. His heart swelled with pride as he saw the angel in front of him belong to him, and HIM only!

Felling his hands lightly resting on her cheek, Riya tried to wake up and speak.

"Arjun, sir- don't leave me." she said in a weak voice and Arjun came forward towards her face and assured her.

"I am here," his breath tickling on her nose, "I will always be here." Saying so he leaned and touched her lips with his lightly, very lightly. Riya's head moved up a bit, so that she can touch them again. Arjun saw this and smiled a bit. He again touched her lips with his and moved away. He saw her eyebrow twitch in annoyance. He was enjoying it, her desperateness.

He then spoke on her lips, so that she can fell him saying the words, "Riya, I am sorry." He said and closed his eyes as they became teary by seeing her in this pain. Riya tried to say that she was fine and he should not feel sorry, "sir- arj-sir," hearing him call him with that formal salutation again panged a pain in his heart and he didn't wanted to hear anything further, so he kissed, he kissed in her remaining words.

His hands found his way towards her face and he held it firmly and kissed her deeply. Riya too was feeling it happen and tried responding back. He took in her lips and was just licking them in, trying to show his love, not dominance.

Riya too kissed him back and he couldn't hold on any longer, if he did, he will not be able to take her right here on the couch. He needed to let go! He felt her warm lips touch his for the last time and she drifted off to sleep.

Arjun on the other hand came back to his senses and moved away frightened as if stuck with a 1000 volts of lightening. He went away and saw her. She was fine now; he doesn't need to be there now. She will be all right.

He lit the fire again on the fireplace, incase she felt cold. And went away in his gym area. To bring out all the anger he had, but today he had that anger on himself!

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It was evening of the third day now.

After a whole day of useless investigation, Arjun was in his gym, thinking where Riya will be, in which state, in which type of circumstances! He was sweating and the sweat beads were falling from his face and rolling down his body. His track pants and vest fully wet with it. It looked liked he had a bath with his cloths on. But this sweat was not out of workout, but out of tension. He was so nervous plus worried for her. Once he finds her, he is not letting her out ever! She will be here, locked in this house, with him, forever.

He punched the punching bag like he was imagining it to be Sikandar. He was punching it so hard that his knuckles were swollen. And the hand cover he used as punching gloves, were now half torn. With every single punch he was cursing himself, why did he do what he did! Why did he make her go away from him ever, when all he wanted was to love her from the start! He ever so selfishly made her go away and look, she is so far away now that he can't even find her!

He regretted every single moment he spent without her. He was so engrossed in his own world that he didn't even had time to see her for days! Why he dint paid any attention to her. Why he abandoned her so badly. WHY!?

He was punching the bag so bad that he didn't hear the phone ringing. He heard it on the third ring and controlled his breathing. And picked up the call.

"Hello" said Arjun as he took a long breath, hoping it to Rathore's.

"You stressed already! Well don't blame me, I am not the cause, she is!" said the voice and the voice was Sikandar's, he said as he saw Riya lying on the ground, dressed in a light pink gown, suiting her complexion.

"Soon it will be your turn to be stressed and I promise it will be cause of me!" said Arjun, as he held the phone closer to his ears.

"Oh well, I will wait for that day but I am a bit unsure of it happening." Said Sikandar.

"Me too coz I have no interest in making you stressed, all I am interested in is taking your life."

"Arjun, Arjun, Arjun! Do you know, I so love your attitude and I am kind of in love with your wife too. Ah, my heart reaches out for her every time I see her." said Sikandar in a tone like a teenager in love, provoking him.

"How I wish I could shoot your dirty heart until I see your soul leaving!" Arjun said gritting his teeth, terribly angry.

"ow, that hurt!" he said faking himself to be hurt by his words, "I didn't even touched your wife till now, just so that you'll be happy to know she is untouched, but you! You are so stubborn on provoking me! Don't you know the consequences?"

"Oh no Sikandar. Perhaps, you don't know the consequences of touching MY wife!" said Arjun but was a bit relieved by hearing that Riya was okay and Sikandar didn't—

"Temper, temper! Do you know Arjun, the only thing I like in you is your temper, the way it burns with the tiniest of spark! Its just amazing." Said Sik smirking at him and Arjun could hear him smiling.

"If you think it burns, then the day I get you, I will be on fire, and you, in hell! You have my word on that!" Arjun said smirking himself, as there was a silence on the other line, "what happened Sikandar, counting the person who may be eligible enough to accompany you in there!"

"I would have been disappointed if I didn't had a word with you Arjun! You give me strength to be evil, you know!" Sik said and mentally winked at him.

"What do you mean?" the calmness and the humor in Sik's voice was making Arjun's leg go cold and his hand shook at holding the phone to him. What was he trying to do? What is he up to!!

"Lets play a game, Arjun!" said Sik and the sickness was evident in his voice, "the old game of 'hide and seek', usually children play it, but since we are men, lets change the rules a bit, how's the idea, hun?"

Arjun knew there was more to it then it seemed, there is certainly a new way around to the thing he was trying to portray.

"Come on! Don't be a spoilsport! Agree to the game, Arjun! You know I don't like to make people agree to me, it makes me evil and it pains them a lot!" said Sikandar and saw Riya moving a bit from the ground where she lay. Sik smirked and went near her, she was lying on her stomach and her face was not visible. Sikandar held her hairs in his fist and yanked her head up, Riya, feeling the pain, cried out and Sikandar made Arjun hear her cry.

Hearing her helpless cry for help Arjun's anger roared and his veins tightened inside his body.

"I WILL PLAY!!" barked Arjun on the line and Sik smirked again.

"I told you, I don't like to make people agree to me." and smirked.

"Okay! I will! Now tell me!" Arjun said in desperateness, as he knew the game was not about hide and seek only, he needed to seek something else, coz he had played this game before, with him, but that time, it was not for Riya, and whatever happened with her, will not happen again, this time he wont let history repeat itself, and certainly not with his Riya.

"What is there to tell? You know the rules, don't you? Ah don't tell me you forgot!" said Sik faking his concern. "Okay let me tell you yet again!" saying so he started, "I will tell you a place where I have kept your girl. You will have to find her in 15 minutes. You can do anything! Any superpowers, Arjun?" his voice holding the poisonous sarcasm, "and that girl will be in that place, tied and drugged! If you fail, the girl is mine!"

"NO!!!" Arjun roared like a hungry lion and his fist clenched as he literally imagined Riya to be drugged and tied somewhere.

"Oh yes, Arjun Rawte! And I am so punctual in my timings, you lost with a mere second last time, don't forget!" Sik smirked as he said that and Arjun's face fell. "Your time will start when you reach the place. Don't forget, the second you place your leg on the ground of that place, your time will start! Hurry up Rawte! She's waiting." Saying so Sik touched her cold cheek and Riya couldn't do anything as she was drugged.

"Wait!" Arjun said, "which place!? Tell me which place!??" asked Arjun urgently.

"ahh, ask your techno guy, Arjun! Its been more than a minute he would have traced me till now, if he doesn't, too bad." Saying so Sik cut the call and Arjun's heart came up to his mouth.

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Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago
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Arjun searched for his phone in his room when he heard it ringing. He saw and it was Shree already.

"Shree!!" said Arjun as he was out of breath.

"Sir! It's the maze! It's the COTTON JOY Park's maze. His phone was tapped and traced successfully. We are reaching there too." Shree said as he packed his bags to go.

"NO!" Arjun said and Shree came to a sudden halt, "Sikandar would be watching me, if he found out that I took any kind of help, he will kill her before the time is out. I can't risk it. Be where you are! Just keep tracing my phone, DO NOT follow me, just keep a trace." Said Arjun urgently as he changed his gym cloths and stuffed his gun inside his pant.

"Ok sir!" said Shree and opened his laptop again and started tracing his number.

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The cotton joy park's maze

(It's an imaginary name and scene, the credits of the pic goes to the uploader. Just imagine the bushes/wall of the maze to be taller than 8 feet.)

Arjun drove off like a mad man and reached the cotton joy park's maze. He saw the maze walls, it was tall enough to cover him, he knew Sik chose this place coz it was impossible to find Riya in here in 15 minutes. He would not be able to see across the maze as the walls were tall enough and without anything else, he might not be able to-- NO!! I will find her! I am enough to turn impossible into possible just for my love, my Riya! Arjun heart directed him and he took two big breaths, as he knew Sik would start the timing a sec before he put his feet on the ground. He took his watch and made a timer of 15 minutes so that he knows how much time is left. Taking a large breath in, he opened the door and slipped out the car and in one moment was in there searching her.

The maze was already empty and there was not even a single person for his help. Sikandar! He has made a full proof plan.

Arjun entered and without wasting time he started going here and there in the lines of the maze and started searching her. The walls! Dammit! Can't they be a bit lower! Arjun cursed the tall bushes-cum-walls and looked around everywhere.

He ran on the narrow spaces between the two bush-walls and chose a left route when there was a division. He looked back as to from where he came in and found himself to be lost too. He then thought of concentrating on the task in hand and was taking random routes to search her.

"Riya!!" he kept his hands around his mouth to scream louder, "RIYAA!!"

He ran inside the maze looking out for any hints or any type of footprints so that he can see where they may lead him. But no hope. It was cemented ground and no footsteps were visible.

"RIYAA!!" he screamed again, and Riya who was tied and was drugged, tried looking up from the ground. "RIYAA!!" came the voice again. Her heart swelled in pride as she recognized it to be Arjun. She tried her best to turn around or give him some kind of call, but no. Her brain was drugged; she wasn't able to make any type of noise. Her mouth covered with fat cloth, didn't help.

She tried hard and moved a leg merely. She tried getting up and standing so that maybe Arjun would see her. But her body was feeling too weak to move. She made a throaty noise but it was barely audible enough. "RIYAA!" came his voice a bit nearer! She screamed inside to her brain, her heart screamed to her body to show him some sign at least! She made a throaty sound again, this time trying louder, but Arjun was far from its reach.

It was 10 minutes now, and no clue of her. Not even a single noise came to his ears. The cold chilling breeze touched him as the horrific thought of loosing her came to his mind. He quickened his steps and tried looking with wide eyes; he cannot afford to miss even an inch!

Soon both Arjun and Riya heard the sound of thunders, was it going to rain!? Arjun looked up in the sky and there were no traces of lightening. The sound kept on increasing and Arjun came to know it was no thunder; it was the sound of helicopters!

Soon two big helicopters were seen flashing their lights in the narrow spaces of the maze, to find her. Riya looked on the sky with hope, now she was sure, Arjun will find her!! Soon after a minute or so a light flashed on her eyes, nearly blinding her, she closed her eyes and it felt like the light scanned her being.

Rathore!! Why don't you understand!! Said Arjun to himself and ran a frustrated hand in his hairs.

Soon Rathore was heard speaking on the microphone from one of the helicopters, "GOT HER!!! Arjun, she is there! At the other end, turn 3 'o' clock and head straight up to the 5th wall of bushes. You can movethrough them! Hurry, we have surrounded the place!" Arjun didn't want him to come but when he came to know where Riya was, he couldn't help but tear the walls and move through them. He, with scratches and cuts moved through them and crossed the fourth wall soon.

"THERE! Just one more wall, Rawte!" said Rathore from up and Arjun impatiently moved through it too. He moved in and saw here and there, THERE! He spotted her. She was there; nearly 15 feet's away from him, dressed in pink below-the-knee gown, tied in white color cloth, lying on the cold ground. Arjun without wasting a second, walked to her, Riya too turned her head and saw him coming. She was happy as ever and seeing him after ages was ecstatic!

She smiled and Arjun too fastened his pace and walked, he walked as his legs dint support him now, they were as if jammed by happiness.

She was merely 8 feets away now, his legs felt heavy but he still continued to walk.

Arjun's mind making a word with his heart that now she wont be away from his sight! Ever! As Arjun continued to walk, his instinct came to life, this cant be this easy, there should be more to it that it seemed! His brain questioned but his heart blinded by what it saw, Riya, she was in front of him! In front of his eyes!

The distance was merely 5 feet now. But soon there was a white smoke everywhere. It was as if it covered his eyes. He waved his hands in front of his face to manage his view on Riya but soon the place where she was lying, opened like an underground door and she was swallowed inside. "Riya!!!" screamed Arjun and tried running to her. He fell down to the place that opened and swallowed his beloved in front of his eyes! But it looked as if it was locked again! He stood on the ground and banged his fists on it, trying to open it but nothing happened, soon everything seemed to have turned white and Arjun lost his conscious, lying on the same place as Riya.

Rathore who was watching from above saw the whole maze thing going white and the green walls too turning white in fog like smoke and their eyes from Arjun and Riya were blocked.

Soon a team of officers, wearing the oxygen masks entered the maze. Rathore and Shree accompanied them and led them where they saw Arjun to be. As they reached there the contagious smoke drifted a bit and they were able to see him lying on the ground, in the same place where Riya was and was swallowed inside the ground. Arjun was unconscious and was taken to the hospital soon by Shree and Rathore tried examining what he saw and what really happened.

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Arjun was taken to the hospital and the doctor examined him. After few minutes he came out and saw the whole ETF standing to know how was Arjun.

"He is fine, it was nothing but a chloroform smoke. He is unconscious still, and would probably take 2 hours to come in conscious." Saying so the doctor left and Rathore looked at Shree dejected.

Shree too looked a bit overwhelmed with what happened and hugged Rathore.

"Will we ever find her?!" said Shree as he sniffed, "she was in front of our eyes!"

Rathore hugged Shree tightly, as for the first time in his life; he had no words to inspire his team.

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After 3 hours.

Arjun's mind saw the same scene in which the ground swallowed Riya and he woke up with a start. He sat on the bed and for a minute his mind wondered where he was and what happened. Rathore saw this and came forward, "Arjun." he kept an assuring hand on his shoulder.

Arjun remembered everything and came to his senses. He removed his hands and stood up from the bed. Seeing this Shree and Chotu came up to him.

Rathore said, "Arjun, I --"

"DON'T!" Arjun cut in the middle.

"Listen to me--"

"No Rathore!!" he said and looked at Shree, "I told you to not to do anything! You still sent him there and not only him, the whole force!" Arjun said as he remembered Rathore saying that they have surrounded the place.

"I –I dint tell him." Said Shree, as he was scared of Arjun's anger.

"We all heard it when Sikandar called you!" said Rathore defending Shree.

"Then you would have heard it too that I told Shree that he must be watching me!!!" said Arjun to Rathore, extremely angry.

"But I wasn't able to sit there knowing Riya was out there and she needed to be saved! We covered all the areas!" Rathore defended.

"I was there to save her!! And did you really think Sikandar is so foolish that he wont be able to make a back up plan!!" Arjun said, "come on Rathore he is not a primary kid, he is a high profile criminal, for god's sake, you cant trap him just like that!!" Arjun argued.

"I was worried!" accepted Rathore. "Riya was like my sister and knowing that she was there in maze, shivering in cold, asking for our help! I couldn't control myself from going!" Rathore argued as well and Arjun too knew, when it came to his sister, Rathore was so emotional. And he really considered Riya as his sister.

"We lost her! He will harm her now, will he?" asked Shree meekly.

"No! He won't." said Arjun and Shree looked at him not believing, "Sikandar does everything for fun and entertainment. He wont harm Riya until I am there to see it. He wants to harm me in spite of harming Riya. He knows, it will hurt me the most if I SAW her dying in front of my eyes. So he won't kill her until he had his full entertainment done!" said Arjun as his eyes shone with utter disgust.

"So, does that mean he will call you again?" asked Rathore.

"Yes, he will. To get another dose of his entertainment! He will! He will HAVE TO!" saying so Arjun looked forward to his call.

"By the way, what happened at the maze, sir?" asked Chotu and Rathore looked dejected. Arjun too, threw a glance at his direction.

"It was an underground vault." Rathore explained, "We blasted the place where Riya was found and found an underground passage that lead us to a passage of 5 kilometers. It opened in a cave type deserted place. There were marks of a car found, we are examining it."

"No use, the car would be in ashes by now." said Arjun, "he is too clever to make these first timer type mistakes."

"Nobody is perfect sir! He must have left something behind, a trail, a mark, a clue, anything!" Said Chotu positively and Shree too joined him.

"Yes sir, we wont even leave an inch to find any damn clue about Riya! She was there! We can't just sit there knowing she is in the same city, doing nothing." Shree said and Arjun got a new hope, a new ray of tiny hope, that with himself and his team, HE WILL FIND HER!!

Just then, his phone rang.

"Hello." Said Arjun and indicated Shree to tap it down.

"Cheater, cheater. I didn't know policemen could cheat too."

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PRECAP:

"There are hundreds of boats!" said Shree looking at the all-colorful boats infront of him, "how will we find her!"

"Just imagine Riya lying in one of them, you will know how." Said Arjun determined to find her.

"We are not going away from this place without taking her with us." said Rathore and Chotu nodded.

"For Riya! I will tear down each boat." Said Arjun and everyone nodded to him.

"You can't break our boats!" said a fisherman.

"Just watch me!" said Arjun challenging him. "I will pay you ten times your boat might cost!" said the prince inside Arjun, and his eyes said it all. The madness in them made the fishermen shiver in fear.

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hey all..

I know I am late. Sorry.

But here is the part..and I hope you like it.

Please read and reply. And if you guys are thinking, the answer is "YES I am turning way more greedy for comments!!" *evil laugh*

And those who are leaving small replies- *double evil laugh*, please leave a big reply.

And I promise, one of the coming parts will be sent in PMs ONLY! So if you want to read it, please leave a reply. And then after that don't PM me or ask me to PM you that part, coz it will be gone! So silent readers, leave a reply!!! Or else miss an Important part!..i mean it!

To all who commented, I am sorry I would not be able to reply to your comments! I am really sorry..i have a terrible cold from 2 days and in my place its chilling and freezing everywhere. Whenever I try to write down some thing, my fingers turn cold and move on their own accord! I hate it! aah! I am sorry again to these people who left a really heart warming reply to me! Sorry folks, I cant reply back, but your replies touched me my heart.

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MUSKAAN.

Edited by MastiMuskaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow sikander is looking so cute😆

arjun hugged riya,so sweet,arjun supported her and made her drink water,oh ariya romance,loved it

oh arjun tour yhe ounching bags, the was intersting,but again he was near her but he missed her😭

oh he called again,and u ended their,now he should find her between hundreds of boats precap is intersting .

plz continue soon and eagerly waiting to know wat will happen will he find her or

amazing and intersting update👏
continue soon
thanks for pm😊


Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
!!!!👏!!!!!!

update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
Omg that was awesome ... 👏
I was literally sitting at he edge of my chair ...
It was just amazing 😊
I just love the flashback scenes ... They were fantastic ;)
Omg I really can't imagine ACP Arjun Suryakant Raute jealous of a mere glass n drops of water 😉
But waittt !!!! When did Arjun play did this game "hide and seek" game with Sikander 😲 and who is this someone else ???? N is "she"the reason for Arjun's indifference for Riya ??? 😕
I was literally jumping when Arjun saw Riya ... I really thought that he would save her ... But Damn It ( in full on rathod style 😉 )!!!!!
Love the way the team is concerned for Riya n are determined to save her 😃
Heck this Sikander is tooo smart !!!! 😡
Now what will happen ?????
Yayyy !!!!! Arjun is again gonna act as a Prince 😉
I can't wait for the next update 😊
Edited by Gurmeet4Drashti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first thanx a lot for the pm😊
loved the whole part😊
poor riya is still in sikander's clutches😭
loved arjun's determination a lot👏
rathore and shree are so caring
last but not least even loved sikander's game😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally got a chance to catch up to ur ff. i really like how the ff is going poor arjun is struggling to find riya and riya is helpless she cant do anything. hopefully arjun finds riya soon and finshes skinader's chapter soon. there is no way arjun would leave skiander once he catches him. then arjun needs to make it up to riya for all the pain he has given her
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Posted: 12 years ago
I waited for this update for ages...
Loved Ariya romance... Superb writing...
I guess u fully justified "intezaar ka phal mita hota hai.."
Par ye toh kuch zyada hi mitha hai...
Loved each an every part of it... i loved riya's confidence in arjun...
n thank u for choosing vidyuth as sikander... i think he did a superb role in force... n cant be a better villain to compete Arjun..

Eagerly waiting for ur next part...!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update dear..!
arjun love n care fr ria awesum..
arjun so tensed!!
Siki ne pehle bi arjun se kisko cheena h ??
siki drug ria!!!!!!!
ye kya game tha pehle bi arjun har chuka due to sec!!
Oops arjun helpless!!
loved d etf concern fr arjun n ria..wow!!
siki do everything fr entertainment..!!!
siki called them cheaters!!
i knw siki get what he deserves frm arjun..
hate siki!!
precap interesting..
get well soon dear..!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey.. I m new to this forum.. First of all, i want to thank you for writing such a beautiful story.. I read all the parts at one go.. Ur story is a mixture of suspense,thriller n romance , just like the show.. U have beautifully shown two facets of Arjun... His love n concern for Riya as well as his reluctance to show her.
I m waiting eagerly for the next update.. The way u r greedy for the comments , the same way i m greedy for the update..
Thanks again..

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