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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing post...the scene where she was cold and he tried to warm her was super cool and romantic...he was jealous and angry with the glass...that was so different and wow what an idea!

i liked sikandar in this story...devilish and handsome...cool!

and the place where he calls Arjun for the game...wonderful awesome idea again...a maze...

waiting for more plays and to know how Arjun will get back his Riya from Raavan's clutches...
cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Muskaan.. Thanks for the PM..

Finally caught up with all the parts.. Girl, you had me on the edge of my seat with each update!

I really appreciate the gradual transitions in their characters.. Just hope, the Prince finds his Princess right away! Oh and Vidyut as Sikandar!! Killer stuff! That just made the chase all the more interesting!

Riya, I'm done pitying her.. There's only so much a woman can possibly take.. And she has endured it all..😭 I soo wish she is united with her husband asap!

Well for Arjun, he isn't a perfect man.. He's flawed and slightly disturbed.. 😉

But then, that's the beauty of their relationship. Both willing to keep aside their whole selves and uniting as one..

Please update sooner, next time.. Can't wait to read more of it!
Great work.. 👍🏼

Love,
Avantika..


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Posted: 12 years ago
it was realy a thrilling roller coaster update... Sikki s really a crooked cunning player... hw dare he make Arjun life miserable😡... Poor Riya feeling really bad for her... loved the romantic scenes 😳... if he love her then y did he keep her away from him???? i understand Rathore was worried abt Riya bt still if he dnt do lik dat Arjun might hv rescued Riya... oh no wait Sikki vl defo cheat...😡. b/w who was Sikki mentioning abt??? was dere sum1 else in Arjun's life??? is it coz of wat happnd to her Arjun was behaving lik this to Riya so that Sikki wnt hurt Riya??? Wat is Sikki goin to do nw???? i knw its goin to be much difficult this time... why s he hell bent to make Arjun's life miserable???
Wat am i doing??? i was supposed to comment nd this look lik a question bank😲😲... Plz dnt mind... update soon... Thnx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaani dil khush kar diya...first part mazedar
second part uff arjun ki desperation ne hila ke rakh diya


well as for comments and likes you deserve it😛

love ho to arjun and riya jaisa

wow super awesome

good job dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT... LOVED IT!!!
SUPERB YAAR!!
THE FIRST PART WAS SO ROMANTIC!! COULD ACTUALLY VISUALIZE IT!!
NEXT PART... OMG... THE MAZE PART WAS SUPERB!!
LOVED THE TEAMS LOVE FOR RIYA!!
PLS DONT FORGET TO PM ME THE NEXT PART!! PLEASE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb...no words to describe arjun's helplessness and pain...very well written...nd thanx for the longgg update...nd eagerly waiting for the next update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update really emotional one. hope arjun finds his riya soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it..
Thanks for pm
Hope you feel good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG wow!! wht an update..:) it was fab nd amazing :) lovd it :) very-well written.. lovd da FB scenes... nd how arjun goin through any cost to find riya.. FF is getng intrstng ..:) continue soon :) nd thx for da pm :) nd yeah jus lovng rathore nd shree.. how dey r showing concrn for riya.. was jus awesome :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesome. Loved the flashback scene and the maze scene was mind blowing. The precap has me very excited. Thanks for the pm and the amazing update.

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