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jazz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#101

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con 😭

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#102

heres the next part

recap-nimmo finds out that she is pregnant and kunal-nimmo r officially seperated
both walk out of the lawyers office both r sad
nimmo notices kunals sadness and asks-tum itne dukhi kyun ho, tumhe toh khush hona chaiye ,afterall ab tum aur natasha ek ho sakte ho
k-haan woh toh hai per ek dost, i mean tumhari adat ho chuki hai na, nimmo i'm gonna miss u
n-mein bhi kunal,per adadt ka kya hai woh toh badal bhi sakti hai haina, jald hii tumhe nats ki adadt pad jyegi, phir tumhe mujhe yaad karne ka time nahi milega
k-aisa toh kabhi nahi hoga
n-acha thik hai ab chale, mujhe packing bhi karni hai
k-tum kaha ja rahi ho
n-kunal, mein apne ghar ja rahi hoon,
k-per tum miltii rahogi nah
n-huh
tehy reached homme and kata ben was ready with all the bags all the family members were also present
nimmo went to all of them to take bessings
she went to varsha chachi who was angry
n-chachi maf nahi karengi, ek hii toh galati hui nah
v-nahi nimmo tujhe naraz hoon kyun ki tu humko chod ke ja rahi hai
n-chachi mein aap sabko milne aya karong
next she went to shradha,dadi, pam and all the other members
dadaji was upset but couldn't help imself and gave the belssings
then nimmo-kb went
kunal felt bad because nimmo didn't say bye to him, he went after her
k-nimmo, nimmo ruko
n-kya hua
k-tumne mujhko bye kyun nahin kiya
n-woh, woh kunal mein bhul gayi
k-wah, kaisi promise nibhai tumne hi kaha tha nah, ki tumhe meri yaad ayegi itni jaldi bhul gayi(in a hurt voice)
n-nahi kunal aisi baat nahi hai
k-toh kaisi baat hai huh mujhe batao
n-woh kuanl, bas aise hii
k-nahi batao
n-kunal, mein tumse bye nahin keh sakti afterall sabse ache dost ko bye kehna bahut difficult hota hai, aur agar mein roh deti doh tumhare ghar walon ko shak ho jata nah
k-hey i'm sorry(taking her in is arms, for a moment he felt that he wanted this to last forever, he felt so complete) aur yeah u where right hum toh milte rahenge phir bye kyun kehenge
kb-(in tears) wah tum dono hii ek dusre ko miss karoge mujhe koi miss nahi karega
k-(opened his other arm)
kb-acha jaldi chalo isse phele yaha pe baad ay jaye
k-kyun
kb-arre yeh roti bahut hai na toh pani bhar jyega
k-wah kantaben pehle baar apne mere hote hue nimmo pe joke mara
kb-yeh pehle aur akhri bar huh
and they left
k-(he felt as if his heartwas going away from him, he wanted to stop it but his mind said something else, cos he didn't want to disturb the flow of things, so he just let go)

orgight guys tell me how it was hope u liked t 😳

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chat_222

@chat_222

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Posted: 19 years ago

#103

It was good, I like the way you express the character's feelings in words. 👏 👏

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kaira11

@kaira11

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Posted: 19 years ago

#104

great part !! amazingly written 👏

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 19 years ago

#105

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazing now kaannu baby will know how much he luvs nims plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon i wanna read kannu baby remembers nims how cooooooooool dat would b plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon

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masala

@masala

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Posted: 19 years ago

#106

awww... after reading this part, i actually feel like crying 😭

sadness all over... hopefully, they will get reunited SOOOOOOOOOON

keept it comin' hun =)

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#107

thanks for the replies guys really appreciated orhgt heres the next part

recap-nimmo left the house, kunal sort of misses her
nimmo and kantaben reached their house
a-beta hmm tumhara kamra saf kar diya hai aur tum unpack kar sakti ho(he tried to sound happy, after all no parent wants their daughters house to break)
n-papa
a-nai bete mein khush hoon, ki tum ab humare sath rahogi bilkul phele ki tarah, yeh ghar tumhare bina adhura tha na isiliye
n-papa, mujhe pata hai ki aap khush nahi ho, per hum kya kar sakte haina jo usko manjoor(pointing to god) hai wohi hota hai, humare hath mein kuch bhi nahi hai
a-bete mushkile toh ati rehti hai, hum use muh toh pher nahi sakte nah , bas baki mushkilon ki tarah yeh bhi kar lenge
(and they hugged)
nimmo was unpacking in her room and suddenly she felt like throwing up she went and came out the bathroom
kb- was looking at her suspiciously
kb-nimmo tu mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai
n-masi woh (and told her the whole pune night and her and kunals decission)
kb-mein toh kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki kunal aisa karega
n-massi isme kunal ka fault nahi hai mera hi decission tha
kb-haan haan tu toh uski hii side lege naah, aakhir itna pya jo karti hai usko,
n=massi karti thi
kb-muhjse jhoot bol rahi hai, teri yeh nadani haina tujhe bahut bhari padegi
n-masi aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga
kb-tujhe pata nahi hai akela parent hona kitna mushkil hai, aur zyada der tak tu kunal se yeh baat chupa bhi nahi payegi, tum dono agar milte rahoge aur achanak tumhare pass bacha hoga, nimmmo kunal ke pass chota hi sahi dimag hai
n-massi baad ki baat baad mein, meine kuch socha hai, agar mein mumbai se dur chale jaaon toh
kb-haan, aur gharwalon ke bina reh paegi
n-masi ab itna kuch dekh liya hai ki ab koi farak nahi padta, aur abse meri priority sirf yeh bacha hai
kb-tu jaegi toh mein bhi jaoongi tere sath,
n-acha ab so jaye
kb-woh kya kehte hai good night and sweet dreams

kunals room
k-kk mujhe help karo nah mein kya pehnu
kk-sir party mein jaane keliye
k-nahi sone keliye
kk-(shocked out of his wits) sir aap thik hai,
k-kyun
kk-after all aj aap free hain i mean nimmo nahi hogi nah apke sath
k-isilye
kk-what
k-mera matlab hai adat ho chuki thi uski, aue phir party karne ka mood nahi hai
kk-kyun
k-tum sawal bahut puchte hoo jaldi se mujhe night suit select karke doh
kk-yeh
k(making face) aaww tumhari choice aise kyun hai
kk-sir
k-mera matalb hai nimmo toh phele try mein hiii mujhe convince kar dete thi, uski choice achi thi
kk-sir ab itni raat ko mein nimmo ko toh nahi bula sakta nah
k-per mein toh ja sakta hoon nah
kk-what
k(stormed out of the room with five might suits)
kk(still couldn't digest the shock)

oright guys tell me how it was hope u liked it

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 19 years ago

#108

wowwwwwwwwwwwww da end was so sheweet he went 2 her wid 5 diff suits how sweet yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon i hope nimmo woont go far from him 😭