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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
sorry for being late guys heres the next part

recap- nimmo told dadaji everything and now they r waiting for his decision
downstairs
nimmo and kunal r walkinmg down the stairs and kunal is kinda scared he is holding nimmo's hand tightly
n-kunal, mera hath
k-oh haan (still didn't let go her hand)
n-kunal dard ho raha hai
k-yaha muhje itna tension hai aur tumhe dard ho raha hai(realised he is holding her tightly its red)oh sorry
kb-arre chalo nah idhar koi show chal raha hai kya
when they reached downstairs kunal -nimmo-natasha where standing in one straight line
kb saw these and whispered to kunal, idhar koi military wala aya hai kya
k-kb, apke joke puzzels abhi nahi, per kyun
kb-tum tinno attention mein ek dum straight line mein khade ho isilye
k-haha bas , ho gaya
kb-haan(stood folding her hands

d-mein apna decision puri baat jaan kar karoonga
k(whispering to n)puri baat, tumne baatayi nahin
n-batayi toh thi, per pata nahin
kb-mujhe pata hai, dadaji ki haina short term memory sirf adha ghanta tikati hai
k(kunal made a tired face)
d-meine nimmo se toh baat kar lii,per mein tere moh se sunana chahta hoon kunal
k-ji dadaji, jo nimmo neh kaha woh thik hai, we tried our best to make it work dadaji
(and he told the whole story)
kb(whispering to nimmo) yeh kunal tere se bhi achi acting karta hai
d-natasha,kya tum kunal se abhi bhi pyar karti ho
nats-ji dadaji
d-thik hai ab tum logon ko jo karna hai karo, mein kuch nahin khaoonga, mujjhe sirf isi baat ka dukh hai ki nimmo yaha se chalee jayegi(and he went to his room)
dadi-pam-pushi- where so happy, they didn't had to do anything and still nimmo is going that was biggst gift anyone can give them
dadi-kunal-nimmo, kya tum dono ko ye hi manjoor hai
kb(in her mind) toh kya itni der se fairytale suna rahe thee)
k-ji dadi
dadi-oright then mein apne lawyer se baat karti hoon
kb(budhi ke maan mein toh ladoo phut rahe hoonge)
and all left
in kunal-nims room the whole gang was their (kk,rishab,nats,kb)
r-arre bhai solid acting kii seriously woh dialouges ek dum real lag rahe thee
kb-haan per starting toh nimmo, ne kii nah
r-but phir bhi bhabhi(some how he was use to it and always felt like saying nimmo bhabhi), sorry i mean nimmo neh toh dadaji keh samne kaha, bhai neh toh puri family ke samne
kb-per honsla toh nimmo neh badhaya nah
n-bas karo aap dono, jhoot kisne acha bola yeh janane mein lage ho.(she felt bad, about lying)
kk-arre jo hua acha hua aakhir socho aap dono ko 6 mahine jaldi chutkara ek doosre se
k-hey nimmo don't feel bad, everything is going to be fine,huh
just the varsha chachi nad shradha entered

oright guys tell me how it was hope u like it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
awww... it's entering into a very critical phase. i realllllllly like how u r handling this situation. awesome... plzzzz keeep posting!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
sorry for the delay guys here is the next part

recap-dadaji gives the decision in kunal's and nimmo's hands, they r all happy about contract marriage ending atleast they r showing they r happy just then varsha chachi and shradhha enters
v-kya fine ho jayega kunal,sach kahoon mujhe tum dono ke iss faisle se bahut dukh pahuncha hai,koi bhi ghar mein khush nahi hai
n-chachi woh
v-rehnede nimmo mujhe pata hai isme kiski galati hai looking at natasha
s-kunal-nimmo mujhe tum dono se baat karni hai
(all go out)only v-s-k--n r their in the room
kantaben coming out- aaj toh kunal pukaa gaya, itne dinno baat usse koi datega
r-kya kantaben
(in the room)
n-chachi jaise aap natasha ko samaj rahi hai waisi woh nahi hai isme uski ya kisi ki bhi galati nahi hai sirf halat aise hai, um dosh toh kisiko nahi de sakte nah
v-mein aisa nah samju toh kaisa samju, jab tak natasha nahi thi tum dono kitne khush lag rahe thee
n-sirf lag hii rahe thee nah, chachi woh gharwalon ko dukh nah ho isiliye,per puri zindagi natak karna aur jhoot bolna toh galat hua nah
s-beta mein toh sirf itna kehne ayee hoon, ki tumhare iss faisle se koi bhi khush nahi hai, per tum thik keh rahee ho, tumharee zindagi hai, per jo bhi karna soch samaj kar karna kyon ki rishte todna toh bahut asaan hai,per unhe bhulna bahut mushkil

n-mein rishte tod kaha rahee hoon, bas unke maynee badal raheehon apki bahu nahi toh kya hua beti toh rahoongi nah
s-(cried and hugged)
k(in his mind) wah sab log nimmo ko sympathy de rahe hai,mere barren mein toh koi sochta hi nahi
(v and s go out)
n was sad
k-wah nimmo itne sarre logon ke hugs aur pyar mil raha hai ek tarah se acha hua nai
n(sad)
k-hey meine kaha nah sab thik ho jayega
n-per mere sathh humesha aisa kyun hota hai, mein hii kyun sabki umidon aur emotions ko tod ti hoon
k-hey its not your fault kaha nah, yeh toh ek din hona hii tha nah, aur halat aise thee ki, ab hum kya kar sakte hai
k-hey sab hugs ke sath yeh hug bhi u will feel betta(opened his arms)
k-u feel better
n-thanks
kb-kya kunal kaise rahee, kitna bola varsha chachi neh
k-woh apki tarah thodi nah hai, unhone toh sirf pyar se samjhaya
kb-sha yeh varsha bhi nah mujhe kuch sikhana padega
kb-ah nimmo hum anand ko kaise batenge
n-(had no words aur solution to reduce anyones pains, she felt helpless)


downstairs sumone was sloving problem for her aur actually worsening the situation
pam chachi was on the phone wiht nimmos dad


oright guys tell me how it was hope u liked it 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
aaaghh..... stupid pam!!!!!

i realllllllllly like how this situation is transitioning. keep posting. great job!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
heres is the next part

recap- shradha and varsha try to explain kunal-nimmo their mistake, nimmo still worried how to explain it to her dad, pam has already informed anand in a rude way

n(gets a call)hello
a-nimmo
n-papa aap
a-beta mujhe tumse baat karni hai kya tum aur kunal abhi aak sakte ho
n-haan abhi ate hai

k-kya hua
n-papa ka phone tha,hume waha bulaya hai
k-kyun
n-pata nahin kafi tensed thee
k-kahin unhe pata toh..
n-(just looked miserable)
(they went)
entered the house and all were tensed
n-papa kya hua sab log aise tension mein kyun hai
a-bete tumhari parminder chachi ka phone aya tha
n-(closed her eyes, she knew that something bad was coming)
kb-whispering to kunal, tumhari chachi kabhi sudhrengi nahin
k(feeling really guilty)
a-kya ye sach hai
n-kya papa
a-mujhe parminder chachi per bharosa nahin hai isiliya tumhe puch raha hoon
n-ji
a-huh
n-papa woh...(stumbled couldn't get a word out of her mouth)
a-her silence was piercing, he understood what she meant to say, bete kya galat hua tum dono ke bij
n-woh papa, hume kudh pata nahin chala ki sab galat kaise ho gaya, bas duriya badti gayi
a-aur tumne kuch nahin kiya, aur tumne kunal tumne toh kaha tha nah ki mein apki beti ka hath nahin chod sakta, aur bahut kuch woh saare vadein kaha gaye
k(kunal was speechless and confused what say)
n-woh papa, explianed the whole story what she said to dadaji
a-toh yeh sab kiski galati hai, tum batao hume kaisa feel hota hoga jab hume yeh pata chala ki tum dono alag ho rahe, tum dono hii itne ache aur understanding ho, phir kya hua nimmo,mujhe batao
n-papa app hii kehte thee nah koi bhi insaan bura nahin hota, waise hii isme sirf halat ki galati hai aur do insan bhale hii kitne ache kyun nah ho, woh sath mein ache se reh sakte hai, woh hii toh shadi mein matter karta hai nah.
a-toh tum log neh aise halat paidah hii kyun hone diye
n-humne koshish ki per jab bhagwan ko yeh majoor ho toh phir hum kya kar sakte hai
a(just went inside)
(kuanl-nimmo-kantaen left)
kb-bichara anand kitna dikhi tha na aur yrh sabki jad nah yeh hai (pulling kunal's hair)
k-isme meine kya kiya, sab kiya pam chachi neh kiya, ajj toh mein unhe puch ke rahoonga
kb-dekhte hai, dekhna haan nimmo yeh jayega pam chachi ke pass waha dadi hogi toh goodnight kehke wapas ajeyga
k-kantaben(looking at nimmo) hey kya hua
n-itna kuch ho gaya aur keh rahe ho kya hua
k-nimmo,i'm sorry per ek nah ek din toh yeh sab hona hi tha na
kb-arre kya um sorry ka natak leke naith gaye, jo hona tha ho gaya ab bas aur rona dhona nahin
k-pehli baar kuch sahi bola
kb-aur ek sahi baat boloon,
k-haan
kb-tumhare pass ekta kappor ka number hai kya
k-kyun
kb-arre dekh agar tumhe dadaji by chance ghar se nikal de
k-kb
kb-arre sun toh, haan toh tumhe koi job chahiye nah ,aur nimmo toh waise bhi job karegi, toh mein tum dono ko ekta kapoor ke waha pe bhej deti hoon,nimmo heroinr ki tarah achi acting karegi, aur tum hero ki tarah khade rehna
k-wha kantaben wah, itna chota sa taunt marne ke liye apne itni badi story create ki, mein toh apko scriptwriter banoga
kb-taunt samaj mein aya nah, toh mera sawal ek crore ke liye tu, anand, dadaji, yah gharwalon ke samne apna muh kyun nahin kholta chup chap statue ki tarah khada kyun rehta hai
k-woh, mujhe spontaneusly kuch suhta nahin hai
kb-yeh hindi mein jawab deh nah angrejh
k-matlab achanak koi sawal pujhe aur mein jawab nahin deh pata, matlab story nahin bata pata and any ways nimmo is doing a good job
kb-haan samaj gayi,tu toh apne kapde select nahin kar sakta story kya banega
k(shook his had in irritation and looked at nimmo, who seemed least interested and was looking out of the car's window and was silently crying, he felt bad and didn't know what to say, so he just let it pass)

(and hope he doesn't let nimmo pass from his life)
oright guys tellme how it was hope u liked it

Edited by sufi89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow... very well written dialogues!!!! realllllllly goood. keeep it coming'

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