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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
hers the next part

recap-pam told anand and kunal-nimmo explian to anand, he is quiet upset, kunal is angry on pam chachi
kunal-nims-kb enters
k-pam chachi
p-kya hai honey buns koi problem
k-apne nimmo ke papa ko bataya humare barre mein
p-huh- nai, hmm
k-apko pata tha nah, ki unko heart ki problem hai, aur phir bhi
p-per unhe kuch hua toh nahi nah, why do you want to make a big deal out of it
k-chachi, because it is a big deal, nimmo ne kaha tha nah, ki woh waqt ane per bategi, phir bhi u had to tell her father
dadi-kunal yeh koi tarika hai baat karneka
k-haan, per chachi ko bhi hak nahi banta ki woh nimmo ke papa ko batayein
p-per kisi na kisi din toh pata chalne hii wala tha, infact tumhe toh mujhe thanks kehna chaiye after all tumhara ek twnsion dur kar diya
k-chachi, apko mere aur nimmo ke mamle mein interfere karne ki zaroorat nahi hai
d-kunal, tum jao mein pam se baat karti hoon, iss waqt tum bahut gusse mein ho hum baad mein baat karenge
k-ji dadi
(in kunal's room)
kb-dadi ne kaha aur tum aa gaye, wah
k-kb, mein toh rukta per mujhe aur koi dialouges nahi mile
kb-ek baat kahu, tumhare ghar mein nah balioon(hair) ki lenght ke hisab sse dimag hai, dekh tumhari teen phate haal aur tum chote baalion wale, dhang (proper) dimag nahi hai, aur rahe chand ke tukde woh log kisi mamle mein padte nahi hai, toh sabse inteligent aur samajdar sirf varsha aur shradha nai
n-kya massi
shradha came in
s-beta mein aur kuch kehna nahi hati thi per jis tarah se tumne parminder ko data, nimmo ki wajah se mujhe bahut acha laga, tum dono mein itni understanding hai phir bhi kyun alag hona chate ho
k-phir wohi baa, aaj jo meine kiya woh,dosti ke nate kiya, mein aur nimmo, abhi bhi dost hai, aur faisla ho chuka hai nothing can change it
(shradha went out heartbroken)
nimmo kal hume lawyer se milna hai woh divorce ke silsile mein mein office se sidha jaoonga aur tum ghar se pahonch jana
(next day)
kunal in lawyers office
k-yeh nimmo ab tak aye kyun nahi
l-koi baad nahi, mein aapko saare procedure samjhadeta hoon (he explains) so isiliye divorce papers taiyaar karne mein kam se kum bis din lage gen aur uske baad ki procedure toh easy hai
k-20 din thats to much(actually he felt good he didn't know why but he didn't want to go through this procedure, he thought maybe its to hectic thats why but their was something else...)
l-ji saarkari kam hai isiliye
(in the evening)
k-nimmo tum kaha thi aye kyun nahi
n-woh kunal mein hospital gaye thi
k-hospital kyun, sab thik toh haina, kise admit kiya hai
n-kuanl mein apne check up ke liye gayi thi
k-tumhare checkup ke liya, kyun tumhe kya hua, r u alright, tum thik to ho nah, kuch ulta toh nahi kha liya, mein keh raha hoon nah tum apna bilkul khyal nahi rakhti
n(placing hands on kunals mouth)kunal i'm fine i think food poisoning ho gaya tha thats why nothing major, aur phir tum meri itni chinta maat karo, agar adat pad gayi toh problem ho jayegi
k-hey,nimmo u alright nah
n-haan baba sab thik hai, bas reports ati hogi tab dekh lena okay
bell rang nimmo went to get it
it where her reports she opened it and she was shocked

oright gys this was part i hope u all liked it tell me how it was
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
i m sure she is pregnant.
cool
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
oh boy... here comes the biggest shocker of all!!!!!!!!!
i wonder why she hasnt visited the doctor in the real show. i like the pace of ur story. keep it up! it keeps me engaged. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#94
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar amazing
nims got pregnent huahaaaaaaaa 😊 i hope
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
plozzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
heres the next part

recap-kunal oes to the lawyer for divorce papers,lawyer says it will take 20 days for them to get ready, nimmo visits hspital for her check-uo and is shocked to find the result of her reports

n(thought to herself)mein pregnant, nahi this is not possible, she again read the reports (yeh sab tumhari wajah se (talking to god)tum toh aaj bahut khush honge nah, jabki khush mujhe hona chaihye tha, yeh kaise halat pada kar diye hai tumne, jisme itni achi khabar sune ke baad bhi mein khush nahi hoon) kya iss waqt kunal ko batana sahi hoga, aurr meine hii toh usse kaha tha ki sab bhul jay aur phirmein kaise ja sakti hoon uske pass jab nats-aur woh itne khush hai, nahi mein un dono ki khushi nahi jin sakti, mujhe yeh sach chupana hoga aur yaha se jald se jald jana hoga
(went upstairs)
k-hey kya hua itni der kyun laga di
n-huh kuch nahi bas aise hii
k-kya hua itni pereshan kyun ho
n-kuch nahi kunal
k-reports ayi
(she was actually surprised that kunal remembered and asked so caringly)
n-haan
k-kya hua bahut buri khabar hai
n-nahi infact bahut achi hai, likha hai ki kunal pehle se kitna badal gaya hai, dosron ki care karta hai, ladkiyon ke sath flirt karna bhi kum ho gaya hai, yeh sab change kiski waja(kunal instinctively thought nimmo)but nimmo replied 'natasha'ke ane se itna kuch badal gaya wha kya baat hai
k-bas thik hai, reports mein kya likha hai
n-arre batay toh sahi
k-seriously
n-nothin major food poisoning hii tha and now every thing is fine , acha tum batao lawyer neh kya kaha
k-huh, nothing
n-what nothing, kuch toh kaha hoga
k-huh, haan usne kaha ki divorce papers taiyar hone ,mein bis din lag jayene, oth thoda delay ho jayega
n-itni si baat, arre tumhe yaad nahi hai humare pass already divorce papers hai
k-huh(he didn't like the fact, well he still didn't know why)
n-arre tumhe yaad nahi hai humne shadi ki raat sign kiye the
k-yeah, si tumhare pass har problem ka solution kyun hota hai
n-kya
k-matalb hota hai
n-never mind so jao
k-goodnight
n-goodnight
(next morning they went to the lawyer with the papers)
l-kya baat hai kunal sir aap toh ek dum age nikale bis din ka kam ek hii din mein, apne lawyer bane ka socha hai
k-shut up aur baki formalities puri karo
l-arre sir majak tha anyways, isme toh already aap dono ke sign hai wah
(he did the rest of formalities)
l-okay so now u r officially ex- husband and wife
i know bad joke anyways ab aap yeh bandhan se mukt hai
(none of then where happy, kunal was still confused abouth is feelings and nimmo had accepted kunals love for natasha, but both still shared same feelings unaware)

oright guys tell me how it was hope u liked it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
oh wow... i m glad u remembered that they signed the divorce papers the night of their wedding!! i dont think the actual directors remember doing that... LOL!!!

very good story. i realllllllly like your treatment of every single delicate situation. plzzzzzzzzzzz keep posting as frequently as u can bcz i WILL always keep reading it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww gr8 part well done 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi,
I really luv ur fanfic. Its great 😊

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