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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Loving how this story is progressing. Amaaazing.

God bless

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Rayolight

@Rayolight

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Super update. Both characters have been so well defined that sometimes I prolly know what is going to come next in a dialogue or scene. Everything is brilliantly thought of...and Arnav...oh this Arnav is getting under my skin too!

Can't wait to see how they get to know each other and get comfortable with themselves together. I can understand Khushi's weariness knowing Arnav's reputation and knowing that she has none of that.

Loved it and waiting for the next!

Cheers!

Rayolight

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

Arnav is soo nce! Very nive convo ! Awesome

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Such a cute n sweet update Kalyaani.

When he repeatedly spoke about them living together, she did not know if he was joking or was serious. In both cases Khushi was unsure about her response, she wanted him just as much but was fearful of her numerous insecurities. One strong one being her lack of experience, she did not want that to put him off and strangely she thought it would.She lacked the courage to be bold and take the next step, as she often thought not because she did not want to, but because she did not know how to.Khushi is so innocent,simple n naive in thinking all this bcoz she doesn't know dat this is one of d main reasons Arnav loves her so much.

N finally Arnav asks d impending question which was spiralling in his mind n mine since last few updates regarding d non receipt of a gift from Turkey.N Khushi answers him as straight forward n simple as always.Instances like these make this story more special bcoz it feels real n not a fiction.👏

Arnav is so cute...d way he reminisced abt their initial interactions n d way he used to trouble her bcoz as he said she affected him from d start.❤️

He wants to restrain his physical desires n instead spend some quality time in knowing Khushi.

she gave his hand a gentle squeeze to draw his attention back to her. "I am unable to word this well, you only look that relaxed around your father and that makes me feel less important" he said this with such childlike frankness...

Beautiful Kalyaani...it was one of d best updates of this ff for me...one which starts from warming ur toes n eventually warms ur heart.

Edited by arshiyakanishka - 12 years ago

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

fabulous update, so in love with it:)

like the baby steps they are taking in this relationship and how considerate arnav is to know khushi better before taking it to the next level:)

cant wait for the weekend for them to be together:)

hope u continue sooon

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ruchshah

@ruchshah

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

This one's the closest to my heart story...n i love how Arnav n Khushi are slowly n smartly moving towards a strong relationship!!!

Arnav's reading of the pic was so right on target!!! She's still weary around him!!looking fwd to them spending the weekend together!! Loved how grumbling,growlingly Arnav accepted Khushi's plans n changed his to suit them!!! Wonder when the Great ASR did such accomdation last!!👏👏

Thanks for the email!! update soon!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

That was sweet part

Liking hw Arnav n Khushi bth are trying

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prettypri

@prettypri

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Oh this is a lovely update!

I really like the pace of this story and the details of their relationship. I mean it's not like they met,they argued,they apologise,they fall on love and bam!

The insecurities they feel,the difference in their personalities,what they want,how they go about expressing it,it's all written so well and that makes t more of a treat to read!

The weekend that they plan to spend together should be interesting.looking forward to that!

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LittlePrincess8

@LittlePrincess8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

i just love this piece...a little progress in their relationship...I am so glad that arnav take to effort to know her before taking the relationship further...all these may be small things but big in a relationship...and dont have words to praise you for writing this small but perfect evening of their lives.

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Wow an a update just for these 2? I can't thank you enough...
Khushi's nervous that she's inexperienced while Arnav is expecting them to talk more before taking things forward.. They're weird.. But I like the way you've thought any this. Totally loved their conversations here. Well written!

Thank god you didn't make Khushi's room all pinky and girly.. That would be yucks!

PS: is the weekend coming in the next one? Plz don't make the wait longer! Thanks in advance. Happy 2013 btw!