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Posted: 12 years ago
Jeez!!!!!

There is a confession, finally.
So aptly said , this really was the most awaited chapter.

I did really shed some tears and m quite shocked and sad to see the turn of events. God, The Earl!!! Off course the story may revolve around the main characters Virat and Maanvi, But, then m attached to each character. Be it The Earl or Tanya. I actually feel pity for the poor thing, Tanya. She was not at fault and was punished for a mistake she never did. I do understand Virats condition too, but being a girl myself i will never except what he did to Tanya. I do see that Virat has already repented for what he did. But, you have to pay back for your deeds. And, it turned out to be this way. Fates what else could it be!!!

But, then the confession part made me smile and i was utterly happy.

Indefinite Hiatus!!! Now, what should i say...
I do understand your situation and i know you have a life too , to look after. I m happy that it is not discontinued. At least we have some hopes that you will come back. And, i m happy as long as you give me this hope.

This was the longest and the most memorable chapter because of
4 reasons..

1. I cried hard because even i felt the pain of loss.
2. There confession, which off course was the most awaited , as you said took almost 30 chapters.
3. It was the longest update ever from you which made me so very happy.
4. But, then it made me a little sad too, The Indefinite Hiatus.

So, you see i have mixture of emotions and this can only be instigated by you.

And so will miss you hard!!!

~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update...⭐️! Loved it.. ❤️Tanya was completly broken...n most imp when virat confessed he wouldnt do anything like it to maanvi was superb...~! n unxpected shot...Dadaji knows Virat too well...n before his demise he actualy cleared his head and even let him know he is his fav...n the best part of the Update their Confession...well writtten...fom dailogues to their thoughts...Awesome👍🏼!!! P.S: will miss you and your update...😊
Edited by Syed695 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG dat was amazing... 👏 ahhh i actually felt need for tissue box... 😭 and for a minute I tought Tanya shot Virat but was Earl...😲 poor Earl lost his life for his favourate grandson...😔 loved der last conversation...❤️ n Tanya felt bad for her too she was not at cmplete fault but thngs went wrong... no one was wrong in dis whole thng dat was just tym n conditions...🤔 n d most importantant part VIRMAN CONFESSION ahhh dat was amazingg...👏👍🏼❤️ dis was ur best piece of writing...👍🏼🤗 both are one isshhh 😉 waiting for ur next part... 😃 Thnx a lot fr d p.m... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -ritchelle-

ZAHARA!!! EEEKS!!


THEY CONFESSED!!!! ...


Hey! Ritchelle! I KNOW, they confessed! Haha, finally eh?! I think it was needed at this moment! 😆😳 THis chapter was so long but I can't believe I wrote like 3000+ words all at one sitting! WOW. I'm glad you liked Tanya's breakdown! I thought it was a bit sketchy but I wanted to put in how her breakdown was liked to her paranoia, I know I haven't written it but I guess one can assume that she has some emotional/mental problems...hehehe, my Psychology is coming to use! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal

beautifully written<3
fabulous mixture of romance/love,drama and emotional amazing totally superbb! finally VirMan confessed their feelings to each other but poor dadaji the earl he died due to tanya i felt sorry fr tanya but harming others for the sake of revenge is injustified
amazing
do update wheever posisble and pm
Me please
thanksz xxx


Thank you! I think I'm going to justify Tanya...LOL. What do you get when you lose everything even the love of your life for one lie? Anger, hate right? Well, that's what Tanya is like. She's reckless as Dadaji said. But she's also caring in the fact that she didn't want to hurt anyone, just Virat. But her paranoia and her sadness got the better of her when she accidently shot Dadaji. She didn't mean it, but it happened. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keertu

wow zahara it was awsome.after a long time.it was simply beautiful.the first part was really emotional.

but dadaji got shot i din't expect tis i thought manvi will get shot.u know how to give us shock.
and the last part was full of love.it was seriously a beautiful confession.
VIRMAN are one unique couple.
THANKS FOR THE PM.continue soon.😊


Hey! You thought Maanvi will get shot?! Wow, well, I can honestly say that the real storyline of this FF hasn't started yet. Tales of the Heart. Remember that.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashni0905

Zahara, you going on hiatus? sad but i guess it must be important to you...your story has been so beautiful that whenever you come back, i wud like to start reading from where i left...hopefully u wudnt keep ur readers wait for long!


all the best...

loved this chapter...finally we got virman confession...


Hey Ashni! I'll try my very best to update as much as I can until I leave. I have until mid-March where exams would be on the corner. But I'll try. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Jeez!!!!!


There is a confession, finally.
So aptly said , this really was the most awaited chapter.

I did really shed some tears and m quite shocked and sad to see the turn of events. God, The Earl!!! Off course the story may revolve around the main characters Virat and Maanvi, But, then m attached to each character. Be it The Earl or Tanya. I actually feel pity for the poor thing, Tanya. She was not at fault and was punished for a mistake she never did. I do understand Virats condition too, but being a girl myself i will never except what he did to Tanya. I do see that Virat has already repented for what he did. But, you have to pay back for your deeds. And, it turned out to be this way. Fates what else could it be!!!

But, then the confession part made me smile and i was utterly happy.

Indefinite Hiatus!!! Now, what should i say...
I do understand your situation and i know you have a life too , to look after. I m happy that it is not discontinued. At least we have some hopes that you will come back. And, i m happy as long as you give me this hope.

This was the longest and the most memorable chapter because of
4 reasons..

1. I cried hard because even i felt the pain of loss.
2. There confession, which off course was the most awaited , as you said took almost 30 chapters.
3. It was the longest update ever from you which made me so very happy.
4. But, then it made me a little sad too, The Indefinite Hiatus.

So, you see i have mixture of emotions and this can only be instigated by you.

And so will miss you hard!!!

~Dee~


OMG! Deepika! Wait, have to read your comment again! Aw, I can't believe you too shed tears? If you can shed tears at the Earl dying then what will happen later? I quite like how half the forum is against and the other half is for Tanya. But yeah, you're absolutely right! In fact, I tried to put some social message into these last few chapters revolving Tanya. Whenever something happens to a woman, whether it happens OR not, there's always this stigma attached. How many times have we seen a women raped, become victimised and then seen as the criminal? Tanya sort of symbolises this, we still can't get this image out of our heads. People will still hold prejudices. And that affects a women, whether it means society looks down on her, her family ignore or call her dead or whatever. Tanya was not at fault, but it was just the society. I guess it was Virat's fault but even he was in trauma from the whole Maya thing. I'll try to update as much as I can before I go! And yeah, omg can't believe it was the longest chapter plus they finally confessed! Don't worry, VirMan has a lot more to go before that. A lot more drama which will test their love. I advise you to go back and read the introduction on the first thread. And also, the real story hasn't even started yet! Tales of the Heart. The clue is in there.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Update...⭐️! Loved it.. ❤️Tanya was completly broken...n most imp when virat confessed he wouldnt do anything like it to maanvi was superb...~! n unxpected shot...Dadaji knows Virat too well...n before his demise he actualy cleared his head and even let him know he is his fav...n the best part of the Update their Confession...well writtten...fom dailogues to their thoughts...Awesome👍🏼!!! P.S: will miss you and your update...😊


Thank you Syed! I always thought of Virat and his grandfather being close whilst Viren is close with his Aunt. And it's apt, I guess seeing as in this story Viren is always with his aunt and mother due to Royal duties but then there's Virat with his retired Grandfather. They would always share that special bond.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anchak_kamli

OMG dat was amazing... 👏 ahhh i actually felt need for tissue box... 😭 and for a minute I tought Tanya shot Virat but was Earl...😲 poor Earl lost his life for his favourate grandson...😔 loved der last conversation...❤️ n Tanya felt bad for her too she was not at cmplete fault but thngs went wrong... no one was wrong in dis whole thng dat was just tym n conditions...🤔 n d most importantant part VIRMAN CONFESSION ahhh dat was amazingg...👏👍🏼❤️ dis was ur best piece of writing...👍🏼🤗 both are one isshhh 😉 waiting for ur next part... 😃 Thnx a lot fr d p.m... 😊


Aw! Thank you so much! I think I need a tissue box reading these comments! Glad you liked it so! 😃

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