Res. I need to take everything in. 😆
(Unreserved)
I can't believe I'm so slow. Anywho.. phenomenal chapter. The more I praise of it the less it will be. IT was just TOO GOOD!!
The way you have portrayed Dadaji is great. He's strict but stern and has a soft spot for Virat which I love. His last few words with Virat were so heart-wrenching!! - can I just say! (phangurl moment, right here) I LOVE THEIR BOND!! and I'll definitely miss Dadaji.
Tanya, I seriously never hated her but because she's a bit grey so I get where other people are getting the hatred from. Nevertheless, she has her own story but the way you wrote after she shot Dadaji. Her feeling were put on paper beautifully. And as you said 'she's not a bad person. She was just at the wrong place at the wrong time.'
Then, there's Viren (He's my favourite character in this story as well as in the show). But the way you've put Viren's character to life is just brilliant. Whilst reading, eventhough he's a supporting character. Along with Virat & Maanvi he's growing as a character/person too.
And now, the Virat-Maanvi confession. Man, you wrote that to perfection.
I especially loved this bit. (and phangurled a bit + more)
"I want to tell you something, and I don't know how you'd feel about this but I just have to tell you." He rambled on in nervousness. She nodded at him to carry on. "Maanvi, I ' you changed my life since the moment you stepped in. You changed it for the better. Without you, I would be lost. You saved me Maanvi."
"Virat." She laughed lightly. "You said this before."
I can truly imagine Virat stumbling over his words and Maanvi giving her killer smile (Eventhough I imagine this as Nia&Kushal portraying these characters, you've taken them to a whole new dimension)
Great Job, Girlfriend!! + 5000 words, not even school assignments can I write that much!! You're tooo GOODD!!😃
-Disha
P.S And I LOVE BruCas too. We'll have a chat about OTH some day, yeah?
Edited by RICOPUNK101 - 12 years ago
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