Tales of the Heart #2 | VirMan | CH 42, PG 112 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.


Aishu! How are you? Not on the first page? It doesn't matter! Thank you! I always find faults in my writing but oh well. Thank you so much!

Hahaha glad you liked that tree! Somehow I thought this chapter wasn't up to a good standard. I guess I was just tired and wanted it to hurry up. 🥱


I'm good! :D All well, how about you? It was the same standard. Loved it to the core! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: S.Khan

Ab keh liye res mujhe bohot neend aah rahi hai zahara begum app ki ijazat ho toh main 🥱 kharate mar lun 🤔


I don't know what you said. Are you feeling sleepy?😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sn2012

Lovely update. I love how Virat and Manvi's bond is progressing, can't wait for their love story to begin. Virat's perception of Manvi was beautifully written too. Poor Shiv and Virika, it's sweet how much they tried to help Virman become friends, but you're right they don't need any help. Update soon, looking forward to the next chapter. :)


I guess in some ways their love story has begun, but yes it will get more intense. :) Yes! Being in love, you don't NEED help. It just happens, glad the message has gone through!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aishu_VirMan

I'm good! :D All well, how about you? It was the same standard. Loved it to the core! <3


I'm excellent, thank you! Aw, don't embarrass me. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
i dont hav the words apt enuf and eloquent enuf which can describe the beauty of this chapter...the nervousness , the slight discomfort , the newness of an arranged marriage , the apparent distance...loved the way you portrayed it...the sensitivity that virat and maanvi hav for each other...the way virat cant help himself ...cant stop himself from looking at her astounded and smitten...its brilliant the way you showed the juxtaposition as to hw the world , even the closest people to virman , think that they dont even talk and the truth is something entirely different...i mean it says something abt their relationship wen virat has told her things abt his past that even viren doesnt know...so i loved that subtle irony...the last scne where it starts snowing...it truly felt magical and quite apt too considering virman are themselves magical...
beautiful...beautiful stuff...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki1211

i dont hav the words apt enuf and eloquent enuf which can describe the beauty of this chapter...the nervousness , the slight discomfort , the newness of an arranged marriage , the apparent distance...loved the way you portrayed it...the sensitivity that virat and maanvi hav for each other...the way virat cant help himself ...cant stop himself from looking at her astounded and smitten...its brilliant the way you showed the juxtaposition as to hw the world , even the closest people to virman , think that they dont even talk and the truth is something entirely different...i mean it says something abt their relationship wen virat has told her things abt his past that even viren doesnt know...so i loved that subtle irony...the last scne where it starts snowing...it truly felt magical and quite apt too considering virman are themselves magical...

beautiful...beautiful stuff...


I can't believe just how beautiful your message was! My face literally just went, AW!! 🤗 Nikki, I'm praying for your family so they get through this hard time! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Update
So Sweet Of VirIka And Shiv
True Said Tht VirMan Will Always Find A Way To Be Closer
And May Have Already Fallen In love
Fabulously Portrayed
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thnksz x
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing amazing part... totally loved it... superb... waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you! And if you haven't noticed: I've moved all my stories onto FanFiction purely because I hardly watch EHM anymore and easier for me if all my stories are in one place.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was such a beautiful update Zahara!
I can't find a better word to describe it!

The way phase one of the misssion was successful but at the same time VirMan accomplised it themselves was soo sweet!

I am losing out words to describe your writing girlie!
It's just commendable! <3


Sorry for the late reply! :P

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