Tales of the Heart #2 | VirMan | CH 42, PG 112

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rush007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Superb update, loving the way virmans friendship is blooming . Pray they very soon confess their love for each other. Plz update the next chapter soon,thanks.

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Great Zahara,

It was a really sweet update
So finally Virat and Manvi are in love, hope they realize it soon
Thanks for the PM and please update soon

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ashni0905

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

love your style of writing...amazingly detailed and wonderful...looking fw to next chapter

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Aishwarya

@chasinghope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Not on the first page this time. :( But it's okay, I guess. 😆

I can't stop being impressed by the way you write so beautifully. ❤️ It's just so genuine and amazing, I love each and every thing you write! <3 You should be proud of it, I tell you. 😳

Coming back to the chapter, it was amazing as always.

& this line just cracked me up! I couldn't stop laughing! 🤣

"Why are you smiling, devarji?" Jeevika teased. She looked at the tree. "This is a tree."

"I was just thinking...nice tree." He walked away leaving Jeevika dumbfounded.

Loved how Virat got lost in Maanvi's beauty. And Viren, Jeevika's and Shiv's characters are pure amazing! ❤️

Viren and Jeevika teasing Virat & Manvi was wayy too cute! Awie! Love them both! 😳

Overall amazing chapter, Zahara. It was amazing like always!

Thanks for the PM. Looking forward to your next update! Update soon! <3

Aishu.

P.S - Happy New Year! by the way. 😃 Hope you & your family have an amazing year ahead! :)

Edited by Aishu_VirMan - 12 years ago

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arhifandebi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Hey Zahara, How are you?? How was your trip?? By the way sorry for being late in commenting...😕... and what was that "strawberry shortcake" thing?? Now coming to the update...I really LOVED it as always...Brilliantly written...👏... The way Jeevika, Viren and Shiv were behaving was hilarious..😆... I just wondered what Virat was thinking when Jeevika and Viren were repeating again and again about meeting Manvi after a night...😃.. Their expressions were worth noticing when they saw that Virat and Manvi were already friends while all this time they had been planning everything to do the same... All in all a really nice part...⭐️... Please do continue soon dear... Did you return home? and what about the uni?? 😊

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

loved the snow falling part
awesome part

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bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Hello Zahara,

Sorry haven't commented on the previous update. It was very sweet, the way Virat is opening up to Manvi. The family and friends trying their best to get them together. Really excited for the coming updates. Awesome writing as always :))))

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

amazing update Zahara and lovely one too
Poor virika and shiv they planned 4 virman to made them friends atleast
Ha ha ha... I was laughing and enjoying every bit
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon

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preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Love the update.Love the trio.They took all the efforts to make them talk well to each other, only to find out that they are already friends.Poor trio, but so sweet of them🤗.Loved the bhabhi devar conversation outside Manvi's home seeing the tree. My love for Shiv grows increasingly .Such a good sweet and a true friend.Loved the whole update.Thanks for the pm😊