Lost in Your Eyes Thread 2 (Arshi SS)

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mkd4020

@mkd4020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

and I finally finished reading it... Well does any body else think that the whole thing got over too fast... I mean I just started reading and bham it got over... Well other than this and the length of the updates, I have no other complaints, well you are too good at what you do...
Need I say more the whole story line was just too nice and sweet... And our beloved Arhi going through so much pain to be together, well romantic indeed...
Looking forward to reading more from you...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

jenny,

excellent SS dear

i sincerely wish there was a movie in real life

beautiful story, excellently written

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Take_That

@Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

A potential controversial storyline to begin with... But you have handled it very delicately Jenny. One wrong sentence and there were all possibilities of people getting worked- up about this fic!

The way you handle emotions is amazing. It almost feels like Khushi is your best friend who is going through all these things and a need to console is very strong.

What a wonderful advice from Khushi's mom! She says to follow one's conscience as opposed to her heart, for living against conscience is next to impossible. There will always be a small voice inside you which whispers you were wrong which cannot be ignored. Heart- break one can deal with. Time is the best healer.

You can't build your happiness on somebody else's grave...

Khushi did the right thing by going away from Arnav.. See, they met again too and are together forever!

Loved this!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Really really enjoyed this story
Well done

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Read it one go..Loved it totally

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Awesome story, read all of it in one go and just loved it. Now off to read ur other ff 'the impertanable heart'. Keep writing, cos your writing rocks :)

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

this was lovely Jenny... totally different to The Impenetrable heart

How I wish we can get to see IPK as a movie. Loved how you handled the whole concept and took us through Khusi's turmoil and Arnav's anger, realization that they were both helpless.

Advise given by Khusi's mum was absolutely correct and destiny brought them back together for ever :)

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srishti_jain

@srishti_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Awww!! Jenny, you are a wonderful writer! Your stories are so interesting and engaging! I read this SS in one go! You are absolutely amazing! You so beautifully wrote this story! I almost had tears in my eyes! You wrote what is there in every person's mind who watched IPKKND! I was blown away! Truly beautiful! Everything was so perfect! I love your work! Keep writing always! Wonderful! 😊 😊