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Posted: 12 years ago
i started reading it on a friends suggestion and i am so very glad i did its just fabulous and such a touching story! wonderful :) read it in one go and just totally rocking!! <3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was more than wonderful.. Loved the ending.. Happily ever after... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Do you really know what an awesomeand beautiful writer you are...
MashaAllah..
Read the whole story in two sittinngs...
waao just waao...
would lve to read other stories of yours too...
ab to parhni hi pare gi :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's beautiful Jenny! Thanks for such a wonderful story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
read through all the parts..
the story was amazing👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was done with 90% of this story before I left *slaps herself on her forehead* I should have completed the remaining too. But never mind I have completed this one. But a proper comment for this will come only later :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome SS. I just came across it n read all parts together s interesting. Arshi playing actors in tv serial n their love story. Arshi chemistry their feelings emotions n love came out so beautifully tht it brought tears spl when arnav asks her to come at her farm house n khushi is in dilemma n she refuses to go felt really bad for Arshi.
Also when arnav tried to hurt khushi by marrying sheetal n flaunting their relationship reminded of arnav giving attention to la to hurt khushi so she'd break n confess tht she loves him.
Arnav leaving the party to b there for khushi when her mom passed also was very beautiful yet khushi stood her ground nt breaking her resolve to leave.
Finally arnav reached khushi putting his career at stake just coz khushi meant d world to himn married her in her family's presence n got bck to india ready to take on anythng.

I loved the ending with their serial being produced as a movie with arshi as lead wish tht cud hve hppnd with IPK n cud totally relate to the twins going gaga over arnav n demanding a season 2 in lieu of his shoes.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Truly a fan's flight of fantasy 😉
Everything about this story are the daydreams of every IPK fan.
Can I say that I see a lot of myself in Ria and Rashi? 😆
I loved the way you interspersed IPK with the story... The intense looks, the way he takes his aviators off, the way he picks her up in his arms, a little pulling and pushing...
Everything...
And I gotta agree with you. As I was recently telling someone, if SaRun werent in committed relationships, and if I didnt admire them so much for their loyalty, I would have prayed to the God above to hitch them together as they LOOK made for each other.
Thank you for giving me that here. 😳
And then the talks of season 2 and the movie at the end... What I wouldnt give for either of the two?? Btw, I liked the title of the show... 'Pyar ka Naam' Very interesting 😛
Enough of this. I will come to the actual story now...
The reel and the real. If we fans who live the story on a second hand basis... imagine the actors who live the emotions first hand. It is quite possible to cross the line and live in an illusion.
Only it wasnt an illusion for Khushi. It was a struggle between her desires and conscience which you showed beautifully.
It wasnt an illusion for Arnav either. Why else would he not be able to savour his success without Khushi?
But love conquers all... Sheetal, media... gosspis... everything...
They are together, successful, starting with a family and I am happy... 😊
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Also, thank you for bringing Salman Khan to the story. Many shows rope in Bollywood actors for cameos. For all the love that Khushi had for SK... sigh... thank you for doing that... making SK and KKG meet 😊
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i must have read this story atleast 4 times...i love this story...its extremely cute!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant work.
U r a great writer.
Just loved it.

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