Taarey ff- One touch started it all - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing!! pls do pm me updates
also love ur note 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nyc👍🏼
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i'm in love with ur ff bags😃, it seems very pristine and magical... do continue with this idea , its simply awesum 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys!! ..first of all thank you for your lovely comments & likes it made ma day . ...well here is chapter 1 ...its quite a long update!!but could not help my self (my filmy side kicked in while i was writing it😃😆)

hope you guys like it and hope you don't find it boring ...tried ma level best to express reys emotions and feelings ...pls dont kill me if it did not turn upto ur expectations🤢


Chapter 1-Touch of an angel.

Some where In mumbai s traffic...

Rey (frustrated) : Mujhe yakin nhi ho rha ki mujhe dance workshop se ek week pehle hi aana padha!!gosh !!!Rakshit bhai ki shaddi bhi abhi honi thi! and upar se yeh traffic pechle 15 mins se yaha traffic mai aatke hai...

Rey was frustrated as he had to leave the dance workshop conducted in Bangalore( by worlds best dancers including his idol and role model"Remo d'souza " )early because of his favorite cousin rakshit 's wedding,where in the whole gang was going to complete their workshop and return to Mumbai after a week..It was not like he did not want to attend Rakshit s wedding or he was not happy ,he was very happy that his rakshit bhai is getting married to girl whom he loves.but he was sad becoz he could not complete his work shop..after some time when rey is calm'

Rey: Driver kaka!koi aur route nhi hai jis se hum bhai ke ghar jaldi pahuch jaye and traffic ko avoid kar saqke??

Driver: Nahi betaji!yahi ek raasta hai !!

Rey: sigh!!!

Driver: betaji ap ,apke dosto ko aur dance workshop ko miss kar rhe ho na

Rey : *to himself*hmmm mai dance workshop and gang ko to bahut miss kar rha hu,but bhai ki shaadi bhi important hai ..after all Rakshit bhai is ma fav bhai!! And waise bhi dance workshop ke wajhe se maine unki sangeet and haaldi ceremony to miss kar hi di hai!!

Rey: haan kaka but koi baat nhi .He smiled & Said bhai ke shaadi mai aese jam ke nachunga and dusro ko nachaunga ki dance floor hi tut jayega!pure week ka kasrat ek hi din mai pura karunga!

Driver kaka smiles at this .

He decides to check on traffic so he lowers the car window and strucks his Head out of the Window and looks at traffic in front of him! And sighs again!

Rey(shaking his head):Mumbai kaha se kaha pahuch gaya but Mumbai ka traffic wahi ka wahi!!

Suddenly he gets a call from Swayam.he pulls his head back into car but his right hand is on car window ..and picks up the call..

Mean while in an Auto far behind reys car.Taani is getting impatient .its been over 15 mins that she s struck in traffic and her chaddi buddy Leena was waiting for her ..it was leena s mehendi ceremony ..she had to be in leena s house before ceremony starts

Taani gets call from leena ,as soon as she picks up the call

Leena(in an angry tone): Hey tans kaha reh gayi !!pata hai na aaj mere mehendi ceremony ha!!mai kab se tumhare wait kar rhi hu..itna time toh tumhe jodpur se yaha mumbai mai ane mai bhi nhi laga jitna tumhre hotel se mere ghar ko aneke liye lag rha hai...mehendi shuru hone mai half hour hi bacha hai and tumhara to koi ata pata hi nhi hai..

Taani: Arey! leans mai traffic mai phas gayi hu pechle 15 min se..traffic clear hone ka naam hi nhi le rha!

Leena(angry tone) : I don't care tum traffic mai phasi ho ya kahi aur ..i want u to b here in 20 mins! And she hangs up the phone

Taani: leans?leans??/* to herself*/ Ufff yeh ladki bhi na.. ab kya karu?

She luks here and there Then she spots a auto stand near the signal i.e Few feet ahead!!Taani pays the auto fare to the driver and removes her high heeled sandal and holds them in right hand and starts running bare foot ..

Back to Rey

Rey: hello swayam kaisa hai tu?danceworkshop kaise chal rha hai?

Swayam: haan yaar sab thik chal rha hai..bas sab koi tumko miss kar rhe hai!!

Rey: mai bhi yaar tum sab ko miss kar rha hu..but kya karu bhai ki shaadi miss bhi nhi karsaqta tha..

Swayam(chuckles): Ab tu shaadi mai ja hi raha hai to apne liye Girl friend dund le..waise bhi kitne din akele rehega?

Rey: SWAYAMMM!!!!MUJHE NHI BANANI KOI GIRL FRIEND ..SHOY FRIEND!!

Swayam: acha baba !!thik hai shoy friend mat bana but girl friend to bana le and starts laughing.😃😆

Rey: SWAYAM!!😡

Swayam: acha baba tease nhi karunga,but yeh baata agar tumhe koi pasand agayi to??mera matlab kisi se pyaar hogya to?

Rey: yaar tum to jaante hi ho na ki mai pyaar mai believe nhi karta and I don't feel ki I will fall in love!pyaar n mujhe IMPOSSIBLE!!

Swayaam: rey pyaar kabhi bhi ,kahi bhi ,kisi k saat ho jata hai..and tumhe paata bhi nhi chalta'uske bina ek pal bhi nhi raha jata ..sirf wohi dikhayi deti hai..jab uski haar ek cheez magical lage to smhj lena pyaar hogaya..

Now taani s near rey s car ..rey was busy on the phone his hands were still on car window when he felt a soft hand that of a girl brush against his hand,for one moment He felt electric pulse pass through his whole body , he was so stunned and mesmerized by a touch(Na na na softversion BG tune from pyaar ki yeh ek kahaani is played). He had never felt like this before though he had touched many girls hands (either accidently or during a hand shake) before but this touch was different one, A touch that made him feel light as light as a feather ,He felt like he knew that touch... Immediately rey look s out of window and few meters ahead he sees a girl in blue spagatti strap anarkali dress with golden embroidery running in opposite direction (rey was not able to see her face..as rey was facing her back )towards the auto stand which was near the signal..

Swayam still on phone: REY! REY!??REY tum sun rhe ho??REY!!???😕

But Rey was lost ..rey could not stop him self from admiring how perfectly her dress fell around her slender and slim body☺️.. she had waist length brown wavy hairs..her silky hair were bouncing up and down as she ran as though they were small waves hitting sea shore..then he saw she was holding her high heeled sandal in her right hand'he could not help him self from smiling..he felt every thing about was mesmerizing the way she ran ,the way she held her sandals ,the way she was pushed her hair behind her ears as the wind played with her hair , he felt like even wind wanted to her touch her as much as he wanted to touch her.he thought she must be an angel coz everything about her was mesmerizing and magical.. and he remembers what swayam had told him about love..realizes he is in love with that girl!!he kept on staring his angel as she made her way through traffic gracefully..he was spell bound!!!

A loud voice calling his name brought him back to his senses..It was swayam who had been calling out his name frm past five minutes .suddenly it hits rey that he has not seen his angels face..and doesnot know any thing about her .how will he find her?

Rey:swayam mai tumhe baad mai call karta hu!!n cuts the call..(swayam wonders ab isko kya hua?😲)then Rey runs after his angel...when he was crossing the road he saw his angel call for an auto(still he faced her back) then she put down her sandals ,stooped and started wearing her sandals..he walks slowly towards her.then she gets into auto and says..

Taani: Bhaiya! dollars colony ke pass wale MG road le chaliye..

Rey hears her say this ,when he is about to go near auto in which taani was seated he saw an anklet at same place where taani had stood to wear her sandal ,he picks up her anklet just then auto starts to move he starts running after auto shouting ruko ruko ruko!!

But unfortunately neither auto driver nor taani hears him ..he chases the auto for another half kilometer..and stops when he looses the sight of auto..

Rey:shit!!maine usko Kho diya!!😭😲

Rey was standing there breathing heavily after he gave a wild goose chase to auto..

He turns back and is so damn frustrated that he kicks a huge stone and hurts him self..But he s least bothered about pain!all he can think about is that girl.he is wondering what to do ,and how to find her! he thinks its over he should forget abt her.. but He is unable to forget that touch .

Rey: DAMN!!AB MAI USKO KAISE DUNDHUNGA??

People around him give him a wired look.. he clutches her anklet against his chest and feels a lump in his throat ..when Suddenly Rey remembers the address which his angel had told the auto driver his face lights up ..out of excitement he yells out aloud

"YAHOOO!!!AB MUJHE APNI ANGEL SE MILNE SE KOI NHI ROK SAAKTA!!"

and starts laughing manically😛😃

People around him give him shocked expressions n one of them slowly wipers lagta hai is ladke ko doctor ki zarurt hai isko kuch hogya hai..rey hears it n smiles n says "haan mujhe kuch hogya hai par, mere dimag ko nhi mere dil ko" mere dil mai chemical locha hogya hai!!I m bitten by love bug!!!mujhe doctor ki zarurt nhi mere angel ki hai!!I'M IN LOVE!!!

People around him smiles at him n wishes him luck!!

Rey is smiling widely!!

Precap:

Rey: /*to him self*/bhai ke shaadi ko aur do din hai almost sab tayari hogayi hai..mai mg road jar ha hu'

Mai arha hu meri angel..

Ur anklet will lead me to you!!

...

Edited by bags07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
just loved it.

and like your filminess too..

Rey was mesmerized by beauty of Taani ..

Hope rey will get soon his angel.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wooowww !!!! Amazinggg start !!! I can't wait to read more !! U write sooo well :) plz update jaldi
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bags u did an incredible job it was beautifully written if I'm not wrong Taani friend Leena is getting married to Rey fav Bhai lol wow am too excited to see what happen when these two meet. Omg Rey is already in love lol. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey bags!! welcome to the TaaRey crazy fans group!! 🤗

OMG !! WOW ur FF is damn awesome !! i just luv the concept !! IT WAS FABULOUS FANTASTIC AMAZING AWESOME ETC! u r a great writer!! ia m sooo intrestted in this FF now soo u better keep updating fast!! as i am tooo impatient 😆 n do dooo pm when u update!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg bagzz.. Sooo beautifully written... Loved it loadzz... Do update soon n PM me x 😊

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