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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
hi
first of all thanks my dear neelu for dedicating this up for me
and for ur wish too
now coming to the part
its really good
sujal being the gentle man whereas kashish playing the part of heroine
fun to read
poor him ran from there
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Hi...lovely ppl...wish u a Merry Christmas and a Happy new year...This part is specially dedicated to Priya for her bdy...(I know I am late)...but still...wish u a very happy bdy Priya...also...apart frm tht...this day is so spcl coz its my mom's bdy...so this part is also fr mom...happy bdy mom!


PART 20

s- I am going. This isn't even funny any more

k-Funny??????? You think I am joking?

Sujal apna briefcase uthata hai and chala jata hai

k-You think I will joke about your love life?

He goes leaving her shouting and ranting..

Kashish ne bhi darwaza band kar dia, aise kaise chilla dia, thik hai she commented on his personal life, to kya hua, utna to hakk uska banta hi hai

Raat mein bhi Sujal call nahi karta Kashish ko

Ek to wo thoda frustrated hai with everything plus a nagging mom and workload

Kashish call karti hai

s- Hello?

k-Count?

s-Count?

k-CC

s-What are you rambling about?

k-Cigarette count

s- I have much more important things to do instead of counting, now if you don't mind I was busy

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k-Gussa? Are you smoking right now?

s- Kashish I am not smoking, I am busy

Sujal ne Kashish ke phone aane par hi cigrett by involuntary reaction bhuja di thi

k-Koi baat nahi gussa baad mein kar lena

s- Kashish do you want something? Seriously? Coz I really am busy

k-Yes...ummm...are you angry..Sujal??????????? Don't be angry...naa

s- No I am not

k-You are my only friend, please

s-What is it?

k-And you are my bbf too

s-Kashish...get to the point

k-There's no point it's a line; mujhe neend nahi aa rahi

s-Its early to go to sleep study your music

k-Nahi...tum gussa rahoge to neend nahi ayegi. Pyaar se baat karo

s-For the last time, main gussa nahi hoon. Agar tumne ye bolna band nahi kiya to main ho jaunga. Is that what you want?

k-Hmm khana khaa lena time pe, agdum bagdum mat khana, cc count mat badana, bolo haan

s- Fine fine, anything else mom?

k-No baby, take care of yourself...baby

s- Good night mom

She chuckles

k-Good night...beta

They hang up

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Agle din

Sujal Kashish ko call karta hai around 1

k-Hello

s- Hey

k-Hey

s-Kya kar rahi thi?

k-Mom ke saath...hum hamari devrani haara parivaar aur bachche ye serial dekh rahi hoon

s- Should you be watching tv? And how the music lesson coming up?

k-oh haan maine ek jagah phone kiya tha, Monty Coutto. Aaj jaungi uske wahan 7 baje

s-Good good. Best of luck for that

k-Thanks

s-Achha suno, I can't come today. I have a meeting scheduled and it can't be avoided

k-Haan sahi hai, waise bhi mujhe 5 baje nikalna hi hai 7 baje pohonchna hai naa

s-It takes 2 hours? Tum wapas kaise aogi?

k-Arre Monty Coutto apne farm house mein rehta hai. Koi taxi mil jayegi to le lungi, let's see

s- Tum apni mom ko saath le jao

k-Mom ko zara chest pain hai wo nahi jaa sakti. I'll go, tum mummy kyun bann rahe ho? Main koi bacchi hoon jo kho jaungi?

s- What? I can't worry about you now? Aur bachhi ki baat nahi hai...durr hai, farmhouse waise hi isolated types place par hote hain. Tumhe wapas aane mei dikkat ho sakti hai. Aesa karna apne taxiwale ko keh dena ki wo ruk jaye

k-Thik hai

s- And, let me know how it goes

k-ok

s- Bye then

k-Bye bye

Sujal phone rakh deta hai

Shaam ko 10 baje tak Sujal ki meeting khatam hoti hai. He checks the phone for Kashish's calls but there was no call from her. So he calls her. But her number is unreachable. He calls it a few times, but same unreachable

So he calls her home

Ma-Hello

s-Hello aunty, it's me Sujal. Can I talk to Kashish please?

Ma-Arre..kab se tumhara no. dhund rahi thi...kaise ladke ho tum saath nahi jaa sakte the uske

s-Ji? Main busy tha and she said she would manage. Kya hua hai? Is she stuck somewhere?

Ma-Kab se phone kar rahi hoon unreachable jaa raha hai

s-Aapki last baat kab hui thi?

He says getting up and getting ready, getting his wallet his car keys

Ma-Jab jaa rahi thi tab

s-Wahan ka address hai aapke paas?

Ma-Han ek minute batati hoon, chashma dhundne do

Sujal goes down gets to his car

Maa 10 min baad phir bolti hai address

Sujal starts the car drives out

s- Fine I'll go see there what's wrong. I'll drop her home

He disconnects

Sujal wahn pohocha address pe toofaan ki raftaar se car bhagaake

Maa ka phone aaya

s-Hello?

ma-Aa gai Kashish, abhi aayi hai

s-Let me talk to her

Ma-Thak gai hai, jaake so gai hai wo to

s- I see. Would you tell her to be ready tomorrow by 11?

Ma-Thik hai keh dungi

s- Did she get selected?

Ma-Kuch batya hi nahi. Aayi, hath mooh dhoke, kamra band karke so gai. Tum kahan ho abhi?

s- I just reached the farm house and, you mean you couldn't make her stop and answer? Aunty aap ki baat nahi suni!!! Kuch hua hai kya?

Ma-Mujhe to nahi pata

s-Was she upset?

Ma-Mujhe laga thak gai hogi, thaki hui lag rahi thi

s-Hmm, theek hai aunty main kal aunga subah, aap usse mera message de dejiega

Ma-Hmm

Ab maa ko bhi lag raha hai dheere dheere ki ladka time pass nahi hai bass, fikar hai meri beti ki

Sujal ko bhi lag raha hai ki Kashish ka selection hua ki nahi,mann to kiya Kashish ko call karne ka bohot lekin phir maa ne kaha ki. Thak gai nahi pata to Sujal ko bhi laga ki kyun disturb karein

Lekin since wo farm house to pohonch hi chuka tha to usne socha ki yahi pooch le

Sujal ka to waise hi thoda kihska hua sa hai, chaiye to chahiye bass types wala

Pohonchke Sujal ne door bell bajai par gate khula tha

Ghar ke bahar badaaa garden and pool tha, wahin se sab messed hona start hua tha

Sujal ko to smajh nahi aaya ki itna mess kaise, saare log jo interview dene aaye the kis baat par bhadak gaye

Sujal andar gaya

s- Hello???!!!

Ghar bhi waisa messed

Ghar ke wahan badiii khidki, wo banda highhh on drugs...saamne wale tree pe chada hua

Sujal is like ki W*F, ye kya hai? Why is bloody drugee here!!

Usne reference diya tha Kashish ko..surely usne druggi ka to nahi diya hoga and on top of that W*F was the guy doing on the tree

Sujal walks over to the guy as he is curious plus he is worried if they tried to offer Kashish drugs or something. Kashish ka bhi kya pata le liye ho, usse bhi kya pata hogiaki drug asli mein kaisa hota hai ... pada sabne hai par dekha and taste kitne logon ne kiya hai

s-Hey you!

The guy throws his bottle at him

Sujal side steps neatly

s- Hey a**hole!! What in hell happened here?

Sujal ka phone baja

s-Hello?

Its Kashish

k-Maa ko phone kiya tha?

s- Hey how are you? Why is everything a mess here? What happened here?

k-Where? I cleaned my room

s- At this farmhouse where you came for audition

k-Tum?? Wahan kya kar rahe ho, come back

s- I couldn't reach you... I was worried; your mom said she hadn't talked to you either so I came here to find you. What happened here? It's a mess. Was there a riot or something? Did somebody offer you drugs?

k-umm..emm...no

s-Why aren't you telling me?

k-There's nothing to tell

s-Then tell me why is everything a mess here?

k-How would I know, mera ghar hai kya?

s-You mean everything was fine when u left here?

k-ummm...emm...they ewre having a party

s-I see. Why didn't you just leave then?

k-I tried giving my audition but... I guess Mr Coutto was too high on hallucinations

s-You tried????????? You see people snorting powder and you tried giving audition?!!! Are you mad? Why would you even want to work for such a guy?

k-But..main to audition dene gai thi naa, mujhe usse kya wo kya kare

s-Jiske liye kaam hi nahi karna usse audition kya dogi?!!!!

This time he does shout

Kashish chup..ankhein band

k-Par wo gaan kitna acha hai...

She hums a song

s- Do I sound like I give a shit? Let him work however he wants, currently I am going to report him

k-Why?????? Usne tumhara kya bigada?

s-Are you saying that if a person is taking drugs, we should let him? Good if I report him, he would probably get some help. Look, you go to sleep. Tumhe kal milta hoon 11 baje; abhi isko dekhta hoon

k-Tum kya karoge?

s-I'll see what I can do. Bye

He disconnects

Phir awaaz lagata hai uss bande ko

Sujal is worried ki what is he falls down and breaks his neck or spine

s- Oye hero!!! Neeche aa

>>>>>>>>>>>

Next day-

Sujal comes, as he said he would come at 11 am

He rings the bell

Maa kholti hai, muskuraati hai

Ma-Aa rahi hai, baitho. Nahaa rahi hai

Sujal is shocked inside, but outside has a straight face like Mr calm and cool

s-Thank you, aunty

He comes in and sits down

Maa Sujal ko paani laake deti hai

s- Thank you

Kuch der baad Kashish aati hai gile baal leke

k-Chalo chalo. Aaj tum apne judo karate karne nahi gaye?

s- Nope and its Tai chi. You have everything you need?

k-Yuppp

Sujal gets up

s-Chalo

He says to her mom-

s-Aunty, I'll bring her back around 7

Ma-Haan haan

k-Bye maa

s- See I told you, your maa would understand. Tum faltu itna darti thi. Koi jailer thodi hai wo

He says opening the car door for her

k-Maa to kuch aur keh rahi thi

s-oh kya kaha tumhari maa ne?

k-Ye sab ki...

He gets in starts driving

s-Yes?

k-...ki mujhe to lagta hai ki wo tujhe pasand karta hai, kuch kaha hai kya?'

s- I am beginning to like your mom

k-To maine kaha, nahi kuch nahi kaha

Sujal rolls his eyes at her

Sujal keeps on driving and they reach their destination

Pohonch kar-

s- Tumhara number unreachable kyun aa raha tha kal?

She shrugs

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s-What is the meaning of that? Why was it unreachable?

k-I d-o-n-t k-n-o-w

s-You really are stupid sometimes.

Sujal gets out of the car, goes buys the ticket

Kashish to idhar udhar mandraa rahi hai

Kisi ke godh mein baby tha, shoulder se jhulta hua usse khel rahi thi, usse ched rahi thi

sChalien?

k-Huh? Oh haan

She walks film ka poster laga hota hai

She gazes at it

k-Mera fav hero

She keeps on looking

Sujal glances up at the hero

s-You are watching too much tv. Tumahri hi akhien kharab hongi

Kashish ignores Sujal and blows a flying kiss while walking away from theposter

s- You do that one more time and I would start ignoring you

k-Whyyy?

s- Coz you don't do that sort of thing in public nor do you openly drool over a man like that, it says a lot of bad things about your character to any passing stranger

k-I don't care. Khullam khulla pyaar karenge hum donooo, iss duniya se nahi darenge hum donooo

Kashish is all sing song jiggy jaggy

Sujal gives her an incredulous look, phir ignore, nahi pata ki kaun hai

s- You keep that up, main aaj tumhe pehchanne se inkar kar hi dunga fir kahin launga bhi nai. Pata chala tumhara yahi chalta raha pagal khane wale aakar tumhe utha kar le jaye and tumhari maa to mujh par hi chilaayegi

k-Jao jao chod do, abhi chod do. Tata bye bye

s- You think you are so smart don't u? You know everything, you can do everything You can just be a bit humble before making mistakes so you don't make them, but nooo; you have to go ahead and get in a mess and then apologies later and then as promptly forget about it

k-What do you expect me to do? And what mistake did I make? Tum sadu ho uska kuch nahi ho sakta

s-Forget I said anything. Go ahead shout your love out to the poster

k-Yeah I will..what's your problem?

Sujal just turns around, nahi jaanta Kashish ko

Kashish bhi peeche se nikal gai, marne do sadu ko

She had always known how to enjoy herself alone

Sujal jaa kar ek park bench par baitha hai, soch raha hai ki kyun aaya, kyun ladaa, kya farak pad raha hai usse and why can't he just stop being affected ? Saara kaam chod kar raat ko 4 ghante ki drive, phir aaj yahan par bhi bench par baitha hai

It's not like Sujal is jealous ki wo hero ke liye sing kare ya wo uske liye tha, the thing is public embarrassment

Kashish ne to change bhi kar liya in pink spaghetti and short jeans shorts

Sujal to wai baitha hua tha

Kashish dekha pani ko, nikal gai saamne se, main bhi main bhi' karke chad gai ride pe

Sujal dekh raha tha, her going away.

Chadhne do' he thought.. he didn't feel much like doing anything

Kashish ride se aai 1 ghante baad, drenched hoke

Kuch oglers ki to lottery ho gai..akeli ladki dekhke

Tab tak Sujal ka bhi mood achha ho gaya wo baithke chips kha raha tha

Kashish bhi paise laai hai, uske pouch mein hain paise

Usne bhi ice cream li

Ek achi jagah dekh ke wo bhi baith gai chaat ne

Sujal ko Kashish dikh rahi hai baithi hui

Kashish to ghaas pe baith gai, she isn't sophisticated as him

Khaa rahi hai wo mazze se

Sujal can see the men ogling at Kashish also but wo bhi durr se hi dekh rahe hain

Sujale doesn't think ki park mein koi badtameeze karega

Ek street dog kahin se andar aa gaya tha

Kashish ne usse adhi ice cream khila di

Let gai ghaas pe khule aasmaan ke neeche while the dog was besides her having the ice cream

Kashish lag to sexy rahi hi thi gori gori..drenched thoda spaghetti uth gai

Sujal bhi dekh hi raha tha aram se enjoying the view

Kashish uthke thoda dusri side chali gai...away from visibility of Sujal

Sujal utha, thoda chala to Kashish dikhi

Kashish is smiling happily while surrounded by those ogling boys, chit-chatting with them and giggling

s- Socialize karne aaye hai hum yahan?

She looks at him

Boys narrow their eyes

Sujal raises his eyebrow

k-Hey...he is Sujal. Sujal he is Ravi, Manish, he is Prashant, rahul and Mayank

s- Hi

He says muhh pe plastic si smile chipka rakhi hai

Boy-Kashish chalein crazy river mein?

k-Haan chalo chalo

s- You are going with them?

Sujal says, holding her hand

Kashish to zara hairaan

k-Haan [But obvious tone]

s- Go with me

k-Tumhe mujhse problem hai to you don't have to embarrass yourself. My new friends aren't embarrassed by me

s- Friends already? I don't think so. You aren't going anywhere alone with them

k-Mujhe akele akele acha nahi lagta...tum samajhte to...khair chodo...[she looks hurt]///tum samajh hi nahi sakte...I am just an embarrassment for you

s-Main chal to raha hoon saath and agar tum kuch kar rahi ho jo mujhe pasand nai hai to, that's it? Everything is over? No middle roads? You can't even try and think of compromise or negotiation?

k-Why are you blaming me? You are the one who refused to come along, left me alone

She says, visibly upset

s-I was there watching you. Did you ask me to come along? But of course it's always my fault, isn't it?

She rolls her eyes, hands on her waist, shakes her head , turns and walks

Sujal follows her at her heel silently

Kashish goes into ladies room

He waits around

Kashsih aai 20 min baad changed her clothes and starts walking towards exit

Sujal exhales a long breath of air. The day was titled disaster with capital D

He follows her along silently

Kashish stops a taxi

s- You are taking a taxi home? I will drop you.

She walks silently towards his car

Sujal opens the door for her

Kashish sits

Sujal goes around gets in and starts driving

Kashish pure raaste chup

Sujal ne gaana chala diya

Pohinch gaye ghar, Sujal opens the door for her like he always does

Kashish nahi utar rahi

He crouches in front of hers

s- Want to go somewhere else?

k-Sorry for the inconvenience

She says grimly

k-But it won't be repeated...ever

s- I had a feeling you would say something like that

k-Good then. Decided

Kashish utar gai

s- What is decided?

k-That it's the last time

She isn't looking at him..she is looking down

Sujal is confused...if he say no then it automatically means he says yes to her fool hardy ways in the public and trusting on complete strangers and; if he says yes it is... it may come out like both are hedging as to who would bow down first while it is not a competition in the first place...tricky situation

s- What do you exactly mean?

k-It's the last time, you won't be embarrassed. You can spend time with whoever you want and not have to run around me and nobody will disturb you...to hell with doing it the right way

Sujal gives her a long speculative look

She is looking down, nazre nahi milayi

k-Please move

s-I don't want this to be the last time...we can work on my embarrassment issues if you would cooperate and there is no whoever.. you are the one I want to spend time with and nobody is disturbing me

She is looking down..chehra nahi dikh raha her head shakes a little

s-I wouldn't have to chase if you wouldn't run. Why can't we walk side by side?

k-B..because you are Mercedes Benz and I am a tractor

k-Can't we upgrade you a little and downgrade me little?

Kashish nazre churaye sar neeche...jaane ki koshish karti hai par Sujal gaadi se utane de tab na

k-Please..jaane do

s- I can't let you go when you say that this is the last time...

k-I..I am just flavor of the month...

s- You are not

k-Main tumhe samjha nahi sakti...sach to ye hai..it's actually in reality, all my fault

s- oh is it?

He says cheekily

She nods

s-Ye kab hua? Tch... koi aur ladki ne sun liya to tumhara gala daba degi

k-Main kitni bevkuf hoon

She presses her hand to her mouth with her head still down

s- Tum thodi to ho...but then nahi hoti to shayad main pasand bhi nahi aata

k-Hato jaane do. HATO NAAA !!!!!!!

s-First take back all the stupid things you just said

k-Fine I take back. Hato

s- You don't mean it

k-eggghhh I mena it. Hato naa

She hisses

s- Tch so impatient..

He moves aside

Kashish litrelly runs frm thr...darr gai ki kuch zyada zahir na ho jaye

Maa ne door khola to Kashish bhagi andar

According to Kashish problem uski hai

Maa ne poocha ki itni jaldi kaise aa gai, Sujal ne to kaha tha ki 7 baje tak aoge

Kashish mooh chipake baith gai

Maa- Arre kya hua hai? Bol. Kuch kaha kya usne? Kya baat hui hai?

k-Kuch..nahi hua hai maa...kuch nahi

maa-Arre bata kya hua haii...

maa says taking her face in her hand

Kashish's eyes are filled with tears, she shuts her eyes

Ma-Arre beta bol...kya ho gaya?

k-Kuch nahi...kuch bhi nahi

maa- Dekh usne kuch bola hai to bata mujhe, kuch ulta seedha kiya to bol, nahi datungi tujhe

k-Usne kuch nahi kaha...sab meri galti h...maine usse kaha...mujhe nahi...par kyun nahi maanta

maa-Kya nahi manta? Kya hua hai? Kuch bolegi bhi?

k-Kuch nahi...sab..meri galti h...sab...main kitni bevkuf hu

maa- Kya hua hai? Kya kiya usne?

k-Usne kuch nahi kiya sab meri galti hai...sab...sab..kyun hu mai itni bevkuf...kyun nahi samajhti wo ek sapna h...kyun pasand karti hu usse

Maa is jaw dropped

Kashish to mooh chupake let jaati hai

Maa-Tune usse kaha ye? Ki..ki... tu usse...

She shakes her head in reply

k-Aisi bevkufi bhari baat..main usse kahungi kya

Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
good that Kashish call him
Sujal goes for a 4 hours drive just because he was worrried for her
how sweet
druge is a Strange man
so they go to the water park as decided
Sujal gets embarassed n left her alone
n kashish how she can be so irresponsible
wht was she doing with those mans
but shes really cute
they end up on a fight larte bohot hai yeh dono
Kashish love him thats great
i just hope she or he express his feelings
nice part continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
part 20
awesome...
she just like that went to that place?
did anything happen to her there?
or anyone said anything?
she reached safe...
cont soon dear...
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Wish u very happy new yr ppl...have a grt yr ahead...love u all


PART 21

maa- ohh...par beta...wo Sujal..wo bhi to ...wo paasand nahi karta tujhe?

k-Kya pata...kya farak padta h...main to ...

Kashish runs to her room, shuts door

Maa bhi chup...kya kahe iske aage

Maa to hyper ho gai aur

Kashish thinks Sujal doesn't seriouslyyy have feelings for her

Somewhere she also knows that her conclusion is baseless coz actually mein usne kabhi Sujal ko ko 10 ladkiyoon ke saath nahi dekha

Par baat wo bhi nai hai, jo lag gaya wo lag gaya, par she wants an ' I love you'

If any other gal can have it so can she, hoga Sujal koi businessman and she a simple gal par ye sunna uska hakk h nahi to deal over...aisae latkaana nahi chahie...either committment or no deal

Par according to Sujal, wo kahe bhi to kaise, Kashish koi signal hi nahi deti positive wala

But Kashish ko to signal aise hi dena aata h, she cant fall on him

According to her, aise latkana nahi chahie..either committment or no deal

But somewhere also in her heart, she feels this can't be happening to her

She had always compromised her desire for love knowing her disability; and for Kashish, Sujal was too good to be true

From inside she is still a blind gal

Sujal decides to call Kashish around 10 in the night

s-Hi

k-ummm

s-What? You are not going to talk to me?

k-Sujal

s-Jee. Sujal. Kal kya kar rahi ho?

k-Why

s-I asked first

k-Sujal

s-hm?

k-Humne kya baat ki thi

s-You were saying something which I wasn't agreeing with soo...it doesn't count

k-Does it only count if you agree with it? Kya meri marzi kuch bhi nahi?

s-Tumhai marzi chalti to kabhi kuch hota hi nahi...you didn't even talk to me at first, remember

k-When didn't I talk? Waise bhi agar nahi baat ki to thik kiya... coz I don't speak to strangers

s-Tum na...

k-Kya

s-Ladkiyon wali harkatein kar rhi ho aur kuch nai

k-Main ladki hoon for your kind info

s-Exactly...you couldn't be doing anything else

k-What do you mean??? You mean gals are incompetent? You should meet my sis then, jaante ho airhostess h wo, air hostess. Kitne kitne desh ghumti hai

s-Now firstly, did I even say that word or in that way? Secondly, main kya karun agar tumhari sis airhostess hai to? Ghume mujhe kya aur tumhari behen kahan se beech mein aagai yaar ab pehle tum maa-maa karti rehti thi, tumhari maa ko pataya; ab tum behen-behen chalu mat hona. Tumahri family ko hi patata raha to tumhe...khair chodo. Kal taiyaar rehna

k-Kyun??????????

s-You are smart enough, you know why

k- Tum office nahi jaoge?

s-Kal Sunday hai

k-Mujhe nahi jaana, tum bore karte ho aur ladte bhi ho

s-Aesa hi hoon main. Aaj hi achanak se saari problem ho rai hai tumhe

Kashish ne kaat dia phone, mooh dhak ke so gai

Sujal ne call kiya wapas

Naa uthaya Kashish ne

Sujal ne wapas call kiya, aese kaise ni uthaya

Kashish ne phone chalu karke chod dia

Sujal ne kaat kar phir dial kiya

Kashish phone ke paas jibh se awaaz kar rahi h, hitting tongue to surface of mouth

He shouts in the phone

s-Main kal a raha hoon. Good night sweet heart!!!

Kashish gasps aur kaan band karke chadar odhke so gai

Next day-

Maa opens the door as Sujal comes

s- Namaste aunty

Ma-Namastey

Ma is straight faced. She moves off for him to enter

s-Kya hua aunty koi problem hai?

ma-Andar jao

Sujal goes inside

Maa bhi aati h

s-Aunty Kashish kahan hai?

Ma-Bedroom mein jao

Sujal walks into the bedroom and finds something laying under the sheet

Maa points at the covered body

Sujal nods

He goes and sits on the bed

s- Kashish?

Ma-Kashish! Kashish!

k-umm

ma-Kashish, Sujal aaya hai

s-Aunty, main utha dunga

Maa peeche khadi ho jati hai

s-Sach mein Kashish, I thought u were the morning person type; jaldi uthna nahaana tayar hona and all that. Good that we both aren't like that

ma-Kashish, chadar khol beta. Aisa nahi karte

Sujal shakes Kashish's shoulder

s- Utho. Kashish.. tum sach nai uthogi?

She shakes her head from under the sheets

s-oh fir to bohot mazze ayenge...there is so much I have wanted to try...aunty paani ka glass milega? Nahi jug, haan pani ka jug milega?

k-Maa, isse bolo jaaye. Meri tabiyat thik nahi hai

s-Tum khud bol lo..aunty wo jug plsss

Ma shakes her head...and mouths usse bukhaar hai'

s-Kashish baby, kya hua hai? Tabiyat zyada kaharab hai?

He is instantly concerned

Maa looks at him

k-Baby hogi tumhariii

Kashish shrieks from beneath the covers

s- of course meri hai

k-Maaa bolo naa jaane ko

s- Shh... Tumahri tabiyat kharab hai mat chilao

k-Tabiyat thik ho jaye to bata dungi

Sujal looks at mom

s- Kitna bukhar hai isse?

ma-Arre mujhe lagta hai shayad bukhaar uss phode ki wajah se ho gaya h

s- Kaunsa phoda? Kya phoda? Koi mujhe kabhi kuch time par kyu nai batata hai?

k-Maaa

s-Chup nahi reh sakti kya tum!

He warns Kashish, but then takes a deep breath to control his concern and worry

s-Kashish, tum chilao mat. Is it infectious aunty? Should we take her to the doc? Ye to jaane ko taiyar hogi nai aap batao

ma-Senk de rahi hoon main isse par ye chehra dikhaye to

s-Chehre pe hua hai...? Kashish chalo chehra dikhado warna yahi, tumhe water baath de dunga

Kashish dubak gai but Sujal starts pulling the blanket

s- You really don't want me to do this. Chalo chodo

k-Naaa

Kashish is holding tight to the blanket

s-Achha kyu nai?

He says still tugging the blanket

s-Achanak se se shakal nai dikha ri ho ? What happened to all that beauty is skin deep huh? Mujhe to bada lecture de rai thi?

k-Lemme rest. You go

s-Kashish, you are using up all of my patience now, maan ja warna achha ni hoga

He says getting up shifting to sit on his knees, ready to apply force

k-Maaa

s- Aunty wo pani dijiye, ye nahi maanegi; phir bukhar ko bhi dekhlenge

ma-Arre beta wo nahi manegi, tab se chupi hui h razaai mein

s- Aunty aap pani do, nahi to main khud jakar le lunga

ma-Beta, iska bukhaar badh jayega

s-Kuch Nahi hoga

k-Sujal tum jao bass plz

Ma brings pani

s-Kashish tum ya dhang se baat karo ya baat mat karo. Main yahan se nahi ja raha hu ye dono sun lo

k-Kyuuun. I don't wanna face u...u go

s- Kyun naii face krana

He starts pulling the blanket away in earnest, pira zor lagake

Hatt gaya blanket

She hides her face with her hands

Sujal makes her sit up and holds both her hands

s-Hatao haath chalo. Let your mom look

Kashish ke ankh ke upar itnaaa bada phoda eyebrow se eye tak, uski ek ankh bhi nahi khul rahi

Kashish is so upset, almost in verge of tears

k-Maaa

Kashish maa ki godh mein sar chupa liya

Sujal frowns

s- That is...big...I think doc ko dikhana chahiye...

k-Jao. Jao naaa

s-Tumse kaha kisi ne kuch? Bas chatar patar, kaam ki baat to karni nahi

k-Jaaao

s-Aunt, aap Kashish ko tayar kijie. Hum doctor ke paas chalte hain. I am waiting outside

k-Main nahi jaungi iske saath

Sujal to gaya room ke bahar

k-Maa samajhti kyun nahi, mujhe ajeeb lag raha hai. I look so horrible

maa- Kashish dekh, ye phoda teri aankh ke bohot paas hai ,infection hua to you can lose your eye sight.. agar bus mein gaye to infection ke chance zyada hain. Tu decide kar le, vanity ya eye sight

Kashish thinks abhi to Sujal will hate her coz she looks so ugly

Ma-Rahi baat Sujal ki..usne shakal dekh li.. bhagna hota to bhag jata

k-Pata nahi...usse to abhi tak bhaag jana chahie tha

maa-Tu ye sochna band karegi? Ja taiyar ho

Kashish follows maa...duppatte se chehra dhak ke

Sujal gives ka frowning sa look when she comes out, thoda staring wala hai but then suddenly his frown and stare turn into a smile and chuckle

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thanks, happy new year to u too
nice part.
Kashish is so adamant.
her eye got infected.
ohh n Sujal is really great man.
he is so concerned n worried about her.
continue soon
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oye Nilu edit ur title...by chance i checked the thread...
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part 21
awesome dear...
nice one...
Sujal thinks in different track and Kashish in another...
cont soon dear...
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PART 22

Sujal gives ka frowning a sa look when she comes out, thoda staring wala hai but then suddenly his frown and stare turn into a smile and chuckle

k-Kya hai?

She snaps

s-Chalo chalo. just thinking how sexy you would look with an eye patch

He says with a huge ear to ear grin

k-Shut up!

She snaps as Sujal kitna besharam hai; wahan maa bhi h

Sujal ko kya hai...Kashish ne hi poocha tha; nahi poochti nai bolta wo

Ab dono ko gadi mein baitha kar he takes them to the doc

Doc says a week rest

Kashish announces ki thik h; I will take rest

k-Thik hai Sujal, thik hone pe I will call you

Kashish is wearing an eye patch but jissse ke bahar eaur infection na phele..and Sujal is happy jaise b'day gift mil gay ho

s-Tum rest karo. Mujhe jo karn hai main wo karunga

He says

k-Iss dhith ki to !

s-Aunty dekho kya keh rai hai Kashish aapko...

k-Sujaaal. Behave!

s-Sujal koi kutte ka naam nai hai..

Kashish starts laughing

s-Waise bhi with your lovely eyepatch...<sigh> mei kaise ja sakta hoo...

Ab sab ghar pohochte hai

Sujal takes Kashish's hand as they go upstairs

k-Kya hai? I can walk

s-Chup. Tumhe sedative dia hai

k-Maa...yaad h kal tumhe maine kya kaha tha, wo baat yaad rakho aur isse zyada bhao mat do

s- Tum maa se kya bech beech me bolti rehti ho? Tumahri maa tumse zyada intelligent hai, jo kehna hai mujhe khud keh dengi

Kashish ghar aake chali gai apne rom mein, jaake so gai

Sujal waits around for a while. Aise hi, asking maa ki achanak kaise ho gaya

Doc ne zyada logon se milne ko mana kiya h coz of infection

Maa says when she would be ok...she will ask Kashish to call him

Sujal gazes at her sans any expressions

s- You mean I can't come till she is not well? For the whole week?

ma-I hope you understand. Jab wo thik hogi she will call you

Sujal frowns

s- Yeh kya matab hota hai

Ma narrows her eyes

He is roaming around looking frustrated

He stops

s-Can't I talk to her through the door?

He asks

Ma-Sujal she would call you

s- Nai karti wo call. Baat bhi nai karti

He sits down depressed

Ma-Mujhe lagta h..tumhe ab chalna chahie

He tries to give mom a glare but fails...it only comes out a half a frown

He gets up

s-yeah you are probably right

Sujal jaane lagta hai fir rukta hai

s-oh I forgot, I got something for her

He takes out a small slim notebook. Uspe ek achha sa romantic sa couple bana hua hai cover par

ma--Ye kya hai?

s- Poems. Can you give it to her please?

ma-Kahan se churake laaye ho?

s- huh?

ma-Kiski hai

s-I ordered it made!! :Koi brail mein poem nai print karta hai aese cover ke saath!!

ma-ye brail mein? Thik h..jao

Sujal gives her another angry look and then leaves

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Ab 15 din ho gaye Kashish ne phone nahi kiya

Sujal ne phone kia to Kashish ki maa ne uthaake keh dia ki she is still not well, still have to be inside the room

Sujal thought Kashish bimaar h

Par as Sujal meeting ke lie dopahar mein nikla dekha ki Kashish wahan hai, smiling

A guy with dark glasses walks towards her with a red rose

Kashish smiles more

The guy hands over the red rose to Kashish

She smiles and takes it

Kashish smiles and points at a direction holding the guy's arm

They head towards the coffee shop

If Kashish gives any heed to her sixth sense she would be feeling daggers sticking on her back right now

But Sujal ki meeting thi and he shoots the last mental dagger at Kashish and goes to the meeting

Par jismein uska dimaag tha nai

So it jut resulted in another meeting on later date

Phir baaki sab cancel karke Kashish ke ghar gaya

Ma ne door khola

Ma-emm..tum? Kashish abhi bimaar hai, baad mein aana

Sujal gets in anyways

Ma-arre !

s-Well, if she is still so sick, I think she needs another visit to the doctor. Don't you...

He says giving maa a chilly glare

s-Why don't I wait here and you go get her

Ma-She can't come

s-O that's bad. Maybe then I should carry her to the car

Tabhi front door se haste hue Kashish enters with the rose in her hand

k-Maaa

But her smile vanishes seeing Sujal there

s-Or maybe she can walk out herself...Kashish

He says full of foul chilled smile like a cobra smiling before striking its prey

k-emm..hi...what a surprise

s-oh yes... I thought you were too sick to even stand on your own...besides you never called back...

He says moving slowly towards her...One menacing step at a time

Kashish is freezed

k-I..I..wasn't well..

s-Or maybe I just am not amusing ...useful any more

k-What?

s-Who is the new idiot Kashish? At least I should give him a fair warning

k-What? What are you saying?

s-About how he is going to be used and then effectively dumped. No no.. not dumped. That would be wrong after all you never agreed to be my girlfriend...

She frowns

s-No, we just went out as friends

He stands at level with her now. Tip of his shoes touching tip of her sandals

She moves away a little

He raises his hand and softly brushes her cheek once

She glares at him

s-Very convincing...

She frowns

Sujal steps back and gives her a mock salute

s- Well now, you can brag; you officially had the best of me ..Sujal Grewal...

He gives mom another salute..

s-An even more better actress

Keh kar Sujal chala jata hai

Isse pehle he does something that would land him in more trouble than what Kashish deserves to get him into

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ohhh why the hell kash n her mom r beheving like this.
not fair poor Sujal.
he think kash just used him.
oh god kashish is really strange gal if she like him then why is she ignoring him...
n her stupid mom.
anyways great part pOst next part soon

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