Hi...lovely ppl...wish u a Merry Christmas and a Happy new year...This part is specially dedicated to Priya for her bdy...(I know I am late)...but still...wish u a very happy bdy Priya...also...apart frm tht...this day is so spcl coz its my mom's bdy...so this part is also fr mom...happy bdy mom!
PART 20
s- I am going. This isn't even funny any more
k-Funny??????? You think I am joking?
Sujal apna briefcase uthata hai and chala jata hai
k-You think I will joke about your love life?
He goes leaving her shouting and ranting..
Kashish ne bhi darwaza band kar dia, aise kaise chilla dia, thik hai she commented on his personal life, to kya hua, utna to hakk uska banta hi hai
Raat mein bhi Sujal call nahi karta Kashish ko
Ek to wo thoda frustrated hai with everything plus a nagging mom and workload
Kashish call karti hai
s- Hello?
k-Count?
s-Count?
k-CC
s-What are you rambling about?
k-Cigarette count
s- I have much more important things to do instead of counting, now if you don't mind I was busy
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k-Gussa? Are you smoking right now?
s- Kashish I am not smoking, I am busy
Sujal ne Kashish ke phone aane par hi cigrett by involuntary reaction bhuja di thi
k-Koi baat nahi gussa baad mein kar lena
s- Kashish do you want something? Seriously? Coz I really am busy
k-Yes...ummm...are you angry..Sujal??????????? Don't be angry...naa
s- No I am not
k-You are my only friend, please
s-What is it?
k-And you are my bbf too
s-Kashish...get to the point
k-There's no point it's a line; mujhe neend nahi aa rahi
s-Its early to go to sleep study your music
k-Nahi...tum gussa rahoge to neend nahi ayegi. Pyaar se baat karo
s-For the last time, main gussa nahi hoon. Agar tumne ye bolna band nahi kiya to main ho jaunga. Is that what you want?
k-Hmm khana khaa lena time pe, agdum bagdum mat khana, cc count mat badana, bolo haan
s- Fine fine, anything else mom?
k-No baby, take care of yourself...baby
s- Good night mom
She chuckles
k-Good night...beta
They hang up
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Agle din
Sujal Kashish ko call karta hai around 1
k-Hello
s- Hey
k-Hey
s-Kya kar rahi thi?
k-Mom ke saath...hum hamari devrani haara parivaar aur bachche ye serial dekh rahi hoon
s- Should you be watching tv? And how the music lesson coming up?
k-oh haan maine ek jagah phone kiya tha, Monty Coutto. Aaj jaungi uske wahan 7 baje
s-Good good. Best of luck for that
k-Thanks
s-Achha suno, I can't come today. I have a meeting scheduled and it can't be avoided
k-Haan sahi hai, waise bhi mujhe 5 baje nikalna hi hai 7 baje pohonchna hai naa
s-It takes 2 hours? Tum wapas kaise aogi?
k-Arre Monty Coutto apne farm house mein rehta hai. Koi taxi mil jayegi to le lungi, let's see
s- Tum apni mom ko saath le jao
k-Mom ko zara chest pain hai wo nahi jaa sakti. I'll go, tum mummy kyun bann rahe ho? Main koi bacchi hoon jo kho jaungi?
s- What? I can't worry about you now? Aur bachhi ki baat nahi hai...durr hai, farmhouse waise hi isolated types place par hote hain. Tumhe wapas aane mei dikkat ho sakti hai. Aesa karna apne taxiwale ko keh dena ki wo ruk jaye
k-Thik hai
s- And, let me know how it goes
k-ok
s- Bye then
k-Bye bye
Sujal phone rakh deta hai
Shaam ko 10 baje tak Sujal ki meeting khatam hoti hai. He checks the phone for Kashish's calls but there was no call from her. So he calls her. But her number is unreachable. He calls it a few times, but same unreachable
So he calls her home
Ma-Hello
s-Hello aunty, it's me Sujal. Can I talk to Kashish please?
Ma-Arre..kab se tumhara no. dhund rahi thi...kaise ladke ho tum saath nahi jaa sakte the uske
s-Ji? Main busy tha and she said she would manage. Kya hua hai? Is she stuck somewhere?
Ma-Kab se phone kar rahi hoon unreachable jaa raha hai
s-Aapki last baat kab hui thi?
He says getting up and getting ready, getting his wallet his car keys
Ma-Jab jaa rahi thi tab
s-Wahan ka address hai aapke paas?
Ma-Han ek minute batati hoon, chashma dhundne do
Sujal goes down gets to his car
Maa 10 min baad phir bolti hai address
Sujal starts the car drives out
s- Fine I'll go see there what's wrong. I'll drop her home
He disconnects
Sujal wahn pohocha address pe toofaan ki raftaar se car bhagaake
Maa ka phone aaya
s-Hello?
ma-Aa gai Kashish, abhi aayi hai
s-Let me talk to her
Ma-Thak gai hai, jaake so gai hai wo to
s- I see. Would you tell her to be ready tomorrow by 11?
Ma-Thik hai keh dungi
s- Did she get selected?
Ma-Kuch batya hi nahi. Aayi, hath mooh dhoke, kamra band karke so gai. Tum kahan ho abhi?
s- I just reached the farm house and, you mean you couldn't make her stop and answer? Aunty aap ki baat nahi suni!!! Kuch hua hai kya?
Ma-Mujhe to nahi pata
s-Was she upset?
Ma-Mujhe laga thak gai hogi, thaki hui lag rahi thi
s-Hmm, theek hai aunty main kal aunga subah, aap usse mera message de dejiega
Ma-Hmm
Ab maa ko bhi lag raha hai dheere dheere ki ladka time pass nahi hai bass, fikar hai meri beti ki
Sujal ko bhi lag raha hai ki Kashish ka selection hua ki nahi,mann to kiya Kashish ko call karne ka bohot lekin phir maa ne kaha ki. Thak gai nahi pata to Sujal ko bhi laga ki kyun disturb karein
Lekin since wo farm house to pohonch hi chuka tha to usne socha ki yahi pooch le
Sujal ka to waise hi thoda kihska hua sa hai, chaiye to chahiye bass types wala
Pohonchke Sujal ne door bell bajai par gate khula tha
Ghar ke bahar badaaa garden and pool tha, wahin se sab messed hona start hua tha
Sujal ko to smajh nahi aaya ki itna mess kaise, saare log jo interview dene aaye the kis baat par bhadak gaye
Sujal andar gaya
s- Hello???!!!
Ghar bhi waisa messed
Ghar ke wahan badiii khidki, wo banda highhh on drugs...saamne wale tree pe chada hua
Sujal is like ki W*F, ye kya hai? Why is bloody drugee here!!
Usne reference diya tha Kashish ko..surely usne druggi ka to nahi diya hoga and on top of that W*F was the guy doing on the tree
Sujal walks over to the guy as he is curious plus he is worried if they tried to offer Kashish drugs or something. Kashish ka bhi kya pata le liye ho, usse bhi kya pata hogiaki drug asli mein kaisa hota hai ... pada sabne hai par dekha and taste kitne logon ne kiya hai
s-Hey you!
The guy throws his bottle at him
Sujal side steps neatly
s- Hey a**hole!! What in hell happened here?
Sujal ka phone baja
s-Hello?
Its Kashish
k-Maa ko phone kiya tha?
s- Hey how are you? Why is everything a mess here? What happened here?
k-Where? I cleaned my room
s- At this farmhouse where you came for audition
k-Tum?? Wahan kya kar rahe ho, come back
s- I couldn't reach you... I was worried; your mom said she hadn't talked to you either so I came here to find you. What happened here? It's a mess. Was there a riot or something? Did somebody offer you drugs?
k-umm..emm...no
s-Why aren't you telling me?
k-There's nothing to tell
s-Then tell me why is everything a mess here?
k-How would I know, mera ghar hai kya?
s-You mean everything was fine when u left here?
k-ummm...emm...they ewre having a party
s-I see. Why didn't you just leave then?
k-I tried giving my audition but... I guess Mr Coutto was too high on hallucinations
s-You tried????????? You see people snorting powder and you tried giving audition?!!! Are you mad? Why would you even want to work for such a guy?
k-But..main to audition dene gai thi naa, mujhe usse kya wo kya kare
s-Jiske liye kaam hi nahi karna usse audition kya dogi?!!!!
This time he does shout
Kashish chup..ankhein band
k-Par wo gaan kitna acha hai...
She hums a song
s- Do I sound like I give a shit? Let him work however he wants, currently I am going to report him
k-Why?????? Usne tumhara kya bigada?
s-Are you saying that if a person is taking drugs, we should let him? Good if I report him, he would probably get some help. Look, you go to sleep. Tumhe kal milta hoon 11 baje; abhi isko dekhta hoon
k-Tum kya karoge?
s-I'll see what I can do. Bye
He disconnects
Phir awaaz lagata hai uss bande ko
Sujal is worried ki what is he falls down and breaks his neck or spine
s- Oye hero!!! Neeche aa
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Next day-
Sujal comes, as he said he would come at 11 am
He rings the bell
Maa kholti hai, muskuraati hai
Ma-Aa rahi hai, baitho. Nahaa rahi hai
Sujal is shocked inside, but outside has a straight face like Mr calm and cool
s-Thank you, aunty
He comes in and sits down
Maa Sujal ko paani laake deti hai
s- Thank you
Kuch der baad Kashish aati hai gile baal leke
k-Chalo chalo. Aaj tum apne judo karate karne nahi gaye?
s- Nope and its Tai chi. You have everything you need?
k-Yuppp
Sujal gets up
s-Chalo
He says to her mom-
s-Aunty, I'll bring her back around 7
Ma-Haan haan
k-Bye maa
s- See I told you, your maa would understand. Tum faltu itna darti thi. Koi jailer thodi hai wo
He says opening the car door for her
k-Maa to kuch aur keh rahi thi
s-oh kya kaha tumhari maa ne?
k-Ye sab ki...
He gets in starts driving
s-Yes?
k-...ki mujhe to lagta hai ki wo tujhe pasand karta hai, kuch kaha hai kya?'
s- I am beginning to like your mom
k-To maine kaha, nahi kuch nahi kaha
Sujal rolls his eyes at her
Sujal keeps on driving and they reach their destination
Pohonch kar-
s- Tumhara number unreachable kyun aa raha tha kal?
She shrugs
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s-What is the meaning of that? Why was it unreachable?
k-I d-o-n-t k-n-o-w
s-You really are stupid sometimes.
Sujal gets out of the car, goes buys the ticket
Kashish to idhar udhar mandraa rahi hai
Kisi ke godh mein baby tha, shoulder se jhulta hua usse khel rahi thi, usse ched rahi thi
sChalien?
k-Huh? Oh haan
She walks film ka poster laga hota hai
She gazes at it
k-Mera fav hero
She keeps on looking
Sujal glances up at the hero
s-You are watching too much tv. Tumahri hi akhien kharab hongi
Kashish ignores Sujal and blows a flying kiss while walking away from theposter
s- You do that one more time and I would start ignoring you
k-Whyyy?
s- Coz you don't do that sort of thing in public nor do you openly drool over a man like that, it says a lot of bad things about your character to any passing stranger
k-I don't care. Khullam khulla pyaar karenge hum donooo, iss duniya se nahi darenge hum donooo
Kashish is all sing song jiggy jaggy
Sujal gives her an incredulous look, phir ignore, nahi pata ki kaun hai
s- You keep that up, main aaj tumhe pehchanne se inkar kar hi dunga fir kahin launga bhi nai. Pata chala tumhara yahi chalta raha pagal khane wale aakar tumhe utha kar le jaye and tumhari maa to mujh par hi chilaayegi
k-Jao jao chod do, abhi chod do. Tata bye bye
s- You think you are so smart don't u? You know everything, you can do everything You can just be a bit humble before making mistakes so you don't make them, but nooo; you have to go ahead and get in a mess and then apologies later and then as promptly forget about it
k-What do you expect me to do? And what mistake did I make? Tum sadu ho uska kuch nahi ho sakta
s-Forget I said anything. Go ahead shout your love out to the poster
k-Yeah I will..what's your problem?
Sujal just turns around, nahi jaanta Kashish ko
Kashish bhi peeche se nikal gai, marne do sadu ko
She had always known how to enjoy herself alone
Sujal jaa kar ek park bench par baitha hai, soch raha hai ki kyun aaya, kyun ladaa, kya farak pad raha hai usse and why can't he just stop being affected ? Saara kaam chod kar raat ko 4 ghante ki drive, phir aaj yahan par bhi bench par baitha hai
It's not like Sujal is jealous ki wo hero ke liye sing kare ya wo uske liye tha, the thing is public embarrassment
Kashish ne to change bhi kar liya in pink spaghetti and short jeans shorts
Sujal to wai baitha hua tha
Kashish dekha pani ko, nikal gai saamne se, main bhi main bhi' karke chad gai ride pe
Sujal dekh raha tha, her going away.
Chadhne do' he thought.. he didn't feel much like doing anything
Kashish ride se aai 1 ghante baad, drenched hoke
Kuch oglers ki to lottery ho gai..akeli ladki dekhke
Tab tak Sujal ka bhi mood achha ho gaya wo baithke chips kha raha tha
Kashish bhi paise laai hai, uske pouch mein hain paise
Usne bhi ice cream li
Ek achi jagah dekh ke wo bhi baith gai chaat ne
Sujal ko Kashish dikh rahi hai baithi hui
Kashish to ghaas pe baith gai, she isn't sophisticated as him
Khaa rahi hai wo mazze se
Sujal can see the men ogling at Kashish also but wo bhi durr se hi dekh rahe hain
Sujale doesn't think ki park mein koi badtameeze karega
Ek street dog kahin se andar aa gaya tha
Kashish ne usse adhi ice cream khila di
Let gai ghaas pe khule aasmaan ke neeche while the dog was besides her having the ice cream
Kashish lag to sexy rahi hi thi gori gori..drenched thoda spaghetti uth gai
Sujal bhi dekh hi raha tha aram se enjoying the view
Kashish uthke thoda dusri side chali gai...away from visibility of Sujal
Sujal utha, thoda chala to Kashish dikhi
Kashish is smiling happily while surrounded by those ogling boys, chit-chatting with them and giggling
s- Socialize karne aaye hai hum yahan?
She looks at him
Boys narrow their eyes
Sujal raises his eyebrow
k-Hey...he is Sujal. Sujal he is Ravi, Manish, he is Prashant, rahul and Mayank
s- Hi
He says muhh pe plastic si smile chipka rakhi hai
Boy-Kashish chalein crazy river mein?
k-Haan chalo chalo
s- You are going with them?
Sujal says, holding her hand
Kashish to zara hairaan
k-Haan [But obvious tone]
s- Go with me
k-Tumhe mujhse problem hai to you don't have to embarrass yourself. My new friends aren't embarrassed by me
s- Friends already? I don't think so. You aren't going anywhere alone with them
k-Mujhe akele akele acha nahi lagta...tum samajhte to...khair chodo...[she looks hurt]///tum samajh hi nahi sakte...I am just an embarrassment for you
s-Main chal to raha hoon saath and agar tum kuch kar rahi ho jo mujhe pasand nai hai to, that's it? Everything is over? No middle roads? You can't even try and think of compromise or negotiation?
k-Why are you blaming me? You are the one who refused to come along, left me alone
She says, visibly upset
s-I was there watching you. Did you ask me to come along? But of course it's always my fault, isn't it?
She rolls her eyes, hands on her waist, shakes her head , turns and walks
Sujal follows her at her heel silently
Kashish goes into ladies room
He waits around
Kashsih aai 20 min baad changed her clothes and starts walking towards exit
Sujal exhales a long breath of air. The day was titled disaster with capital D
He follows her along silently
Kashish stops a taxi
s- You are taking a taxi home? I will drop you.
She walks silently towards his car
Sujal opens the door for her
Kashish sits
Sujal goes around gets in and starts driving
Kashish pure raaste chup
Sujal ne gaana chala diya
Pohinch gaye ghar, Sujal opens the door for her like he always does
Kashish nahi utar rahi
He crouches in front of hers
s- Want to go somewhere else?
k-Sorry for the inconvenience
She says grimly
k-But it won't be repeated...ever
s- I had a feeling you would say something like that
k-Good then. Decided
Kashish utar gai
s- What is decided?
k-That it's the last time
She isn't looking at him..she is looking down
Sujal is confused...if he say no then it automatically means he says yes to her fool hardy ways in the public and trusting on complete strangers and; if he says yes it is... it may come out like both are hedging as to who would bow down first while it is not a competition in the first place...tricky situation
s- What do you exactly mean?
k-It's the last time, you won't be embarrassed. You can spend time with whoever you want and not have to run around me and nobody will disturb you...to hell with doing it the right way
Sujal gives her a long speculative look
She is looking down, nazre nahi milayi
k-Please move
s-I don't want this to be the last time...we can work on my embarrassment issues if you would cooperate and there is no whoever.. you are the one I want to spend time with and nobody is disturbing me
She is looking down..chehra nahi dikh raha her head shakes a little
s-I wouldn't have to chase if you wouldn't run. Why can't we walk side by side?
k-B..because you are Mercedes Benz and I am a tractor
k-Can't we upgrade you a little and downgrade me little?
Kashish nazre churaye sar neeche...jaane ki koshish karti hai par Sujal gaadi se utane de tab na
k-Please..jaane do
s- I can't let you go when you say that this is the last time...
k-I..I am just flavor of the month...
s- You are not
k-Main tumhe samjha nahi sakti...sach to ye hai..it's actually in reality, all my fault
s- oh is it?
He says cheekily
She nods
s-Ye kab hua? Tch... koi aur ladki ne sun liya to tumhara gala daba degi
k-Main kitni bevkuf hoon
She presses her hand to her mouth with her head still down
s- Tum thodi to ho...but then nahi hoti to shayad main pasand bhi nahi aata
k-Hato jaane do. HATO NAAA !!!!!!!
s-First take back all the stupid things you just said
k-Fine I take back. Hato
s- You don't mean it
k-eggghhh I mena it. Hato naa
She hisses
s- Tch so impatient..
He moves aside
Kashish litrelly runs frm thr...darr gai ki kuch zyada zahir na ho jaye
Maa ne door khola to Kashish bhagi andar
According to Kashish problem uski hai
Maa ne poocha ki itni jaldi kaise aa gai, Sujal ne to kaha tha ki 7 baje tak aoge
Kashish mooh chipake baith gai
Maa- Arre kya hua hai? Bol. Kuch kaha kya usne? Kya baat hui hai?
k-Kuch..nahi hua hai maa...kuch nahi
maa-Arre bata kya hua haii...
maa says taking her face in her hand
Kashish's eyes are filled with tears, she shuts her eyes
Ma-Arre beta bol...kya ho gaya?
k-Kuch nahi...kuch bhi nahi
maa- Dekh usne kuch bola hai to bata mujhe, kuch ulta seedha kiya to bol, nahi datungi tujhe
k-Usne kuch nahi kaha...sab meri galti h...maine usse kaha...mujhe nahi...par kyun nahi maanta
maa-Kya nahi manta? Kya hua hai? Kuch bolegi bhi?
k-Kuch nahi...sab..meri galti h...sab...main kitni bevkuf hu
maa- Kya hua hai? Kya kiya usne?
k-Usne kuch nahi kiya sab meri galti hai...sab...sab..kyun hu mai itni bevkuf...kyun nahi samajhti wo ek sapna h...kyun pasand karti hu usse
Maa is jaw dropped
Kashish to mooh chupake let jaati hai
Maa-Tune usse kaha ye? Ki..ki... tu usse...
She shakes her head in reply
k-Aisi bevkufi bhari baat..main usse kahungi kya
Edited by storywriter - 11 years ago
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