Blind Dating (SK version) (Part30)(Pg16)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey readers...this is my last SK fic...I had decided to start with new couple with this fic...but was difficult to leave my first love SK. So this fic has three versions-SK, MG and ArHi...Do njoy the fic



Characters:

Kashish: She is a middle class girl. She was blind from birth but has been operated recently. So she is all new to this sight world. Her family consists of her mom and her younger sis. Her younger sis is an air hostess while Kashish is a violinist

Sujal: He is rich hot headed arrogant entrepreneur handling the family business. He is the eldest son of his famy; which consists of his mom, dad and younger brother

Part1

Kashish's family throws a party Kashish ka operation successful hone ki khushi mein

There she gets to meet lot of people

But it's difficult for her to remember so many faces, just by looking

Her brain is just learning to recognize sight

Usko to saare chehre ek jaise lagte hain

She tries her best to map people through her sight but her mind would need a lot of practice

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It was a bright afternoon

Sujal was in a restaurant, in a meeting

Sujal, the man famous for his arrogance; jiske peeche saari ladkiyaan hain

He sees a gal abruptly come over to him {Kashish}

k-Hiii. Arre Pradeep tum yahan?. Tumhara kaam kaisa chal raha hai? Nayi airlines join kar li kya?

Sujal frowns hard he is like W*F

s-I don't know you

Kashish realizes she has again mistaken somebody else with someone

She says sorry and goes

Sujal is like, gals device so many plans to chase me

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Ab kuch aur din baad raaste pe chalte chalte

Kashish suddenly comes in front of Sujal

k-Arre Abhinav, tum? Tum to Japan jaane wale the naa. Laut bhi aaye?

Sujal recognizes but this time he is hell irritated by her antiques

He just ignores her and walks away

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A week goes by

Sujal ko bas ek lunch time milta hai to spend with his love..cigarette

Warna to during office hrs he is very busy

He gets to smoke only during the lunch time, office se bahar aake

He is peacefully smoking near the bus top jahan chotti moti shops hain

Kashish is standing there, waiting for her bus

As she was blind she couldn't read

She walks over to him

k-Excuse me, mujhe yahan jaana hai

Shows him a written chit

k-Kya ye bus wahan jayegi?

Sujal narrows his eyes...this was the limit of chasing him

s-Yooouuu

Kashish blinks her eyes in a confused manner

k-Huh?

s-Another plan to get close to me huh?

k-Huh?

s-Itne din se mujhe follow kar rahi ho

k-Kya? Main aapko follow kyun karun? Main to aapko jaanti bhi nahi. Maine aapko kabhi pehle dekha bhi nahi. Kaun hain aap?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
hi
the up is cool
good that started a new ff
i love sujal i mean rajeev so
anyways kahsihs got sight and she is mistaken by sujal
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good 1 👏👏...
felt bad for kashish ...but good to know she was operated 😃😃...atleast now she can ogle the hero 😆😆😆😆...who as always is a dream 😳😳...poor boy girls will never leave him in peace 😆😆😆...

Congrats on new FF 😊😊 hope it gets more views, reads & comments 👍🏼 all the best 😊😃 ...as getting none is really disappointing 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats...
LAST SK FF?
what does that mean?
u cant stop writing on SK...

part 1
awesome start...
poor Kashish...
hope Sujal doesnt hurt her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2

s-Itne din se mujhe follow kar rahi ho

k-Kya? Main aapko follow kyun karun? Main to aapko jaanti bhi nahi. Maine aapko kabhi pehle dekha bhi nahi. Kaun hain aap?

s-Kaun hoon main????????????????????????? Main kaun hoon???????? Main kaun hooon???? Haan?

k-Haaannn. Mujhe lagta hai aap pagal hain. Khair main kisi aur se puch lungi bus ka number

s-Puch rahi hai..main kaun hoon. Huh

She ignores him

He lights another cigarette

She moves away to a distance

But he is a chimney...ek ke baad ek

k-Please do'nt smoke. It disturbs me

He raises an eyebrow in utter annoyance

s-Why? Is it your property?

k-No, it's not even yours. I request don't smoke, I have a problem

s-If you have a problem then you go somewhere else

k-I can't... because I am waiting for a bus

He comes in front of her and starts smoking

k-**cough...cough**...stop it..

Her eyes are burning...please stop..I have a medical problem

But the smoke has entered her eyes...she is feeling dizzy...her eyes are burning...she can't see anything...it's all hazy

She sits on the bus stop

He is looking at her...samajh nahi aa raha hua kya aisa...whyy is she reacting like this...smoke hi to tha...kya acting kar rahi hai to get his sympathy?

She somehow takes out her phone from her purse and calls her mom

Maa comes and escorts her

Par tab tak Sujal has gone back to his office

He is back to office working, its late evening

Police enters

Police-Aapke Khilaaf Miss KashishSsinha ka complaint hai ki aapne unhe jaan bujhke harass kia when she had medical problem and also a complaint for public smoking. She said that you are responsible for her health deterioration and that would have been fatal

His jaw clenches with rising anger

But for the time being he acts skeptically and uses his contacts to lead the police to leave him

Agle din to Sujal uss ladki ko mazza chakhane ke iraade se khade hai

She comes there

He locates her

s-AYE !

k-Kya/aye ? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho, tumhe to jail ho jaani chahie thi

s-Naa jail to mujhe ab hogi tuhe maarne ke jurm mein chudial

k-Rakshas kahin ka...tum mein to humanity bhi nahi hai

s-Haan haan badi aayi mother Teresa! Jhuthi makkaar 420!

k-Main????? Jhuthi makkar?????? Mujhe eye problem hai

s-Kaisi problem? Sahi to dikhta hai

k-I was blind

s-Achcha aur chamatkar se ankhen aa gai

k-There is something called surgery, Einstein!

Dono chup...silent

Kashish bus dekhne lag jaati hai, Sujal dusri side

Both are ignoring each other's presence...both r la la la

Hhe takes a cigarette between his lips

She squeaks

k-Phirs se!

She pulls it away and throws it

Edited by storywriter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is cool
good that started a new ff
i love sujal i mean rajeev so
anyways kahsihs got sight and she is mistaken by sujal
plz cont soon and pm me


thnks for liking...chk the fb grp for notifications
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -purnima-

Good 1 👏👏...
felt bad for kashish ...but good to know she was operated 😃😃...atleast now she can ogle the hero 😆...who as always is a dream 😳😳...poor boy girls will never leave him in peace 😆😆😆...

Congrats on new FF 😊😊 hope it gets more views, reads & comments 👍🏼 all the best 😊😃 ...as getting none is really disappointing 😭


Yeah...benefits of eyesight..usko kaun samjhaye...yeah but this time s is so wrong abt k

Thanks for well wishes dear...and thanks for wonderful comment and being the most regular reader...do refer the fics to frnds plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

congrats...
LAST SK FF?
what does that mean?
u cant stop writing on SK...

part 1
awesome start...
poor Kashish...
hope Sujal doesnt hurt her...
cont soon dear...


i love writing SK but...circumstances have forced me to leave SK...btw...thnks for likin the fic..and real thanks a zillion for alays being with me from the very first
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: storywriter


i love writing SK but...circumstances have forced me to leave SK...btw...thnks for likin the fic..and real thanks a zillion for alays being with me from the very first




kya? leave SK? nahiii...u cant do that...get the inspiration by watching the videos again dear...tum aisa nahi kar sakthi...and no need to be thankful dear...me always u liked ur stories...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd




kya? leave SK? nahiii...u cant do that...get the inspiration by watching the videos again dear...tum aisa nahi kar sakthi...and no need to be thankful dear...me always u liked ur stories...


Dear its not abt inspiration...its abt the readers..see for example see for urself for part 2 posted above I just rcvd ur comment nobody else commented...dont think I wont update this story...i will update it for sk

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