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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: golu_1677

thanks for a superb part...


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#62

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

update was very nice...thx dear
sujal is trying his best to convince kashish. He will be a very loving teacher to his dear student kashish...sure...ultraaa loving😉
continue soon...sure dear...thx fr btfl cmmnt

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
hi
the up is good
kashish and sujal convo but her mom comes in btw and sujal takes over the situation he handles her mom and finally her mom allows kashish to go to her class
sujal and kashish went to zoo
and there they had fun
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 14
awesome...
Sujal is a smooth liar...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I understand Kashish' s momz concern but that was too much ...
Asking Sujal his age Hehehe I am still laughing ...
But he very nicely convince her ...
And I really loved his way of teaching ..
Kashish is lucky to have such a talented , hot , Charming teacher ...

Great part ...
Waiting for more ..
Continue soon ...
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PART 15

Near the monkey's enclosure the two monkeys were mating

As Sujal was explain about animals Kashish ne zor se pooch liya

k-Ye kya kar rahe hain???

s- armm they are in copulating

k-In what?

Kashish ko laga kuch hoga animals ka term khane pine ka

s- Look it up. Tumhara home work

Sujal sab dikhata hai zoo bhi band hone wala hota hai to they get out

s-So you enjoyed the zoo?

k-Yesss

She says frinning happily

s- You liked the animals?

k-Yeah but most of all I liked one animal

s- Which one?

k-You!

She says grinning cheekily

He raises his eyebrow

s- Well...now comes the difficult question for today..I was going to ask you to describe your favorite animal..and since it's me...you have to describe me

He says smiling smugly

k-ohhh well…ok then let's start

Kashish looks at him…upar se neeche nazar pherti hai

k-Hair-cactus like, face-stone like, eyes-insignificant

s-You have to color me in too...start again with colors

k-Well hair red, eyes magenta, face black, body pink, lips green

Kashish burst in laughter

While Sujal is straight faced and unimpressed

s- Fail. e report card tumahre ghar jaa rahi hai. Hass lo; jab tumari maa poochegi ki meri intelligent bachchi fail kaise…to kujhe mat kehna

Kashish is laughing more at his sulking

k-Haan ek chez add hi nahi kiya; nose flared when angry and eyes narrow and jaw clenched

s-Good very good so - you know what angry look is, that's good

k-I know

She gently touches his face , closes her eyes and feels his facial features texture and contours. The way she always recognized people close to her before getting her visual abilities

s-Like what you feel?

He asks smugly

k-What is there to like or dislike? Everyone has what you have, 2 eyes one nose one mouth 2 ears

s- I see.. so I have no visual appeal? After all kisi ki aankhien badi hoti hai naak choti hoti hai etc etc

k-You are asking about visual appeal from a blind? And also id you ask about my blind sensibilities then I don't know...I haven't touched much male faces and according to female level you are too hairy

s-I am just asking what you think of men as handsome or all men are same or that you like bald men?

k-I don't know. The person is important. Beauty isn't a criteria..I couldn't see much anyways and also I am not beautiful to expect a handsome man

s- Tum kya bol rahi ho aur maine kya poocha

k-ufff tumne kya pucha?

s-See girl, thing is simple; I am fishing for compliments purely materialistic outer beauty ones...

k-I know how shallow you are. That's what I expect...

She says rolling her eyes

s-What shallow?

k-You. For example, have you ever spoken to yourself?

s-Do I talk to myself? All the time. Everyone talks to themselves at some point of time

k-Do you hear the inner silence?

s-Nope. I hear lot of agreeing and disagreeing voices all the time

k-See, hear your soul, your heart

s- I still don't see what it has to do with how I look?

k-See for my, looks doesn't matter. Not at all

s-Sure they don't. Doesn't mean you can't have a reference

k-See I don't know what look wise beauty is. I just don't know

s-Well one beauty is what others call beauty and then one beauty is what you find appealing on your own what you like seeing.. you feel you can look at for hours. The first one defines fashion trends…the second one... well sometimes if you like a person enough, you start to think they are beautiful even if they might be hideous according to first type and you can look at that for hours...

k-Yes that's so true!

s-The beauty of first type is always changing but second one is different

k-No, second one also changes if you start hating the thing

s-It's generally same for a all your life and well…if you truly like, I doubt you can hate it

k-Why? Hate is just part of love. It's love gone bad; nevertheless its love

s-Well, now we are going deep into the matter. If it's just like maybe you can forget it or hate it ...

k-No no. Opposite of love isn't hate is apathy, when you don't care

s-You may not find it not beautiful.. but then you still want to see it...and you get obsessed. You want to look, keep seeing, love or hate. You want to see, beautiful or ugly. You want to keep looking. That's when you are really messed about something

k-Yeah, sad when it happens to people. But one thing I know and found beautiful and I am so glad I am with it

She smiles

s-You are talking about my car aren't you? I know it's a classic. I love it too

k-No, your watch

She has mischievous side grin

s- oh my watch? Well ...: maybe I'll give you one as a prize if you keep up your grades

k-No thanks..it looks good on you. Actually you look good after wearing it

s- A female's version Kashish..

Beech raaste mein Sujal car rokta hai

s-Chalo chalo..

k-Kya? Kahan?

She is perplexed

s-Book store. We'll make a quick stop here and then tumhe ghar chodna hai warna tumhari maa tumhe kal nahi aane degi

k-ohhh. Waise Sujal

s-Hmmm?

k-Tum bhi bure nahi ho. Kabhi kabhi 1-2 second ke lie ache bhi lagte ho

s-oh really?

He grins with pride

k-Hmm. Haan Andhere mein. Movie hall mein, bohot ache lagte ho. Jab dikhte hi nahi

She burst into laughter

s-Hmm we can go for another movie. You can enjoy my looks and I'll enjoy telling u the movie

She looks at him and thodi blush wali smile remembering the day when they went for a movie last time

He takes her to a huge book store

Ab Sujal se zyada padai wadai bas ki to hai nahi

So first he thinks ki Kashish ko padna anna chahiye

Par wo to baith kar sikhane se raha

To wo usse lejata hai wahan jahan special people ke liye teaching learning books hai

Wahan jo log dekh sakta hai and brail seekhna chahte hahin unke liye bhi books hoti hai so Kashish can learn in reverse

Aesa kuch soch kar waisi kitaab kharidi jaait hai aur ek kitaab animals par khardii jati hai

Then they come out and Sujal drops Kashish home

Kashish to ache se bye bye wave karti hai

He winks at her and leaves

Kashish khushi khushi ghar aati hai chehre pe smile chipkaake

Maa interrogates ki kya hua kya pada ye wo

Kashish shows the books and all

Maa impressed

Sujal ka plan bhi kaam kar hi gaya

To ab aese hi chalta hai..

Sujal kabhi Kashish ko beech le gaya

Whan sab log saari cheezein sab ko bataya ki kya kya hai wo kya hai

Kabhi market le gaya

Kabhi bass aise hi driving around ki jo Kashish ko dikhe sadak par; nahi pata ho wo poocho ki kya hai. Beech beech mebi color test chalta rehta hai

Kashish ko naam likhna sikhata hai

Maa bhi background mein hai

Kabhi bhi wo bhi Kashish ka surprise test le leti hai

Yahan maa peecha na chode aur kabhi Sujal pareshaan to wo bhi difficult question pooch leta hai

Kashish bhi kabhi kabhi Sujal ko uda deti hai

Bas aese hi kabhi when Kashish Sujal ki zyada uda de ya Sujal ki baaton mei dhyan naa de to Sujal pooch leta hai thoda difficult sawaal to keep her in line

Kabhi kabhi Kashish ghar se Sujal ke lie kuch kuch laati bhi hai sneak karke

Kabhi maa ke haath ke ladoo, thodi sabzi bachake jo Kashish ne banaai aur sabko pasand aai

Sujal ko bhi wierd laga shuru mein ki someone is sneaking him bits of food…matlab he can go to fine restaurants ad get excellent service there but then he likes the gesture and the will behind it plus he realizes that he has a taste for her cooking

To then when the heat is off from mom and Kashish bhi kaafi seekhne lagi hai; apne aap se curious hokar poochne lagti hai aur books padne ki koshish karti hai to Sujal also relaxes and ab wo padai kaam aur tafri zyada karte hain

Itna ghumte hain to Sujal haath-waath to pakad hi leta hai…kabhi coz of crowd kabhi coz of terrain kabhi bas aese hi

Pehle kahsish was wary of the action but she also gets used to it and starts liking it as contact and touching is a big thing for blind people

So she gets comfortable with it and expects it too

As for blinds, since they can't see all other senses are a bit heightened

They touch everything to familiarize themselves and when you can't see anything and although you can hear someone near you wouldn't you just instinctively reach out and hold their hand or put your hand on their shoulder so that you know you are not alone

Imagine blind people in a crowd, when there are so many people around and only one is yours and although you know them by scent and feel their presence; it is just so much more relieving to hold on to him

Sujal comes to meet her as per the daily routine

But Kashish frowned seeing him

She comes close, smelling him

Sujal ne aaj perfume change kiya and so he smells different

She knows it's not about the perfumes scent but Sujal has his own scent, it's the way he walks, the way he breaths, the way he moves, the clothes he wears

It is not like she does not recognize him coz of the change but few little things when changed become bothersome and irritating

She was sniffing him

s- oh I like the way you smell too

He takes her in a bear hug and bends his face to her neck and take a deep breath

She frowns...

k-You smell different

s- I changed my cologne. Khatam ho gaya tha

k-emm..wo acha tha

s-This is nice too...

He pouts

s-So where do you want to go today?

k-Home

s- oh abhi nahi... abhi sab ghar par honge fir sba log 10 baat poochenge. Maine tumhe kabhi aur apne ghar lekar jaunga

k-Arre apne ghar!!

s-Abhi to aayi ho.. apne ghar ko jaana hai tumhe itni jaldi? Koi khaas baat?

k-Haan

s- oh kya baat hai?

k-Surprise surprise…there's a show

He raises his eyebrow

k-Kya hua?

She giggles

k-Awww you look cho cute when you do that

s- Thank you. You look cute too, most of the time

She smiles

He lets go of her, puts his hand around her shoulder and walks her to the car

k-Flirt !

s- Who me?

k-Yesss you

s- Naaahhh! O if you have to go this show or whatever, am I invited?

k-Sure. Here's the pass

She gives him

s-oh chlo phir ye show bhi dekh lete hain

k-Will you come?

s-What? We aren't going together?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
part 15
awesome...
waah what a lovely teacher Kashish has got...
lucky her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Too good
Khushi has indeed got a very different teacher
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
AVE, PULCHRA 😳
Yesterday i read all the chapters on my phone till 4:30 AM...Phew! so here I'm keeping my promise and commenting 😊
First of all lemme inform you that I'm very happy to see you writing on this beautiful couple again and I don't know whether you remember it or not but last year you had told me about the plot of this story and I was really interested.
So...Kashish was blind but recently had an operation and now she can see...does it makes me cruel that I'm more excited about the fact that she's a violinist??????😕 okay,maybe it does.😳
So anyways our couple's first meeting...and then second,,,then third weren't so awesome😆
Sujal is a chain smoker,kind of an alcoholic and arrogant...hmm the ingredients to make Sujal..."THE REAL SUJAL"😆😆😆😆
The way they were fighting was hilarious and I loved their bickering at the bus stop..both of them surely know how to act like adults 😉
Oh the insults😆 and later going to the lala land,loved it.
Part 2 and 3 is pure comedy🤣 and i don't know what is more hilarious...your narration of the situations or their dialouges but it was really entertaining!
From part 4 we started to get to the main plot and I'm happy that you've restrained this story from cliches...Sujal is not the typical hero,who'll come to save the girl and deliver so called "macho" dialouges. Though it was an interesting sight to see the way he help her.
She thought to make amends with him...she's so naive😊
In Part 5,6,7 and so on...YOU made Sujal a classy STALKER🤣🤣🤣
That guy surely have some heavy contacts with roadside romeos😆 i guess!

I recommend you to write CRACK FICS,you're a CRACK QUEEN 🤣

Oh loved Kashish for not trusting people easily,I totally support her.
Poor Sujal...you should change his name into Mr.WAIT-A-LOT😉
I can totally understand his anger😆
Drunk Sujal sounds like a french guy...so if anybody hurts his ego he starts drinking,that's...really...i have no words (my deep sympathies)😆
Stop cursing buddy it won't do any good!!!
Thank you for the driving lesson
Never seen or heard of a guy who's can be so smug after drinking n smoking,
A SK story is not compete without Rishi,gotta love that guy.
I don't know about others but i like that Kashish is not following him like a puppy on a leash!! I DON'T want them to just meet,dine and live happily ever after!!!!!!
I mean the girl came to rescue him at night without informing her family,what else they want?? a booty call???😳
Okay,enough of ranting but I'm gonna support Kashish!!
Sujal's now getting all cheeky and flirty and ya great theory😉 about them being the perfect couple☯️
OMG!!!!!!If I'm not wrong then the first color Sujal taught her was Blue,the color of the sky...hmm,even without knowing the banner have that color...guess I really read your mind ☺️
People should take classes from Kashish on "HOW TO LIE TO YOUR MOTHER FLUENTLY"😛
Good to know that Sujal wants to help her learn and actually helping her by tutoring...great conversation between Kash's mom n Sujal😆 it shows that he's very good at lying just like his future lady-love😉
The zoo trip was a good decision,i appreciate it👏
Last chapter they had a serious conversation about beauty and the few options that helps a blind person to know about his/her surroundings...I'm REALLY HAPPY to see that you didn't put that serious matter as a back burner,well done⭐️
This version of SK reminds me of my current favorite RPF couple❤️
Sooo,there's a show...i think i know...😉😆
LOVED it so far,good job...IT'S AWESOME!!!

Don't forget to update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 16

k-Sure. Here's the pass

She gives him

s-oh chlo phir ye show bhi dekh lete hain

k-Will you come?

s-What? We aren't going together?

k-Arre I will have to prepare and go early naa

s- Prepare for what? I am not a psychic here

k-For the show naa

Sujal opens the door for her

s- What show?

k-Sujaaal don't you know what show?

s-Kashish, no I don't. I said I am not a psychic

k-Then don't speak to me ever

s-Fine be like that. I won't come

k-What classes do I go in?

s-Violin

k-Then????????

s- So you have a concert, not a show

k-Tch ! Its not on a big level

s-Tch tch! It's still called a concert

k-No its not. There will be some arabic dance and all too, then some group will also be performed, then lots of things

s-Arabic dance? You mean like belly dance and all?

k-Yes

s- ok so when does this thing start?

k-7

s-And we call such a thing an exhibition. So you want me to drop you at your home or where this event will be held?

k-Home. Actually you can drop me here. I'l take a cab

s-Why would I do that now?

k- Because that place is really far

He ignores the topic

s-So what are you playing, classical? Anything I would know? And when is the dance? Before or after your show?

Kashish, who was in her own thoughts, says-

k-Yo know, tomorrow I guess I wouldn't be able to come home in the night, will have to stay with the group, as it would be late

s- I'll drop you, no problem and I'll pick you up if it's that late; you don't have to stay there

k-No..I am a performer I will have to wait after the show ends and formalities etc

s-And I am saying that I'll wait till late

k-But why? You don't have too

s-Why not?

k-Its really far Sujal

s-So what? I like driving

k-Hmm

Sujal drops Kashish at the venue

k-Andar aao naa

He goes inside

s-Should you be introducing me around? Kisi ne tumhari maa ko bata diya to?

Kashish holds his hand and drags him

He quickly follows

k-You sit here, I'll just come

s-ok

Udhar sab wo dancers aur sexy German belle dancers practice bhi kar rahi thi

Sujal ko bithake gai Kashish

He gets up looks around, takes note of the program sequence

Wo saari ladies wahan Sujal ko private si smile pass karti hain

Sujal smiles back in acknowledgement but he just gives a hello wali polite smile

As the queue starts and the belle dancers were thumkauing

Kashish is visible in a line as the stage is still under construction, praying as her lips were moving in nervousness

Dance hota hai, uske baad ka bhi performance hota hai

Sujal bhi vantage point se enjoy kar raha hai

Kashish is looking for Sujal's reaction as dance is happening

He likes the dance

But like in general we all like good quality dance, nothing about wanting the dancers

The dance ends

Jaise sabne applaud kiya, Sujal ne bhi kiya

Kashish ka group enters

Everyone is blind there except Kashish

Sujal gives her thumbs up

She smiles

They start playing the initial node

'Stoppp !'

Someone says on the mic

'Who's this gal on the right? Third right'

The coordinator's voice booms on the mic

Kashish par spotlight

Kashish bechari blank

Sujal is confused

'Gal,out frm there'

Kashish frowns quizzically

'Don't you know it's a special show by blinds?'

k-But…but..I am blind…I mean I was till I had a surgery…

Her lips are quivering

k-I practiced a lot…I read Braille and I…I have been in the group from a young age

'But thing is, you aren't blind now, so don't waste our time. LEAVE'

Sujal is silent though he feels bad for Kashish par wo kya kar sakta hai; although he organizer shouldn't get so rude

Should he say something? He doesn't know if he should

He is willing to but he is not sure if he should intrude in Kashish's life like this... dono ka milna and spending time alone is one thing lekin if he speaks for her like this in public then they will be linked

He is not sure ki Kashish phir ussi par gussa na ho jaye besides usse Kashish par bharosa hai

Wo usse lad padi to ye tuchha organizer kya cheez hai

Kashish looks around in verge of breaking down, takes her violin and exits

She does not want to fight, she is feeling lost, she was not blind not normal; somewhere in middle, nobody is accepting her; as if her identity was lost

In violin class also she has felt cold shoulders, jealousy, diffrent behavior

She is upset

She goes off from stage

Sujal rushes to her side

Par najaane kahan chali gai, mil nahi rahi

He calls her but she disconnects the phone

Sujal goes and waits near the exit, jayegi to wahan se hi jayegi

But after a while when she doesn't come then Sujal he goes and looks for her

Kashish kisi wood ke stairs ke upar andhere mein baithi hai

s- Kashish? Are you ok?

She had hidden her pace in her palms as she hears s she springs up

He goes and sits beside her and puts his hand on her back

s- Kashish?

She takes her violin and starts walking

He holds her hand

s- Kahan bhag rahi ho?

She jerks his hand

s- What? Maine kya kiya hai? Mujhse kyun nahi bol rai ho?

She starts walking again

He holds her back once again

k-Pleaseee!

s- Please what dammit

k-Leave me alone. Mujhe kisi se koi baat nahi karni

s- Mujhse kyun durr jaa rahi ho?

He pulls her close

k-Ahhh!!! JUST LEAVE ! Please chodo

She pushes him a little

s- Shout if that makes you feel batter. You wanna fight? Hit me? Go ahead hit me

k-Tch! Just leave me

s- No

k-Pleaseee

She hisses

k-Leaveee

s-Kashish, you are upset. Why should I leave you when you are upset? Come here darling

k-I am not upset !

He pulls her close again

s-Shh

k-I can handle it. Leaveee

s- Off courseyo u can

k-And, I am no darling of yoursss

She pushes him

s- Off course you are. No? You don't like darling? How about babes?

k-Justtt shut up !!!!!!!!

She hisses

s-Baby?

k-Shut up!

s-Honey?

She snapsss

She is really irritated

k-Let go of me

s- Never

k-This is no time to flirt !!!!!!!!!!!! Just leaveee. Gooo

s- Do I look like I am flirting? Would I have come after you if I was just a flirt?

Kashish looks away

She doesn't know the answer

s- Hey. Look at me. I am not playing around with you ok. I crack jokes coz they make you happy, nothing else

Her lip wobbles

s-Don't worry about this show

He holds her hand and guides her into his car

She is gravely silent all the while

He looks at her and stops the car near an ice cream trolley, in an attempt to make her little happy

s- Kya khaogi?

Kashish to ankhein band

s- Kashish... kaunsi ice cream khaogi?

He nudges he shoulder gently

She opens her eyes looks around ki ghar nahi hai, looks at him questioningly

s- Ice cream?

She shakes her head

s-Nahi? Phir meri mrei se mat mangna 'ek bite ek bite'

She shakes her head and closes her eyes

s-Kha lo..tell me your flavor. You liked chocolate and vanilla, right? Which one you like more?

Kashish kuch naa bole

Sujal khud hi apna judgment use kar ke le leta hai

Opens up one for her and puts it in her hand

s- Nahi khai to tumhare upar phighal jayeegi

She takes it

Sujal bhi apni khane lagta hai

s-To ab aage ka kya plan hai?

She looks at him questioningly

s-Well?

She looks away

s-Theek hai mat batao.. but here is what I think…you play well enough.. Obviously your group overlooked the fact that you can see and the organizers didn't and hence the whole situation… no one's fault although people could have been more polite...next step which I would taken have I been in your place is to join another group more advanced and there won be any ore blind people in it coz you love to play and you won't want to give it up coz of some silly miscommunication

k-Cant read notes

s-Well, so what? We'll learn

He says with an encouraging smile

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