KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44)

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

it was just AH-mazing...
i jus loved it...
n luv their tom n jerry fight...
n they spit out their feelings by mistake...
n their baarish me romance haye...
i lovd it...
all i was doing just hayee...
fab job...
thnx 4 the pm...

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

unressed on 1st pg...

Edited by shukti_19 - 12 years ago

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Sneha

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Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

res

-Unres-

uff...rey aur Kria hamesha ladte rehte hain..😆

Kitna ladte hain? Ladai ki bhi ek hadd hoti hai yarr! :D

But loved the way u wrote the fights...i cud imagine it...😊

The other employees r getting entertained by their arguements...

The chief did the best thing by locking them in the room..

Waha man bhi baat bahar nikal gayi..Both of them like each other..

Both of them went out to eat...Aur baarish..:D

Mujhe toh baarish waale scenes bahot pasand hai...😛

Wahan se romance Shuru...😳

Next morning, jab chief ne call kiya, tab dono ne bola ki they r taking leave.

Chief ko shak nahi hua?? 😛

Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

AWSOME!!!

HATS OFF!!!👏

Reallyy i loved it!!!

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

fabulous 👏👏

mindblowing👍🏼

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

ooosssoommm os...!!! Tom jerry fght is fab...!!! Nd chief's idea work finally...!!! Romance in rain is jst wow...!!!! Nd that last part btw rey nd chief is osssoomm...!!!! Nice idea...!!! Lovd it ...!!! Thanxxx 4 pm

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awsome os ..!
Loved it ..!

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Vaishu this was a superb os. I loved it a lot. Finally both expected and wat was that rey said. Kria ko program bana diya. And kria kya reply diya ab mai program padte samai kya karungi. I'll definitely remembedr this. Loved it a lot:)