KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44)

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Shaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Phew*fans self*
That was HOT!!!!!Loved Rey's last line to his chief."New program to be unlocked!!!!"ROFL.Thanx for the pm.

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Kritika Julka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

awesome loved it rey new program

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aishasully

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wowoww vaishu super hot dude i literally loved ur rupdtee yaaarr.. from kriyaansh fighing lol they both cnfessed together damn nw tht was embarassing specially wen it cms out at the rong tym infront of the rong personn,,.. u shuld c**tinue it...

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Nisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Amazing os
just loved it
thanx for the pm

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Ameena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This was really 'Ah-mazing' 😃...

Their 'Tiffs' were described amazingly 👍🏼...

They were quite awesome 🤣...

The reason behind all their fights since start is 'Attraction' , Wow kya reason hai 😆...

Finally Rey is their where he belongs 😳...

Rey unlocked quite an interesting program 😉...

The concept was really superb and different 😃...

Loved it ❤️.

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OM OMG OMGGG... THIS WAS A FAADU OS... Haaye... Vaishuuu... U nailed it... One of the best OS... Honestly speaking... At d start..when dey were fighting i litrelly burst out laughing at dat moment... Blv me i was having ters in my eyes... Hahahaha... :D ... And then whn dey decided to sort out things... Aur uske baad they both confessed "coz i ws attracted toward u dammit" ... Omggg... I winder dat wud hav been soo awkward... Aur phr uske baad der jst naam ki frnshp.. :P ... And thn baarish... N evrythingg... Haaye... I sooo lived it... Awesomee awesome awesomeee... :D

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Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Loved it!!

Amazzinnggg concept!!😃

Please pm me next time😊

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Hetal

@hetu29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awesome Os vaishu di :)
Tom and Jerry fights ! 😆
Rain roamance ! ☺️
And the lame excuses ! Lol... It was fab !
Loved it :D

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Awsome...Awsome...Awsome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

I really loved it...to the core...

i wonder how do you mange to everytime something new and fresh in ur so amazing concepts...

the way you sketched their tiffs and their feelings towards each other since beginning that was commendable...

this is something which everyone of us st some point of time must have gone through either at schools, colleges and as kriyaansh case in their work area... every line every word i really liked it...

and last their confession, and den their refusal to their senior was just fab...

and continue posting such great works of yours i really love dem vaishali...

thanku for pm...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago