KR SS: The Veiled Temptations (Updated Ch5 Pg44)

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

fab os dear,,,,,,,,,👍🏼

i m loving it😃😃

suprb job👏👏

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

dufer iska pm mujhe nahi bheja tha..i found it from ur posts..!!

and you say i din read!!

anyways coming to ur update...

Gal it was fabb!!

superbb..intense... full of almost every element in just 1 shot!!

loved it..truelyy amazingg..

next timee dont 4gt to send pm gal!

dont wanna miss any of ur works!!

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Madhurya

@maddieee

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

this is one awesome OS... seriously awesome... liked it loved it... i enjoyed it a lot... such a light and cute story... good one sweety

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

vish it was seriously osm the best os i ever read such a osm os !
A big thanks for writing tis
love u 4 dis
abi via cell hu so cant give a long comment tu to meri bhavanaye samajhtha hai na yes last ka part maft tha unlocked a nw prog haha infact poora os fab tha muah hugs

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Le light aa gayi to isse editing !

tuje live review diya mene iska ! ab aur kya bolu ! and ya thanks tere se baat karke mera mood theek hua baby ! :* love you muah muah muah

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

😊

i lykkk

nahiii

i loveee

dis was really awesome..

kriyaansh aise geeks... 😳

i was imagining dem in specs as dats d way geeks r portrayed, n dude dey looked so freakin smart...dey r smart...

i lykd how dey confessed dey lykd each other.. start se...😳

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Amazing os ...

Loved it ...

Do write more ...

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a_happy_2000

@a_happy_2000

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Vaishu ..

First of all , I am sorry .. I guess am almost the last persons to read this beautiful and fabulous OS ...

But .. I knew it would be the bestest ...

When you had mentioned it to me .. I just couldn't wait to read it

:-)

Ok .. now for the OS ..

I just LOVED IT ...

It was just too good ..

KR would be the cutest couple fighting over anything and everything ...

:-)

Love them .. .

I could seriously imagine everything so well ...

And the end ..

WOW ...

I seriously loved it when Rey said he had unlocked a program and was exploring it ...

I can see it infront of my eyes .. he saying that on the phone .. and Kria rolling her eyes ..

Ha Ha Ha

Really very well written and yes .. please keep writing more and more ...

I know that little head of yours is full of budding ideas ..

Do pen them down

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Hah.. Finally I read it n commentin on it nw..

I jus loved it vaishali.. KR n no fights.. So not possible..
I loved thr verbal fight..was quiet entertainin,u knw 😛
Poor boss.. None of dem was payin heed to his existence.. Obv kriyaansh h.. Jb ldte h toh aas paas kaha dkhte h.. Ohki.. Wht I loved d most is d reason they both gave behind d initials of thr fights n thts they both wer attractd towards each othr so jus to overcome it they use to fight.. D3 mei b tai tha na kriya ki taraf se.. :) Mumma.. I miss dem 😭 😭

N thn strtd thr journey.. Dat rain sequence n d post convo was beautifully written..
I cud visualise evryrhn..!

Loved it :)