ManVeer FF:~~We Are One~~[CH-18-pg-153] 30/03/2014 - Page 13

Originally posted by: milhan

it was awsum love the lyrics in between finally manyata understanding her love for uday!!!!!

totally luvd it!

will be w8n 4r the next part desparately!!!!!

plz update soon and thanx for pm...

P.S. the like button is not working so i'll try it again next time

keep on rocking buddy!!!!!

Originally posted by: psp.pari

awesome update dear👏👏👏

each & every feelings were superb

loved it to the core

please do continue soon

Originally posted by: andy.a

Its the most beautiful update i ever read
so romantic that it touches the soul
thanks for the pm cntinue soon

Originally posted by: arna753

loved this chapter. finally manveer together.

love the way manyata expressed her feeling to uday. btw Zina ur poetry was awesum.

pls update the chap soon. thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: mahilove

wow amazing update

it was beautifully described

well done

continue soon

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

lovely fantastic awsm gr8 do cont soon

Originally posted by: anushruthi

BEAUTIFUL update

loved the poetry

it really expressed their feelings so Well

but de update was short

next time i want a longer update please

thanks for de PM

precap-😳

do cont soon

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

OMG Fantastic, superb, amazing, mindblowing, terrific update Zinu.👏 👏 👏 I've no words to praise ur work, I was speechless after reading the update.👏 👏 👏 😛 Beautifully written.👍🏼

Hats off to you Zinu.

K let's come on the update, Beautiful rhyme. You wrote it.😛 OMG I mean You're Poet+ FF Writer.😛 I can't write Poems like u, I'm so dumb.😆

You showed Uday n Manyata's feelings for each other so beautifully in this poem.😳

n Uday n Manyata's love confession for each other. Dreamy.😳

Precap sounds so exciting. Manveer union.☺️

Thanks for the wonderful update n PM.😛

Do update ASAP.😉 now I can't wait to read it.😳

Great work.👍🏼

Love you.🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Awesome ,superb,mindblowing update deary 👏 👏
Loved it to d core ❤️
i luv poetry zina and thanxx fr writing it dat way 😉
The poetry ws beautifully written👍🏼
atlast saari misunderstandings clear ho gyi😊
Waiting fr the nxt update 😳 Update ASAP

Originally posted by: preya_radev

omg i just manveer scene they were awesome finally they confessed and the poetry was well portrayed really loved it wow interesting precap lol update soon and thanks for the pm