ManVeer FF:~~We Are One~~[CH-18-pg-153] 30/03/2014

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

loved it loads...
as usual hatts off...
gr8 work..
do update soon...
thnks for pm and do pm me...

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Ziina dear..I commented on your note yesterday but then net got disconnected so couldn't post it..was so irritating😡

Ok coming to the point...Its alright if you have taken those lines or poetry from Net...ATleast ur so honest and thats what m really impressed.

But u must have heard that even to copy well you need to have brains and talent in it😆..And you do have that sweety..Because the lines that u took from net, i know how much u must have searched them and u have worked hard to put them together and make them reveal Manyata's inner feelings so well...👏👏..So still credit goes to you for it👍🏼..Fantastic..Update soon waiting😊

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_Grey_

@_Grey_

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Comment edited on page 14 and its ok dear🤗

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Shivani

@Asmimelody

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

awesome chappy di:)thanx for the PM:)

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Pls continue soon pls pls pls

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: aliya666
chal yeah me reseve wala game khelti hoo 🤣
EDIT
YEAH ME FIRST ONE TO COMMENT
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME CHAPTER
UDAY KNEW HIS PRINCESS SO WELL
THAT BEGING AWAY FROM HIM WILL BRING HER MORE CLOSE TO HIM,
I REALLY LOVE THE UDAY MANYATA'S SCENE THEY WERE REALLY HEART TOUCHING
FINALLY MANYATA SPOKE OUT ALL HER QUESTION TO UDAY AND GET HER PRINCE CHARMING
FINALLY UDAY CONFESS HIS LOVE THAT HE LOVES ONLY MANYTA NOT HER RIYASAT
AND MANYTA TO LOVE HIM
AND ALL THE REMEMBERENCE BOTH MANYATA AND UDAY IMAGINE BEFORE THEY GET MARRIED WAS VERY WELL WRIITEN
BUT ONE WEEK POIN UPDATE WAS SMALL
AND YOU STOP AT REALLY INTRESTING POINT😉
OVER ALL UPDATE WAS VERYWELL WRITTN AWESOME BLOSSOME
AND REALLY LOVED IT
THANX FOR PM AND CONTI SOON AS I CANT WAIT TO READ AHEAD

thanks a lot for the lovely and big comment!😊 i will upadte ASAP😊

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm👏
but tooo shhooorrrttt😭

thanks huma😊

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: tani23
RES

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OMG Zina ...i loved d plot

the way u framed the story is just amazing

Chapter 1 : the concern she has for him, her love, her feelings wen he left her just on the first day ..was nicely portrayed

Chapter2:

u wrote beautiful poems...loved each n every line of poem

Manyata waiting n ultimate confession

UV proposing ...Aww so sweet

Amazing work😊

thanks a lot dear😃😃

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sirjee
Waooo but it was too short update ad we r sooo hungry 4 manveer dat everything we find short n unsatisfying...

thanks a lot😊

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

OMG zina!...That was amzing and so rhythmic.👏

so we have got a poet in our forum..Infact we have lots but the way the confession was done was just so blissful and so very dreamy!...Romantic will be an understatement for your confession scene..Yes it was dreamy and very beautifully done...⭐️

Keep up the good work!👍🏼

thanks a lot gargi the poetry isn't mine but it took me to long to find for each kind of feeling😊