ManVeer FF:~~We Are One~~[CH-18-pg-153] 30/03/2014 - Page 14

Originally posted by: ...navina...

WOW ... that was excellent!!! So romantic & very well writen👏. Loved it Zainab. My favourite part was:

Why are you so cold towards me ? why don't u pay heed to my presence? Why u didn't make love to me on our first night ? why u didn't even look at me? Why didn't u make me yours? Why did u leave me on the first day of our wedding? Why didn't u attend my calls? Why didn't u called me back? Why? Was that care and love which u always had for your princess was it all before marriage why uday why? U r not the same uday I know he was my uday only my who just loved me just cared for his princess who was not able to stay away from his princess for even one day who was always behind me all day following me!
WHY? WHY? Saying she collapsed on the floor holding his legs crying bitterly still murmuring why uday why?

It literally gave me goose-bumps😳.

Update soon Dear, ... I'm dying to read the next chapter😉. Thank u 4 the PM😊

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomeee...update love it zinu baby...but its too short...i want lamba wala update...but koi baat nahi hum issi se kaam chala lenge...
Yeahhh...finally manyata confess her love...confession was sooo...too good awww...uday is sooo...sweet...uday know his wify very well...uday ko pata tha ki manyata ushe miss kar rahi thi hogi iss liye bichari ko ignore kiye jaa raha tha...how rude...finally uday confess he love her not riyasat...precape is intresting *wink* update soon thanx for PM.

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

wooow!!! it was mind blowing and awesum. a perfect 'milan'. u shud update fast. and also not wait for the pages to cover. now dont update wen its on page 18. we want it on page 15 or 16. plz...

Originally posted by: Softy17

its awessomme fantastic lovely👏👏👏
but it was short update
update soon

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Sorry zina dear

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late comment

actually yesterday i dint get tym 2 check IF bcz of my cousin sis naming ceremony!!!

awesum update n dis is nt fair u stopped d update at d wrong tym😭😭 nw m dying 2 read d next update🤢😉😳

do cont soon n thnks 4 d PM 😃

n do u thnk any1 can ignore such a wonderful update!!!!!😡

dnt ever thnk like dat!!!!

Originally posted by: manisha98

luved it so much!!! plz do continue soon

waiting 4r d next chapter eagerly😃

Originally posted by: puggyy

FANTASTIC UPDATE👏!!

Loved it , so cute n emotional ...confession was emotional and has a depth ...superb 👍🏼

Pls update soon 😕 Don't make me to wait for a long time.

Sunday pls

FABULOUS UPDATE 👏!!!

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Ziina dear..I commented on your note yesterday but then net got disconnected so couldn't post it..was so irritating😡

Ok coming to the point...Its alright if you have taken those lines or poetry from Net...ATleast ur so honest and thats what m really impressed.

But u must have heard that even to copy well you need to have brains and talent in it😆..And you do have that sweety..Because the lines that u took from net, i know how much u must have searched them and u have worked hard to put them together and make them reveal Manyata's inner feelings so well...👏👏..So still credit goes to you for it👍🏼..Fantastic..Update soon waiting😊

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

awesome chappy di:)thanx for the PM:)

Originally posted by: andy.a

Pls continue soon pls pls pls