Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21

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sapphhire

@sapphhire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

thank god all virman problems are sorted.

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Omg...tat was awesome...great update..virman reunion was great...loved to the core..i
Have been waiting for this update.,and when i saw the pm.,.i was soo happy
And was literally smiling...continue soon..can't wait...thank u so
Much for the pm.,, 😊

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Suarez

@Suarez

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Wow...wat an awesome update !!! M still thinking whether it's possible for Maanvi to forgive Virat !!!
She still love him n care for him despote what happen !!! Anger didnt overshadow her love !! Love her spirit ...her positive attitude !! She is really a brave girl !!
Even feel bad for Virat ... one must feel terrible wen u knw u r d reason 4 hurting d person u love d most !!
Brilliantly written !! Cnt wait 4 d next update !!
Thank you for d pm !!
Merry Christmas !! 😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

AWESOME Update!!!!👍🏼 Love the flow of the story...both thought n then took decision..simply good..Thnks for the pm!

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

woww... what an update...!!!!

it was just freakingly awesome...

thanks a ton for a longgg update...

pls try n continue soon dear...

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Kidrauhl

@Kidrauhl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Kya update tha yaar seriously. It was full of anger, hatred, jelousy, and most of all love ❤️. Manvis care and concern yet being angry at virat at that moment made me chuckle slightly 😆. Manvi asked maya kitni mirchi dalun 🤣«== my expression. And maya drugged his drink what a B***H and a half 😡. The way he vented his anger out at her it was like being on the ninth heaven mazza aagaya 😉. Manvi and virats confrontation was soo cute 😳 and then the proposal wss an absolute awe moment 😳. And she will only accept until he gets her a ring 😆. Overall update was magnificent 😃.
Update soon and pm me please.
P.S. the doctor play the role of cupid in my perspective that was truely an amazing character included in the ff 👏
Inayah 🤓

Edited by S.Khan - 12 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

What an update dear!!! Fantastic ⭐️..Finally they are back together!!!! .. I love Maanvi in this story.. She is amazing.. She is loving, caring, understanding but above all she is a fighter... even after going through all those bad experiences, she didn't give up on life, specially on love.. I loved the way you portrayed her.. Excellent 👏.. I really felt a strong compassion for Virat in this update.. Poor him.. He was tricked by that witch Maya.. but he treated her right.. Virman's confrontation part was very well written.. I loved the moment when he proposed her.. It was simple yet magical .. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for this wonderful long update and for the pm also.. Take care 😊

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js1234

@js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

WOW! You turned this around really brilliantly. Its very difficult to forgive and forget when you are place in that situation - where Manvi was.

But the way you portrayed both of their feelings, emotions and love was amazing.

Thank you for such beautiful piece of writing.

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

WOW god damn that was just urreeemmm
Im speechless manvis anger towards virat
Was bang on jeevika being confused was so good
You had every thing anger jokes silence feeling
Sacred and most of all romance loved how she
Forgave him and got rid of his guilt loved the proposal
Awesome update loved it to rhw core continue soon
And do pm me