Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Awesome update👏.. Thank you for updating..I was eagerly waiting for this part.. I have already told you before that you are a brilliant writter... and you proved me right once again.. Seriously how did you manage to write so well!! I loved the detailed description of their reactions and emotions after that incident.. Maanvi's pain, her disappoinment with life, Virat's realisation and his guilt, each and everything is beautifully portrayed.. I loved this strong-willed Maanvi.. Loved your note.. and you words about Maanvi.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for the pm..😊

thankq so much, your words make me feel so good 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Why do I always end up taking care of them? Can't I be taken care of for a change? the line uff ... my heart ached...

'Love' is a verb Manvi, a person cannot do an act of hatred and claim to be 'in love'. we all know that this is the truth but don't want to accept... because the dreamworld is the only way we can be happy

The sooner you realize that your super-hero is not coming to rescue you from your heart-ache, the sooner you can rescue yourself out of this misery. Nobody is coming to fix you world's biggest misery, superheros are only in book... hard too accept but reality.

I am only going to focus on myself. My career, my goal, my promise to my mother, that, I will make myself useful to the world, There is a similar kind of stories in every successful person's life...

when I recalled about previous update, I want to hate Virat and want he get worse punishment, even if he was not in his sense
when I saw the helplessness the care the repentance in his eyes, his voice I want to give him a more chance
if I am in the dilemma,what will be Manvi's condition?
loved the hospital room scene of Virman... where Virat asked "you ok?" and her reply...and Virat's "I am sorry baby, I am so so sorry" kudos to you
👏 I don't know for this delhi mishap or what I am becoming very emotional and sorry for my this much long comment but I have say this

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shona9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

dats lyk manvi...

loved it...

awsme...

thanx 4 d pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: preity_d
Why do I always end up taking care of them? Can't I be taken care of for a change? the line uff ... my heart ached...

'Love' is a verb Manvi, a person cannot do an act of hatred and claim to be 'in love'. we all know that this is the truth but don't want to accept... because the dreamworld is the only way we can be happy

The sooner you realize that your super-hero is not coming to rescue you from your heart-ache, the sooner you can rescue yourself out of this misery. Nobody is coming to fix you world's biggest misery, superheros are only in book... hard too accept but reality.

I am only going to focus on myself. My career, my goal, my promise to my mother, that, I will make myself useful to the world, There is a similar kind of stories in every successful person's life...

when I recalled about previous update, I want to hate Virat and want he get worse punishment, even if he was not in his sense
when I saw the helplessness the care the repentance in his eyes, his voice I want to give him a more chance
if I am in the dilemma,what will be Manvi's condition?
loved the hospital room scene of Virman... where Virat asked "you ok?" and her reply...and Virat's "I am sorry baby, I am so so sorry" kudos to you
👏 I don't know for this delhi mishap or what I am becoming very emotional and sorry for my this much long comment but I have say this

omg! thank you so much, your words mean a lot to me. More than anything, I understand that you feel and understand them too. Sometimes, you read something and you have seen stuff like that before and you just pass it off. But sometimes you read stuff, it grabs your attention and you know that applies to you or someone you know, somehow. You get connected and I guess that's what I strive for, most people for that matter. I am really glad. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Cheers. The more I read my post, the more I feel that there is a part in it, that represents my outrage for the Delhi incident, the state of the girl. I can't even put myself in her situtation, her feelings. It is just heart-wrenching. :(:(

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

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true sometimes if it is not happening with you or your loved ones but looking at the situation of our country as a human being I feel I feel for them ... after watching the news of delhi case I am just making my fist and giving myself pain with my nails I am so angry on them I want to offer their flesh to street dogs and vultures

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: preity_d
true sometimes if it is not happening with you or your loved ones but looking at the situation of our country as a human being I feel I feel for them ... after watching the news of delhi case I am just making my fist and giving myself pain with my nails I am so angry on them I want to offer their flesh to street dogs and vultures

yep, you are absolutely right..that's how most of us feel. Its anger and hurt and helplessness.