Sachha Pyaar-virman- ff-updated part 21 - Page 26

Hey Dat waz a great update
Contine soon
Pm me plze

That was such a wonderful update...
Loved it 😊

thanks for long update..
n its awesome...

humm how can I praise your this part by taking words??
no words are enough. the way you showed Manvi's behavior her dilemma, her pain, virat's guilt, his helplessness everything
when Virat hurt his own hand ong my heart pierced when I can't punish this guy how can Manvi? Yes he did a crime but... he got his penalty... the feeling of loosing his beloved Manvi was the biggest penalty for him.
when finally it snowed. virat's expressions...ohh..
and when he said "I need to see" at night in the last part of update... really dear you are awesome and your this ff will always be a part of my heart

Originally posted by: preity_d

humm how can I praise your this part by taking words??
no words are enough. the way you showed Manvi's behavior her dilemma, her pain, virat's guilt, his helplessness everything
when Virat hurt his own hand ong my heart pierced when I can't punish this guy how can Manvi? Yes he did a crime but... he got his penalty... the feeling of loosing his beloved Manvi was the biggest penalty for him.
when finally it snowed. virat's expressions...ohh..
and when he said "I need to see" at night in the last part of update... really dear you are awesome and your this ff will always be a part of my heart

Originally posted by: madpaki

WOW god damn that was just urreeemmm
Im speechless manvis anger towards virat
Was bang on jeevika being confused was so good
You had every thing anger jokes silence feeling
Sacred and most of all romance loved how she
Forgave him and got rid of his guilt loved the proposal
Awesome update loved it to rhw core continue soon
And do pm me

Originally posted by: js1234

WOW! You turned this around really brilliantly. Its very difficult to forgive and forget when you are place in that situation - where Manvi was.

But the way you portrayed both of their feelings, emotions and love was amazing.

Thank you for such beautiful piece of writing.

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

What an update dear!!! Fantastic ⭐️..Finally they are back together!!!! .. I love Maanvi in this story.. She is amazing.. She is loving, caring, understanding but above all she is a fighter... even after going through all those bad experiences, she didn't give up on life, specially on love.. I loved the way you portrayed her.. Excellent 👏.. I really felt a strong compassion for Virat in this update.. Poor him.. He was tricked by that witch Maya.. but he treated her right.. Virman's confrontation part was very well written.. I loved the moment when he proposed her.. It was simple yet magical .. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for this wonderful long update and for the pm also.. Take care 😊

hey dear it was an awesome update

i loved it so much

thank god finally virman are togather

sorry for the late comment

and thanks for pm

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: S.Khan

Kya update tha yaar seriously. It was full of anger, hatred, jelousy, and most of all love ❤️. Manvis care and concern yet being angry at virat at that moment made me chuckle slightly 😆. Manvi asked maya kitni mirchi dalun 🤣'== my expression. And maya drugged his drink what a B***H and a half 😡. The way he vented his anger out at her it was like being on the ninth heaven mazza aagaya 😉. Manvi and virats confrontation was soo cute 😳 and then the proposal wss an absolute awe moment 😳. And she will only accept until he gets her a ring 😆. Overall update was magnificent 😃.
Update soon and pm me please.
P.S. the doctor play the role of cupid in my perspective that was truely an amazing character included in the ff 👏
Inayah 🤓