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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks to all of you for your valuable comment!!! I hope I live up to your expectations in the future too........
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks to all of you for your valuable comment!!! I hope I live up to your expectations in the future too........
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Posted: 18 years ago
I'll surely post the next part by tomorrow!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
khyatu dear your story totally rocks...the part was awesome..mujhe bohat achcha laga.. yash ko seher ne baatein sunayi..yash ko thappad pada...mazaa aagaya.. really a very coolllll part......you keep up the good work... 👏
par me feeling very bad for seher..bechari... raj ke bina kitna tadap rahi hain... 😭
i hope raj seher get back together soon... please get them together soon.. 😉 😉 ab next part jaldi se post karna.. me will be waiting for it eagerly... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Love You Foreverrrrrr………Part 10

RECAP: Yash and Seher's car unfortunately accidents Raj's car and he is badly injured. Yash leaves Seher midway for the fear of being caught in the hit-and-run case. Seher is with Raj in the hospital and is lost in old memories. Srishti calls up on Raj's cell when Seher explains her about the accident.

Seher was still crying and it was a very emotional moment for her. She just wanted Raj to be fine. Just then her cell rang……

"Seher beta, you didn't come back with Yash!" Asked Mr. Singhania.

"Papa! I had some work and so did Yash so we cancelled the lunch."

"Oh! Well………never mind! You both will soon be together forever." He replied naughtily. "By the way, where are you right now?"

"Papa I'll call you later, bye!" Seher disconnected the line.

Mr. Singhania was little surprised at this.

Seher again looked at Raj. She scrambled her fingers over his head and could feel the spark of love within. She closed her eyes and said, "I wish I hadn't left you like that!"

Just then Srishti came running in the room. She heard Seher talking to Raj about their past love. She was damn surprised and Seher stood up in astonishment.

"Ms. Seher Singhania!? Right?" Asked Srishti for confirmation.

"Y…ye…yess" Seher was confused.

"But, you and Raj??? I mean………" Srishti was surprised. "I think I must leave now!" Saying this, Seher left the room with tears in her eyes.

Srishti too was amazed but she stepped foreward towards Raj, looked at him with a 'Get Well Soon' smile and sat beside him, "You know what Raj! Rohan is much better now. And you too have to get well soon……"

Suddenly Seher came back………

"Sorry! But Raj's mobile and this bag was with me. These are his belongings." Seher said while handling over the things to Srishti.

"Thanks Ms. Singhania!" Said Srishti.

Seher turned back and while hiding her tears, she said, "Anyone in my place would have done the same. Take care, bye!" Saying this she left.

Srishti said to herself, "So! Seher and Raj have some past connection………" As she said this, Raj opened his eyes. "Wao! That means a strong connection exists……"

Saying this she went towards Raj. Raj opened his eyes.

"Raj! Yor're fine naa? Raj!!!"

"Srishti………How is Rohan?"

"Rohan is much better now! If you wouldn't have been there………"

"Then someone else would have been. The help had to reach you in some or the other way."

"But your accident………"

"Now please don't start crying Srishti!!!"

Just then Srishti's cell rang.

"Hello"

"Srishti! Thank God you attended. Where are you Srishti is everything all right??? Say something naa………you know what………" Asked Geeta anxiously.

"Geeta!!!!! Listen to me………" She walked out of the room and explained everything to Geeta. "You know what, I was totally shattered. If Raj wouldn't have been there then I may have not been able to get through this."

"For how many days will Rohan remain admitted?"

"It'll take time for him to recover………3 to 4 days!!!"

Geeta paused for a second and then asked, "And Raj, how is he?"

"He'll have to stay here for a week more. His has got some major injuries. I just hope he gets well soon."

"He'll; don't worry! But Srishti, he doesn't have his family here naa, who'll take care of him?"

"I'll try to help as much as I can……I'll be there for him."

"That means you'll be on leave for some days."

"How can that be my concern at this time Geeta? He didn't think twice before bunking his lectures on risk of his job to help me, that too when he knows me just for a few days!!"

"Stupid I'm not saying that! I just wanted to say that if you need help, just remember that I'm a call away."

"I know."

"Now before you say thanks to me, I must leave. I think I should tell this to Prashant Sir as well as Mr. Bhasin that where you both actually are otherwise his wild mind will make numerous more unnecessary interpretations."

"Unnecessary interpretations?"

"Nothing yaar! You just take care of Rohan and Mr. Malhotra. I'll come to see Rohan in the evening."

"Ok! Bye!"

Srishti came inside and found that Raj has slept. She went closer, smiled, covered him with a sheet and came out.

At St. Stephen's staff-room, Geeta explained the matter to Prashant Sir.

"I told you Geeta! But you didn't believe me. Raj is a very nice person." Said Prashant Sir.

"Whatever, but he is still not worth you 24-hour praise." Exclaimed Geeta. Seeing this Prashant Sir started laughing. "Now why are you laughing Sir?"

"You know what Geeta, he is worth it. You have realized that but it'll take time for someone like you to admit it." With these words Prashant Sir gave a naughty smile and left for his lecture.

"Sir! You are too much."

Seher reached her house. She was really very sad. Her body was here but mind was constantly glued to what Raj's condition must be.

"Seher! Here you are……come." Called Mrs. Singhania as she entered. "Meet Mrs. Raichand, Mrs. Chopra and Mrs. Mehra. They are all my very good friends."

"Namaste!" Seher greeted them very vaguely.

"Just excuse us." Mrs. Singhania took her aside. "What is this Seher? Why did you behave like that?"

"But what did I do mumma?"

"I introduced you to some of my very high-class associates. You must have………………"

"Please mumma, I'm in no mood of any kind of show-off! I'm not feeling well."

"What happened? Seher, from the day one you have been here like this. Mumma used to tell me about your lively nature during your stay in Nainitaal! But I've not been lucky enough to see you bright smile even once. What is the matter god damn it!!!!!"

Seher just left the place without saying a word.

At the hospital, Srishti deposited the left over amount and was sitting with Rohan.

"I've told you hundred times not to slide over the staircase railing. Then why did you do it. See what has happened!" Srishti said to Rohan.

"Mumma I promise not to do it again." Promised Rohan.

"That's like a good boy!!!" Said Geeta as she entered Rohan's room. "How are you Rohan?"

"I'm fine didi." As he said this, Geeta kissed him on his forehead. She sat with them for sometime, they talked, and then suddenly Srishti said, "Oh no! Its 8 'o' clock already!"

"So what?"

"I need to take the dinner to Raj Geeta! But Rohan has also not had his dinner yet."

"Oh!"

"Geeta!"

"Hmmmmm……"

"Why don't you go with the dinner to Raj?"

"What???????? Meeeeeee??????"

"Why are you so shocked? I haven't asked you to wild! And you said you'll help me."

"But I don't even know him properly yaar!"

"So you'll get to know him now. Geeta!!!! Please!!!!!"

"Ok! Ok! Where is he admitted?"

PRECAP: "What are you doing here? Please leave before I…………" Expressed Raj. "Am I not even deserving enough to ask you how have you been doing since your accident? Raj you can't just cut-off from me like that! I still love you!!!!!!!!!"

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Posted: 18 years ago
khyatu dear the part was simply superb..
extraodinary.. brilliant...awesome..fantastic.... i don't have words to express to what extent i like your story.. you are indeed a very damn good writer.. the part totally rocked.... 👏
dear ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me seriously cannot wait for long for the next part as your story is going too intresting.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

khyatu dear the part was simply superb..
extraodinary.. brilliant...awesome..fantastic.... i don't have words to express to what extent i like your story.. you are indeed a very damn good writer.. the part totally rocked.... 👏
dear ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me seriously cannot wait for long for the next part as your story is going too intresting.. 😃

Di aap bhi naa! Itni bhi achi nahi ho sakti. Khaiir hum next part jald he post karne ki koshish karenge!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome, mind blowing. 👏

Thanks a lott for this applause😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Khyati vry nice part 👏gr8 👏cont soon

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