Love You Forever: The last part is here!! - Page 18

Originally posted by: sun_423

khyatu dear please jaldi se continue karna.. me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃

Di! Your wait will be over the next minute!

Love You Foreverrrrrr………Part 11

RECAP: Srishti gets to know that there is some past link between Raj and Seher. Geeta talks to her and tells everyone about the whole matter. Srishti convinces Geeta to take dinner for Raj where he is admitted.

Srishti packs dinner for Raj and gives it to Geeta. She heads for the hospital where Raj is admitted and there at the parking lot, sees a girl crying!

"Excuse me" Asked Geeta.

The girl turned and Geeta saw tears in her eyes.

"Any problem! I mean………why are you crying?" Geeta asked again but of no use. The girl ran away with a sad expression.

"What was the matter with her?? Maybe some relative of hers is not well." She stood there thinking and then suddenly realized why she had come here, "Oh god! Mr. Malhotra………!!!" She too rushed inside the hospital building.

"Excuse me! Where is Mr. Raj Malhotra admitted?" Geeta asked at the reception.

"Room number. 204" Answered the receptionist.

"Thank you!"

"What are you doing here? Please leave before I…………" Expressed Raj as Seher entered his room.

"Am I not even deserving enough to ask you how have you been doing since your accident? Raj you can't just cut-off from me like that! I still love you!!!!!!!!!" Seher replied in a very sad tone.

"Love????? What's that?????? Oh yes!! Maybe some word in the English Oxford Dictionary right? Actually my vocabulary is not………"

"Please Raj!!! Stop this……You can't say this to me."

"Why can't I? After doing such a big favour to me………you deserve this praise don't you?"

Seher had no answer.

"You do Ms. Singhania! And this is nothing!!! You don't even know what a relieved life I'm living since then."

"Raj just listen to me once, there is some misunderstanding………"

"There is no misunderstanding Seher. The only misunderstanding was that I loved you………My only and only mistake was that I led you take the place of Natasha in my life………… (Seher was just looking at him in surprise, and after a pause, Raj continued)…………I regret falling in love with you Seher Singhania!!!!"

There was an unwanted silence for a moment. Both Raj and Seher looking at each other and Geeta listening to their confrontation from outside. Seher could not take Raj's words and she fainted there and then!

"Seher!!!!" Raj shouted. Geeta kept the Tiffin on the bench nearby and ran to call the doctor. Raj came down from his bed and in the process of waking up Seher, he twisted his injured leg.

Just then the doctor entered, "Mr. Malhotra you cannot be out of your bed! See what you have done."

"Doctor, please…………" Said Raj while pointing towards unconscious Seher.

"Mr. Malhotra I'll attend her but you have to take rest. Come on!" Doctor checks through Seher while Geeta helped Raj lie down on his bed safely.

"You should have been careful Mr. Malhotra! You're already injured." Suggested Geeta.

Raj wasn't interested in what she was saying; he just wanted to hear the Seher is fine.

"She is fine now, just a bit of drowsiness! It happens sometimes, nothing to worry about." Said the doctor.

By then, Seher also stood up and doctor asked, "Are you some relative of his?"

Before Seher could answer, Raj replied, "No doc! She's not. She by mistake entered my room."

"Oh! So, everything is fine now I guess! Mr. Malhotra, take care. I must take a leave now." Saying this the doctor left.

There was complete silence in the room. Raj and Geeta both were thinking about the same thing – The confrontation! Both wanted to start off with a new topic but the Raj and Seher's words were more overpowering. The flurry of emotions was disturbing. Where on one hand, Raj faced Seher after such a long time, Geeta too saw a different face of Raj. Neither Raj wanted to discuss anything about Seher with her, nor did Geeta wanted him to know that she heard everything.

"How are you feeling now?" Geeta started the conversation so that Raj doesn't feel odd.

"I'm fine! But…"

Geeta read the obvious question in his eyes and said, "Actually Srishti was busy with Rohan so I thought she asked me if I could take dinner for you."

"No need to bother, tell Srishti also that I'll manage."

"I'm sure you will, but the point is that we won't let you do that" She answered with a naughty smile with hope of changing Raj's mood. "So, what's your favourite dish Mr. Malhotra?"

"Nothing!"

"Amazing! Mine too!! It's damn tasty right?" She giggled.

Raj too smiled a bit.

"Are you upset?"

"No……Not at all!"

"Then there must be NO SMILING DAY today."

"No such day exists………"

"Then Mr. Mal………"

"Raj! The name is Raj."

"So you too have to call me nothing but Geeta."

Raj just passed a smile and Geeta served the food to him. Neither Raj, nor Geeta realized Seher's presence who was constantly looking at Raj while he was busy having his food. At last when Geeta was about to stand up, Seher left hurriedly. While pacing down the hospital corridor, she said to herself, "Does my presence or absence matter to him anymore? Has he really been successful in throwing me and my memories out of his life unlike me? Today; his words have hurt me deep inside! I don't know what to do! No, I know that I want to spend my whole life with Raj and love him………………………foreverr……everrr……and everrrr!!!! But…………I wish daadi you were here!!!"

PRECAP: "I don't know Srishti if that girl was right or Mr. Malhotra, but when I was with him; I could notice the discomfort and earnest desire to be all alone in his eyes. His pain could be felt deep inside. He loves her so much Srishti; he loves her so much!!!!!!!!"

another amazing part..dear.. 👏

luved reading it .... just too gud 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Deeya

lovely part Khyati!!!!
gr8 goin!!

Thanks Deeya di!

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

another amazing part..dear.. 👏

luved reading it .... just too gud 👏 👏 👏

Thanks di!!! Love you!

Here's wishing all the readers of my story, a very happy and prosoerous diwali!!!

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Originally posted by: Deeya

yup me too..
wishing all u guys a vry happy diwali!!!!

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khyatu dear yeh part tho mujhe bohat achcha laga..
yaar pehle baat tho seher aur raj ke beech ki baat.. seher ka trying to explain... raj ka seher ki taraf ka indifferent attitude... that scene between raj & khushi was very touching...emotional... mere dil ko choo gaya...i felt very bad for seher.. seher ki halat dekh kar tho mere aankhon mein aasoo aagaye.. aur i felt sorry for raj.. kyunke he is kind off hepless...... par still i felt the story was was very well written.... the part totally rocked..this part had everything in it..... absolutely everything... a totally perfect part... it had all the emotions thode asoo , thoda dard , thodi helplessness..aur bohat saara pyaar.. aur is part mein maine yeh bhi mehsoos kiya ki unka pyaar bohat ghehra hain...😭
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ab please jaldi se continue karna , me waiting for the next part eagerly....😃 dear yeh ek diwali request hain please raj aur seher ko zara kareeb lekar aana.. unke beech ki duriyaan mitana.... & now i think geeta aur shristi yeh kaam karenge... kyun?? 😉
ab please continue soon... 😊 😛 😃
HAPPY DIWALI khyatu dear... 🤗