KR OS: The Midnight Envisage - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOMEEE...!!!!!
I just luvdd the whole ideaa...<3
aaw they have a son...
reallly amazingg..
...They are justtt tooo cutee...:')
lreally reallu luvv..
superb writing...
thank you for PM...
n again
luvvvd it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
wow it was beautifully written! loved it! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Vaishu wat a piece of work darls!
Ceriously loved it yaar...
The starting lines made the environment with the emotions of hurt and sadness...
Rey being over possessive or i must say obsessive was worth punishing
On day or the other he had to spit out everything and like it happened...
I know how sensitive girls are plus these things takes them to the next level of beong quite n boycotting world at the same time...
But i like Rey didn't leave hope and tried to make up to her in every possible way...

loved it yaaar..
Keep up the good work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
I'll be frank.. I wanted her to never ever forgive the bloody bas***d and let him rot in hell.. But eh.. u already know that!

The writing was amazing vaish! Really really lovely!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Amazing Os Vaishu..
Never knew u would turn it up this way..
The feel was great..
I loved the feel that I felt while reading it...
Things happen that cant be changed but s we can overcome it and thats what has happened ..:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome OS...different concept and superbly written
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Aww. . . .
Super sweet os. . .
Lovd it. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Fabulous work Vaishali.. It's definitely a unique one..
Rey was repenting so much..bt he deserved this silent punishment for what he did with her..
Possessiveness is probably a part of Love, bt when it turns to Insecurity, it can destroy a relationship brutally! U described it so beautifully..
n Finally luvd to see them together again..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Casper...
yes..
i"m here to comment 😆
Don't be shocked... I was super bored and I really needed something to do...
turns out... my love for reading is still strong 😛
So I looked at my unread pmz and this pm was the first...
this'll be the first and last that I'll read until I get bored again..
which might not be till next 4-5 months..
oh well..
you can consider this your birthday gift? 😳


So...
I LOVED this os...
their love, the guilt, bearing the other for their baby...
it was all cute and adorable.
I liked the way you've portrayed the things.
The dialogues were perfect and I could feel their emotions as well.
The ending was just as perfect as the beginning.
You started out with hatred and then ended it with love...
The way Rey hated it in beginning and then Kriya slightly as well..
but both willing to go through it for a love sign.. they baby!
Truly... a mistake might not always stay a mistake...
It can take the shape of the strongest feeling on Earth at times.
Loved how you showed that.
Keep writing more :D
Though I may not read...
you always have my love with you :D

-khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
^ Khushi I dnt know about others or Vaishu but I'm shocked seriously...
This is really a pleasant..


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