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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

amazing os

it was beautifully described

i loved it

thanks for pm

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awsome os ..!
Loved it ..!

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

res...

unres...

fabulus...👏

just luv it...

beautifully written...😊

Edited by d3riya - 12 years ago

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nightlife1881

@Priyanka_G14

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

its ausm

it was a treat to read a story like this

luved it to d core😊

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

awesome...

beautifully written...

just loved it .. especially ending yar...

thnx for pm...

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wooww awosmeme you erocked i5t cvaishu it was sso col yeh it was diferent from your otehr ff it wasnt lyk the others i still thnk this could have been beter but sorry jus had 2 tell u this

but the story line was gd the ending wass the bests very nyc keep it uppp...

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

U know my review already...ab kya type bhi karna padega...?

Ans mil gaya...- Ha padega...

It was amazing...i really liked it

i mean the start was perfect...
I loved it...

And upto a limit even the flashback part was good...

The end was hmmm sweet...

All in all a great attempt... Keep writing more...love u...

B/w ya jaane se pehle i again want to say this
"I Loved the Flashback!"
*Rofl*

jaldi wapas aajana...

Special thanx to shenz *winks*
for making u write this os this fast...

Thanx for the pm

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

wow wow just wow...
i jus luvd it...
i hv no words to apprecite this...
m speechless...
rey is possesive kind
kriya par doubt kiya or kitna kuch suna b diya...
uff..these guyz...
finally he realized his mistake..
n their family compelets wid their baby..
it was jus perfect...
amazing work...
thnx 4 the pm...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Kya baat hai vaishu . . . . . Maine pucha aur tune agle din post kar diya . . . . . Meko pata hai tune bas final touches dene honge tab 😆
rey as shaqi lover 😈
(btw . . . They were'nt married? )
obviously jab kriya ko uske ex ke sath daily uske ghar pe dekhega to yahi haalat hogi na 🤔
& top of that uske ex ka divorce hoying 😕
& the ultimate worst day when he lost the contract & kriya told him that she's an expecting mother . . . . . . He spit all his anger on her character 😡
kriya must be hell hurt . . . . . He did'nt think abt her at all
she never allowed herself to get close wid him or share anything like before 😔
her heart already died when he blamed her . . . . . . She was leading on her life for her baby only 😊
rey must have tried the whole timespan of 9 months to manaofy her . . . . . . But she was strongwilled 😵
i'm glad she agreed atlast . . . . . His happiness, his love is real . . . . She could'nt deny 🤗
vaise bhi kriyaansh are destined together 🥳