KR OS: The Midnight Envisage

pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

just beautiful vaishu... awesome...

i loved it... to the core...

although u are right it is way different from all ur other works but it's sweet , simple, siren is the USP...

u have described a pure innocent love very beautifully...

rey's possessiveness, kriya's POV, and then rey's way of mending his mistakes everything was simply amazing...

his way of being doting and loving father and taking care of kriya everything thing touched straight to heart...

i loved it...just loved it... i don't have much in words to express my self..ab tu samjh jaa ...

thanks for pm...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 12 years ago

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Neethu Uthaman

@-Neethu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing OS. It touchd my heart. Well written vaishu. Really a gud one baby

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CHOCOLATEKRIYA

@CHOCOLATEKRIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

its really fab and outstanding os well done

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

fabulus os...:) loved d care ,lov ,affection nd responsibility vch rey show...:) jst osssoomm...:) thanxx 4 pm

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Fabulous os 👏
Beautifully written 😃
Loved it 😊

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

😊

ok am commentin finally..i lykd it. i really did.

i dunno y u keep sayin its not upto d mark

d song was well suited, plus it made me blush.

and i lykd how well u put d entire situation.

i dint realise only dey werent married till he asked her to marry him.

overall, it was beautiful. gr8 concept, showing rey's possesive side really well.

Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

ek cheez toh bata na bhul hi gayi...

length ke liye sorry... PC do baar crash hua hai...

itna hi badi mushkil se diya hai 😳

aur chahiye...

toh bol de...

scrap kar dungi 😛

Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

bache n bacha liya vana muskil ho jati

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

very sweet
loved the relationship u described
thnx 4 da pm

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

wonderful os...
beautifully explained especially the past moments...
rey is so possessive nd above all A anger young man...
possessive hona achi baata hai par itni bhi nhi ki situation karab kar de...
literaly i have notice that boys are very confused person in earth...
ek toh itna late realise kiya, aur itni late shaadi ke liye pucha..
aur jab kria ne yes bola toh phir se confuse... haye bhagwan ladke itne confuse kyu hote hai???
chalo chodo isse... atlast sab thik ho gaya...
awww baby boy for kriyaansh... shhooo cuuttteee
Happy Family... 😊
thnx for pm

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