KR OS: The Midnight Envisage - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Eeeps !! Vaishu !! Lamba hai bohot !! .. resd for now .. got to write huge comment ! And yes hugs meri jaan !

Having bhel puri ! .. le kahyegi tu bol ?:P resd continued !! still reading !

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Okay read it all ! , having my one leg paining , cause i was sitting still for 10 minute's and its sleeping now ! urghhh !


Vaishu ! Indeed it's one of the best Os i ever read !





The way you started , Rey lamenting , and the way You showed him waking up and he want's to start his day with her sight !



Aww .. you know ek cheez teko batana bhul gayi thi mai phone pe ... Arre there is something .. regarding side thingy , Pregnant women should sleep on their right / left side , with their husband's supporting them on the other side ! I so wished u added some thing this ! :P hehe




Arre mazaaak !! :P teri leg pulling ! :P




And then you showed The way kriya was just dragging their relationship , with almost no emotion's shit ! i feLT SAD FOR HER AND REY TOO ...




Then The way rey was trying to help her , in each way he could !! aww he just took my heart away ! ❤️



Then his possessiveness .. It's was all of sudden anger burst ! in which he said much more , just letting his frustrations out ...



A single moment and he just crushed all he had !




I felt like killing you , to put them in such condition .. but you know na . I love you more ! ..❤️ .. i restored my feelings 🤣 ..

Even i liked Sid ka character ! ...😎

Then .. Shit the ending was ... heavenly ..


Rey ka baby walla line effin cute tha !!


Vaish !!... Love you for writing this !


And yes .. Song so so so good ! perfect for this situation ! 🤗


lOVE ..

your's

Upasna !
Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago
agirlhasnoname. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Unresd baby ! Love you !! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Sorry for late commet

IT was just AWSOME!!!!!

Superb!!!! I Loved it!!!

You write sooo welll!!!!!

Plz write more OS!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
look here u go

70 likes

I knoe tu asantusht praani...

aur toh aur teri explanation...

48 hrs mein sirf 70 likes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Di, Amazing OS!
It was a unique one and had all the emotions well described!
Rey's jealousy, anger, him making it up to Kriya.. and also the sweet happy family moment in the end :)
It was all very amazing! :D
It was beautifully written, as usual :D
well done, great work!
And this is perfect di, I love it! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Omfg

is this true...
SHIT...

upi u won i loose...

Vaishu...

God...pinch me sumone...

Plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Vaishu maate ke like ke shakshat darshan hue
agirlhasnoname. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Omfg

is this true...
SHIT...

upi u won i loose...

Vaishu...

God...pinch me sumone...

Plz...

*pinching u* hehe yey i won
thanku vish :*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti

*pinching u* hehe yey i won
thanku vish :*

nt fair
muje pata hai
sab pland tha muje harane k liye...huh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
aww kijjie nai it wasnt planned

it was written to happen by fate

omg :)

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