FF||An Untainted LoveStory(Chap 7- Pg 17) - Page 7

Originally posted by: faith_hope

Ok. here goes my comment..

So khushi is being attracted towards Arnav and Arnav can sense it.. hmm... but pls show Arnav's attraction towards Khushi also... I am dying to know how Arnav will fall for Khushi..

And ooopss.. Kabir and Yash caught red-handed!! hahaha😆

As you said we'll like Yash's brother so eager to know his character..😊

And Arnav will help them... hmm.. i think something interesting is going to happen... may be khushi will also help them and thus Arnav may fall for khushi...just guessing...🤔

And a request, it's completely your story and you are the writer so it's up to you how you will take the story further but phir bhi.. pls show Arnav's emotions for Khushi also..pls.😳😳

O wait!😲 I forgot to write something...

"Nice

I loved it!"😆

Thanks 4 d pm.

do update soon.

God Bless

Anjaani

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awesome one... loved dis... Plz update next part soon.. :)

Hey, I am tamil too ! I am from chennai but shifted to UK yaar ! Really loved the concept ! I wish there is a boy called Arnav ramakrishanan in cheennai ! Ufff ! Plzz accept my buddy request and PM me when u update

wow lovely update:)

kabir's expln to yash as to y she was sure was cute😉 khushi s falling for arnav and fidgets wen he is around... he even asked her abt her nervousness😆

awesome, u showed khushi is attracted towards arnav & wat abt him?

aww...thnxx a tonn..so sweet of u ❤️
sooo...finaly..khushi falling fr arnav w8ng to knw arnav's feelings fr her...!!!
loved d kabir-yashu library romance 😳 totally love kabir fr playng d cupid fr Arshi nd fr him nd yashu too...!!! 😉
omg!! yashu's Bhai is here nd he saw yashu nd kabir 😲 woww!! Arnav to d rescue...!!! sounds awesum 😳
eagerly w8ng fr d nxt update..!!! thnxx fr d PM 😊

Nice concept...!!!!
plz continue soon...!!!!
nd yes thanks for the pm... 😊

i lov ur ff. its simply awesome