FF||An Untainted LoveStory(Chap 7- Pg 17)

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summaiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

luv this updt

thanks for pm

updt soon

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45678

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

OH WOW. LOVE IS IN AIR.

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phillips_2909

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Omg its really fab
is it going to be a silent love.. Nice update n thanks for pm dr

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Muskaan_87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

lovely story:)

looking 4ward 2 read further:)

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..ashiya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome update... Do pm me frm nxt time..

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Shay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

YASH!
Phir se late... I know
You updated super fast though! Or is it that I'm extremely late with my own update? 😆

Amazing chapter Yash! I really don't know what more i can say... I LOVE the way you are building this up. I say this all the time but I'm liking this story more and more each time i read it it!

Firstly, i like the way you are integrating the Kabir and Yashashvini relationship in this. The stolen glances, the jealous glares! Hayyeee, young love and i love even more that Khushi has picked up on the oddness of their relationship. How they are so protective over each other in one moment and then at each others throats in the next. Hopefully she'll catch on quick 😉

Speaking of catching on quick... Kabir was quick to pick up on the vibe between Khushi and Arnav! I LOVE Kabir now. Because the rascal has a plan!!! I love plans. Bas!
And i can't wait to see what his plan is... Although, I'm sensing that Yashashvini is getting the wrong signal from Kabir in this instant? Does she think he might confess his love for her? I can;t be too sure lol. We shall see in the next update i guess 😆

Moving on... Arnavs husky voice has officially made an appearance and i am officially dead! *faints* and it's so clearly had the same effect on our lovely Khushi. Things are getting good... The attraction is increasing and i honestly cannot wait to see where this is all heading!

Fantastic update once again Yash! And I'm so sorry again for the late comment 😒 Kya kare? I'm so busy these days 👎🏼

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH 🤗❤️
Shay X

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: --Sarunholic--
Awesum update 😊 Loved d bondng btwn d 4 friends!! So..Arnav nd Khushi hv already strtd to feel somethng fr each othr..waitng fr d sparks to fly omg!! Kabir caught Khushi stealng glances of Arnav..nd immediatly textd Yashu!! Wonderng wat wil happen nxt 😉 Thnx fr d PM 😳 Update soon!!

Thank u so much!!!! And yeah... Kabir caught It!!!!! I Love him so Much Yaar!!!!!

Anyways thank u so much...

Yash

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: shay1990
YASH!
Phir se late... I know
You updated super fast though! Or is it that I'm extremely late with my own update? 😆

Amazing chapter Yash! I really don't know what more i can say... I LOVE the way you are building this up. I say this all the time but I'm liking this story more and more each time i read it it!

Firstly, i like the way you are integrating the Kabir and Yashashvini relationship in this. The stolen glances, the jealous glares! Hayyeee, young love and i love even more that Khushi has picked up on the oddness of their relationship. How they are so protective over each other in one moment and then at each others throats in the next. Hopefully she'll catch on quick 😉

Speaking of catching on quick... Kabir was quick to pick up on the vibe between Khushi and Arnav! I LOVE Kabir now. Because the rascal has a plan!!! I love plans. Bas!
And i can't wait to see what his plan is... Although, I'm sensing that Yashashvini is getting the wrong signal from Kabir in this instant? Does she think he might confess his love for her? I can;t be too sure lol. We shall see in the next update i guess 😆

Moving on... Arnavs husky voice has officially made an appearance and i am officially dead! *faints* and it's so clearly had the same effect on our lovely Khushi. Things are getting good... The attraction is increasing and i honestly cannot wait to see where this is all heading!

Fantastic update once again Yash! And I'm so sorry again for the late comment 😒 Kya kare? I'm so busy these days 👎🏼

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH 🤗❤️
Shay X

Koi baat nahi di... I am glad u replied...(as if I reply in a jiffy 😃)

*Hugs*

And yes... I love ya too!!!😳

and haan... bechari Yash thinks that its the other way round... god knows what shock she'sgonna have after she gets to know the real reason...😆

Arnav *sighs*

Thats the only word that escaped ma mouth...

And once again... thank u so much di...

I LOVE YOU SO SO SO SO MUCJ!!!!🤗

YAsh

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: casker
loved the update.
think kabir will plan with yashu to bring Arnav and kushi closer.

U got that right Casker!!!

Thank u so much... glad u liked it!!

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MemoriesDieHard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: faith_hope
It's awesome!
Bechaari khushi.. ise toh samajh hi nahi aa raha voh log tamil me kya bo rahe hain..Vaise aacha hua that you have provided the english translation of tamil convo, nahi toh mera bhi khushi ki tarah haal hota..😆
Loved it!
Thanks d pm.😊
Update next part soon. can't wait to see the romance of Aranv and khsuhi blossom.😃😃

Ha Ha Ha...And yes... i put the translated version for better understanding of the story...

am glad u liked it yar!!!!!