FF||An Untainted LoveStory(Chap 7- Pg 17) - Page 3

Originally posted by: casker

loved the update.

i thought yash will be a fiesty girl.

Originally posted by: shay1990

Once again... RES!

I'll read it tonight 😃
Love you Yash 🤗

EDIT*

I'm falling in love with this story more and more Yash!! Brilliant update, and a perfect way for them to meet!!

Firstly, let me just mention that i LOVED the conversation between Garima and Khushi at the start. Don't ask me why, i just did lol. The way she said 'take care baccha' it was so touching and cute. You've portrayed their relationship so wonderfully... Very realistic as well. Typical mother and daughter banter! Brilliantly done Yash

Now on to Kabir and Yash!! THEY'RE SO CUTE!! I love how you've given them two a vital role in this as well - how you've described the feelings they have for each other as well. The way he stood up for her as well... And smiled at her sleeping!!! Hayyeee I officially love Kabir! All strong characters, and i love it!!

I love how Arnav came to Khushi's help when they first met... Superhero Barun ❤️ (Even if it was just something little😆) You've given a lovely setting for their budding story! Also, the fact that Khushi saw Arnav shouting at that Meenakshi bitch... i don't know whether this is a good thing? Or is it setting us up for his temper problems in future? Or is that me reading tok much in to it lol? Either way... At least Khushi has seen how caring he is!! 👏

AND YES!!! love their little friend circle now!!! 😆 I love friendships like this!!!

Well done you! I loved this update, and i cannot wait to see where you go with this... Already love the Khushi/Arnav relationship!

HATS OFF YASH!
I love you 🤗

Originally posted by: --Sarunholic--

Wow Awesum update!!! Thnx fr d PM 😳 Continue soon!