SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#931

their first kiss..

yayyy!!!

Wonderful update...

i loved it!!!!

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sadia

@sadianabil

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Thanks for PM.

At least we got three kisses😉

Ummm did he kiss her lips or not❓❓❓

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

what's with these phones, i say.

wonderful update. his lunacy is so appealing. can he remain paagal like that forever. i like him going nuts. and she is real, flesh blood spirit. farha, beautiful stuff. waiting eagerly. and since i am no devi, happy to hang around and watch inquistively while they nibble and taste each other slowly.

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

it was not a normal update, it was mind boggling. i felt as if i was standing in a metro and i just can not get which train is coming and which is going. although the update described a single event and i believe covered 15-20 min of that event but the rush of emotions omg it was what made me feel "the metro feeling".
initially i felt like going to arnav and asking him "bhai theek ho? kheeriat hai?" and thn whn i felt like slapping him and was on the verge og saying "mou tor do is ka to" he said srrry and i was like "array lo, ajeeb!!!!!"

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#935

awesome nice romantic one after an intense confrontation bet arshi.

i dont know why he talks to her like that.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#936

Brilliant part..Loved it

😆 Arnav's brain was really on Vacation...Omg His mind already gone soo far...He was thinking that Khushi was talking abt them & he even though of telling her that he wont belive in marriage & not her type... 😆 Very well written... 👏

Khushi is so confused abt his behavier,How wont be 😛 ..He was thinking abt there marriage while actually she was talking abt his speech 😛 😆 Poor him...

Finally he came to the present & nicly handled the introduction & the speech...

Wow,What was that happened out side the party 😕 😳

Arnav is anger & jealous seeing Khushi talking with someone & giggling what not he told her & then when reality hit him he told sorry to her... He never change

The kisses were very hot & romantic...Both lost in eachother that to so lose..

Lolz 😆 while reading i was like plz no phone or any intruption,let them kiss properly & for some high its came true but damn his phone 😡

DM took break as she wanted o give them privacy but see what happened..

Such a Cliffhanger..Not fair...

Cant wait,Continue sooon

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#937

the phone had to ring, right :D

btw the way u blended the two shots of dori opening and diwali kiss was awesome...

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zara28

@zara28

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#938

Oh my gawd u kept me so glued to the scene as if it was real!! I could feel it!!! The first part where arnav forgets everything is just hilarious!!!! N they even managed to make ur naughty devi maiya blush!!! 😳 🤣