SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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shona136

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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

wooowww...

u r one hell of a writer...

brilliantly described attraction and tension betweent he two...such strong words and sentences to describe their intimacy, feelings, tension, attraction emotions...sssooo goood...

i adore your way of writing...👏

and their has to be an interruption always when they are kissing...god...devi maiya pls have mercy...if not them then on us at least...we saty glued, jumping in exitement, with 100 of butterflies in our tummies just to witness such intense, sweet intimate moments...just when our bubbles burst...😭😭

awesome dear...waiting for the next one desparately...

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Alannah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

arnavs phone!! 😡 anyways nice update

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#913

Ah! That ever faithful phone, disturbing lovers all over the world!

Will he ever come to terms with his feelings? What about our lovely heroine, she figure out she's in love anytime soon?
So exciting, can't wait to read more! :)

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Arnav is gone now, totally madly and hopelessly in love with her!!

He couldn't see anyone beyond her

Now he hurt her with his words but he made up!

So im asking did they at least kiss a little on the lips or is the phone call going to ruin everything

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Nupur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

freaking wow. It was such an awesome writer ! I love yu

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#916

Superb update..

Thanks 4 d pm

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aayt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

it was awesome

arnav is totally gone mad he sad he is not ready yet😆

kisses where 😳

loved it can't wait their reaction plz update soon

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kamtokdin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Arnav's dialogue on not " being ready" is hillarious. Very revealing about his state of mind

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783730

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Posted: 12 years ago

#919

The phone!!

It ALWAYS rings at the wrong moment...

Even in reality..

Like..

Just when it's your turn in a crowded queue...

Feel like throwing it somewhere far away..

Lol.. Hidden frustration...

Loved the chapter😊

Edited by winiwonka - 12 years ago

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#920

o.mie..omoraboti...beautifully writen...!!! you seriously re-create that magic with your writings...!!! but why seriously why that phonecall at the end breaking the awesome and magical moment...!!!😒 p.s - what does your username means..? i hope u dun mind answering it...!! i everytime have to edit the post to correct the spellings...!!!😆😆

Edited by soaringskies - 12 years ago