SS: Of Lemons & Limes #2 (Chapter 7-12)

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arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#941

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wow just wow...the build up was awesome...the scene was actually playing in my mind...arnie is a fool no doubt but this time he controlled the damage immediately...n my khushi a perfect match for ASR...loved her answers to him...can we just break this phone already😡...but it was not almost right???lol
brilliant update I love these stares n glances n chupna chupana...eagerly w8ng for next...

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#942

Ohh god dear, what a lovely update!

You created such a dazzeling chemistry of this hot pair only through writting...I couldn't do anything but remember all those magical love scenes from the show. Thanks for such a treat.

The lost state of Arnav's mind...How beautifuly you have depicted...It truly convinced me how Khushi has seized his sanity...great job gal 👏

I was holding my breathe litrelly when he followed her in that half-lit corner to know how they proceed further. When he said all those humilating words to her, I thought now there would be another battle again but thankfully he took control over his rage and apologised her. that was nice twist for me...😃

Those three kisses...hayeee...nostalgic ...😳...Wait.. not three but three and half, isn't it? 😉 and who has intervened this time into our love bird's rare private moments? Aman again???? 😡

Update soon..

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Madhumita Saravanan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#943

uff...the famous phone call... :D :P

Aman is it? :P

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vrinda725

@vrinda725

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Posted: 12 years ago

#944

Yehvphone ki toh... :/
kyun baja
ab pakka kuchh gadbad hojayegi! :(

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saarah96

@saarah96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#945

lool arnav brain really did switched off
and ooh he did not say that
hes lucky that khushi forgives him
and dont tell me that its aman!=]

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#946

oh you are hard hearted! such a beautiful update and then the damn phone! DM ko bolo nazar na hataye.
these two can't get anything right on their own.

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431362

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Posted: 12 years ago

#947

Such an intense update.. Perfect scenes for the passionate set.. Well done.. =)

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#948

Hey!

Well-written.

Enjoyable. 😃

Arnav. Well yes he was confused initially. Fair enough. Then he realised the extent of his feelings and thus wanted to lets say ... hmmm ... not give Khushi the wrong idea, when infact she was talking about his speech. He has the damn f**king audacity to say that she's stooop so low, moving on from one rich man to another ... but you know what, once such words are said ... most of the time, they cannit be forgiven nor forgotten. In few cases they can be, also depending on the person and their nature too. He ia a dick at times! Who the hell does he think he is uttering such words like that to her?! ASR ... as in Arsehole Sucking Runt. Well he better sort himself out! I mean seriously ...?! Khushi deserves to be loved, cared for and given respect ... and he is at this moment in time doing non of that.

😡😡😡