new arhi ff..rishtoon mein uljhan pt 5 pg 15 17/12 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: chandananagesh



awesome


exciting


w8ing 4 the next update




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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: spvd

following Maaneet version...





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Posted: 12 years ago
#33


ok...sry for sending pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: nannav

continue sooon.. waiting for arnav😊




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: freya123

nice start conti soon





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

till part 1
nice...
cont soon...





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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rina25

Hi

I would vote for English
And nice update dear
continue soon





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2:
In one corner of the city a new day and a new life started for 2 people where as in the another corner of the same city fate of another person was being decided...
in a small home a small boy approx. 12 years of age was packing his bag...his mother was helping with tears in his eyes and his father was no where to be seen...
after sometime the mom of the boy went out and the boy went to his small sister who was only 5 years and was seeing what is going on...her mother was crying so she also started crying...that boy came to her...
B:my sweet sister..u are a good girl na???
G:yes..i am a very good girl...
B:so will u listen to ur brother??
G:(nodding cutely with tears in her eyes...)
B:(slowly eiping the tears..)this tears dont look nice on my sweet anji...only bad girls will cry...so dont cry...
G: (immediately wiping her tears...)anji not a bad girl...she is arnav bhaiya's good girl...
B:i know...promise me that u will not cry and will be a good girl...
G:anji promise to be a good girl...but bhaiya y are u leaving me and going??
B:where i am leaving and going...i will come back soon...
G:promise???
B:promise dear...till then i should not get any complain of anji...ok...if i get any complain then i wont come back...
G:no no...anji will be good girl and will not trouble anyone...u come back soon...
B: (became teary...but hid them..)my good girl...
saying so he hugged her tightly...he doesnt know next after how many days he might be able to see her and hug her...
after the packing all the suitcase was taken out and a taxi was called...his mom fed him curd and blessed him to be successful...he sat in the taxi and reached delhi's international airport to meet his dad...
D : all the best son...may u always be successful...
Arnav : thanks dad..
D : is all packing over??
A : yes dad...
D : gud...i have talked to that school head...telling him that he is coming alone...so as soon as u reach LONDON call him and he will guide and after reaching there they will guide u to the hostel...for ur stay...
A : ok dad...
D : take ur tickets and passport out...and u check in now...
A : ok dad...bye...
D : bye dear son...
arnav started to move towards the check in gate . . . . suddenly he was stopped by his dad . .
D : arnav . . .
A : yes dad . .
D : wont u hug ur dad once ? ?
arvan ran and hug him . . . . his dad too hugged him tightly . . . . and said . . .
D : i am sorry son . . . because of me u have to leave this counrty . . .
arnav didn't let him complete...
A : ok dad...bye...its time for my flight . . . .
D : bye . . .
saying so arnav started to move towards the gate . . . . he entered the gate and disappered from the sight of his dad . . . .
after some hours he had reached LONDON and called his mom and informed her and didn't talk to his dad...then he called his future school and they guided him and he had settled in his hostel room...
PRECAP : back to present..

P.S:many of u have asked me to continue in english...so i hav planned to write in english but some places where hindi is necessary there i will use it...

hope to hear from u...


for pms pls buddy "AGpm"...



LOADS OF LOVE AG...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
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good one...make a long one please..😉

do continue dear

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