new arhi ff..rishtoon mein uljhan pt 5 pg 15 17/12

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

hello every one...

this is my first post in this forum...

i have planned to write a FF on arhi...this FF basically i have written as maneet version...but now i am going to write it in arhi version with some changes but the story line would be the same...

do read the prolouge and tell me whether should i continue or not...

INDEX:

part1:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3271847/new-arhi-ff-rishtoon-mein-uljhan-pt-5-pg-15-17-12?pn=4

part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3271847/new-arhi-ff-rishtoon-mein-uljhan-pt-5-pg-15-17-12?pn=7�

part 3:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71408595

part 4:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71476503

part 5:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71848585

waiting for ur response...

for pms pls buddy "AGpm"

LOADS OF LOVE AG...

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

PROLOUGE:

one girl was sitting in bridal attire in front of the mirror suddenly the door opened and another girl came in...and asked her..

G:arre khushi tu taiyaar nahi hui???bas baraat aathi hi hogi..(u didnt get ready till now???the baraat will come any time...)

K:haan jiji mein bas ho gayi...bas yeh pallu pehena baaki hai...kya aap meri maadad kar dengi???(yes sis...bas wearing the pallu is remaining...can u help me??)

JIJI:yeh bhi kehne ki baat hai...aaja meri pyari...(this is also a thing to say???come my dear..)

khusi was totally ready and at the same time there was sound of baarat came...

K:jiji humari baarat aagayi...(sis my baarat had come)

J:haan...(yes...)

K:jiji mera sapna aaj pura hoga...haina jiji??(my dream will be true today..s na sis???)

J:haan...aaj tera sapna jaruur pora hoga...aaj mein neeche jaathi hun...aur shalu ko bhejthi hun..aapna khayal rakhiyo...(s..today ur dream will be fulfilled...ok i will go down and will send shalu up...u take care...ok...)

K:thik hai jiji...(ok sis..)

saying so she went down to welcome the guests and khusi came to window to she her LOVE clad in groom's wear and sitting on the horse along with his nephew...

that's all for prolouge...waiting for ur response...pls tell me whether shoul i continue or not...

i hav one more doubt...should i write it in full english or in both english and hindi...pls help me to choose...

this will have only few parts that is similar to the maneet one...

for pms pls buddy "AGpm"

hope to hear from u...

LOADS OF LOVE AG...

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Akanshya AG

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Posted: 13 years ago

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0082016nit

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Posted: 13 years ago

continue dear...english will be easy to read😃

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arniepervaiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

a very intriguing start..

do continue soon..😊

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice start dear,...
loved it...
continue soon...
english or hindi i dont have any prob :)

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rina25

@Nandhaki

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Posted: 13 years ago

Do continue Dear wait for update

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome continue in English and only use Hindi for NK if he is in this story!

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nannav
continue dear...english will be easy to read😃

thanks for liking...

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: arniepervaiz
a very intriguing start..
do continue soon..😊

thanks for liking...

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