OS: Realization...(link to 4th part updated)

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kaira101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

loved it

poor khushi

continue soon

thanx for the pm

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deep5128

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Superb parts! Beautifully written!
Thnx 4 pm

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Sugi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

well written...hope Arnav realises soon...very sad for my darling khushi 😭

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Nil_oporajita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

nice.pls me for the next part...

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tsultana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

First of all thank u for the pm. Beautifully written!! Read all three chapters in ine go. Am sooo cross with this current track on tv. Havent watched it for couple of days. Hope arnav realises this repents!!
Thank u again x

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sivatharshini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

It's beautifully well written bravo , I was crying when I read your OS ! 👍🏼 love it !!

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urvi678

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

I really love this. :O

Update soon :)

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Japonica

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Loved the 3 linked stories, you've sketched out the situation and the emotions so beautifully. Now that realization has happened, I hope the restitution also happens.

I also hope Khushi keeps her dignity and self respect and makes him acknowledge the hurt he has caused with his behaviour.

Look forward to the next update.

Edited by Japonica - 13 years ago

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.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Heartbreaking.. beautifully written.. I wonder what he will do to resolve the problem.. and he has no.clue that she is thinking of leaving..:/

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Ok I just read all the 3 parts and I'm not lying, I have tears in my eyes, my heart is breaking for Khushi!

My emotions are all over the place, these 3 OSs were all so emotional, and so heart breaking! It's painful!

Hats off!!! 👏

There are such talented writers here on the forum...I have no idea what 4lions are doing, what I hear now is they are asking fans to send them stories...can they not think of anything?

Sometimes I think its so much better to read about Arnav-Khushi than to watch IPKKND!

This was simply perfect!

I mean the dialogues you use, the descriptons, the detail, it's so believable, so realistic!!

Absolutely loved it!

Thanks for the PM

xxx