OS: Realization...(link to 4th part updated)

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Awesme👏

Arnav -Dude,Realise! Realise ur wife's pain,Dammit😭

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Another awesome part!

This OS - all the 3 parts..have the intensity that has been lacking in the show..

You've written it just so beautifully Sunara!! 👏 It's really emotional and my heart bleeds for Khushi..😭

I can't wait to read the next part..!!

Loved it! 😊

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divvk

@divvk

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

amazing yaar@!!!! loved it to the core..!!!! having tears yaar!! i can feel khushi's pain!!! please continue and make arnav woe khushi in ur style yaar. please continue.. i can't see khushi in such a depressed state yaar. she deserves to get everything in this world!!! please pm me when u write next part.

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Amazing..

I want arnav to have a true sense f realizatn f how mch Khushi has gone thru..

Eagerly awaiting d nxt part..
Plz update soon :)

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namrata67331

@namrata67331

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

i practically touched my heart..please do update us with the next part

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chemistry101

@chemistry101

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awww...my heart goes out to Khushi. Hope they both sorts things out. Thanks for the PM :)

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

awesome... this slow realisation is good 😊

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

wow awsuuum os dear...thnx 4da pm hun!!!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

I dont know what the hell is wrong with me but every time i read anything regarding this basketball thing i cry so much...
And your story was another in the list that reduced me to tears..
Brilliant work hun waiting for the next chapter...

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

sunara, you have magic in ur writing.!

you know m typing while crying here..

my heart's just bleeding for her.. just one request

please please please post this on forum 32 as our good

for nothing CV's don't know how to move this show, this was

remarkable plus we have sanaya and barun too who are masters

in expressions. please yaar it would be lovely to see this crap track

moving in your way. the intensity will be back with our show .please sunara

just give it a try.! and about the story m still sobbing.! please please please

do continue it soon..

Edited by 207shikha - 13 years ago