OS: Realization...(link to 4th part updated)

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Both the parts were amazing...you described Khushi's pain perfectly...

Cant wait to read more..thanks for the PM

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Syca

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Aww beautifully written can you please pm me when you update next please.

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Madhu

@SUKRIMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Awesome.wonderfully write .pls Pm me your updates.and continue soon thanks

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

God u made me cry...
M really upset wid current track...
But y wrote dis... God tomorrow is my anatomy test n i knw i'll b abl to concentrt on studies...
N y hell d tears r not stoping...
It was a pain filled update...
Plz plz plz plz plz i beg u to continue it n end it at a happy note plzzz...
M beggin u 4 a happy ending...
U r tooo good...
:'( :'( :-( :'( :'(

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Pooor khushi... Cant wait to see what happens next :-) xx

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urm21

@urm21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

absolutely brilliant, the last bit was so sad, 😭. please up date soon. u captured how K feels.

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Summer

@buttercup122

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

WOW...that is all i have to say WOW

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

beautifully written poor khushi my heart goes out to her

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

You have captures khushi's emotions perfectly. Cant wait to read next..
Thanks for the pm..

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farfar319

@farfar319

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Man, if they showed anything like these scenes with the intensity you created on the actual show , despite it being angsty Khushi, I think people would still enjoy it. You managed to depict what the original creators seem to be failing at.

Loved all three parts.. I hope there's another part!