OS: Realization...(link to 4th part updated)

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Oh my god, just rad the 3 OS's together and it really broke my heart...Khushi's pain is obvious that it got to me..the way you have written se parts is jus fab !!

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Yet another heart wrenching update. The way u have expressed the emotions of both Arnav and Khushi made me cry. What has happened to them? At last Arnav could realize what was happening. Beautiful OS. Will be waiting for the next update. Thanks for the PM

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arshidreamz

@arshidreamz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Can I have a superlike button for this OS please??

It is heartbreaking to see this Khushi...I have tears in my eyes when I finished reading..

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

i love the last bit you have written. its so poignant. i am going through the same phase in my life. abandoned by the one i love and trying to go on with life.

BTW i sent buddy request to ur account but it bounced

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Men .. Beautiful continuation .. The intensity welled up my eyes.

Will be waiting for the next part.

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trina2010

@trina2010

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

You talked about Khushis POV beautifully. Arnav's too but that guy needs a huge redemption IMO.
Btw loved your update. Thanks

Edited by trina2010 - 12 years ago

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Woah, read all 3 parts together.

I so wish they had shown something like this in the show, khushis pain is unbearable and I love the way you portrayed her in your writing.

Thanks for the PM :)

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

this was so beautiful, read all 3 in a go I really hope ur writing another one,

brought me to tears for Khushi, her feelings, everything each of the OSes were so so so beautifully written, the emotion really got to the heart, and they were very well described

and end of each OS really left quite an impact! LOVED IT!

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783730

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

I like it!!

Keep checking 'sidelines' for updates!

Good job!

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niharika111

@niharika111

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

You write beautifully...I had tears in my eyes reading the three chapters...I love the way you have portrayed Khushi's sadness, dilemma, insecurity...are you going to continue this? If so, please pm me...I'll send you a buddy request!