FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update...👏
the flashback scene was so sweet...
felt pity fr shaina...😭
juz loved it
update soon
plz pm me when u continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
i'm in class during tea break, since i have already drafted this part, better post it now, because have no connection where i'm staying😭
sorry for any mistakes😳

Part 12B

She was so lost in her thoughts that she didnt even realise when Rathore came to stand in front of her. It's only when he made some noises that she realised that he was standing in front of her. For one minute she forgot rathore' amnesia and actually smiled lovingly at him. But then when Rathore only glared at her, she understood that the Rathore in front of her wasn't hers anymore, he didnt love her anymore, he didnt even remember her anymore. Her smile immediately faded and she turned to run away from there with tears in her eyes.

But little did she know that Rathore was here to talk with her. He grabbed his hands to prevent her from going anywhere and dragged her to a terrace outside where he could talk with her alone. At first Shaina was shocked, but even then she followed him meekly. "what have i done now? Oh my god, he's gonna scream at me again," she thought to herself.

But what awaited her was something she couldn't have guessed at all.

Riya, on the other hand, was looking for Shaina," abhi to yehi thi, kahan gayi?" she said and searched with her eyes for anyone ressembling Shaina. Finally she saw part of Shaina's red dress, she decided to go and talk with her. She was just going to reach there, when Arjun blocked her.

Arjun had seen Rathore taking Shaina out, he knew Rathore so well, and knew Rathore was gonna apologise to Shaina. He trusted his brother to behave like a gentleman now, so didnt thought about going to protect her anymore. However suddenly he saw Riya going towards them, he had to stop her from going there and therefore rushed to block her way.

"You look very beautiful today, iss saree mein tum bahut sexy lad rahi ho," Arjun said the first thing which came to his mind to stop her, and only after having uttered these words, did he realised what he had said. He bit his tongue slightly and waited for Riya's reaction.

Riya already was so overwhelmed by Arjun after their close dancing, she wasn't prepared at all for this from Arjun. She didnt know what to say at all. She stared numbly looking at him.

Arjun smirked at Riya's loss of words, and to make the atmosphere more comfortable he added, "Riya, you are supposed to say "Thank you" when someone compliments you."

Riya opened her mouth and said "Thank you." and then she didnt know what else to add. She was looking like a college girl completely gaga in front of a boy. She couldn't let Arjun play with her senses so much, she was a new generation girl, what if she was old fashioned, she still wouldn't let anyone take over her thoughts and render her completely speechless.

"And you are looking very handsome today also! You know if you had been a bit more like Shah Rukh, i would have proposed to you on the spot. But unfortunately there's a lot to be changed before you can become like him. Too bad nah!" Riya said jokingly.

Arjun was shocked at Riya's words, at first she had seemed so sweet and shy, but now here she was challenging him by saying SRK was better than him. He didnt like that Riya liked SRK better than him, why he didnt like, he didnt ponder much about it. He just didnt like at all. "Gosh i'm jealous of an actor now!" he suddenly thought.

"Dont tell me you love those "Rahul" types of boy," Arjun said by putting out his tongue.

"Hain mujhe pasand hein. I love love stories, mujhe bhi aisa hi prince charming chahiye in my life," Riya said with dreamy eyes.

Arjun looked at Riya and smiled at her innocence and dreams, "Bilkul pagal ho tum!" he said and went away. Riya looked at him smilingly, and then tried to think what she was doing here. But whenever Arjun came near her, she forgot everything, she decided that she'd have to take some drastic measures as from now on. Staying too much with Arjun was not good for her mind and health.

She went away towards Dadi, completely forgetting that she had come here looking for Shaina.


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Posted: 12 years ago
rathore took her to tell sry
arjuns compliment was gud
and riya said srk is better than arjun😆
now wat arjun will do
he will also change like rahul😆
so sweet update was👏
continue soon
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woow Arjun called her sexy..
Par Riya bhi kuch kam nahi hai..
Loved to read how bth effetcs each other..
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor shaina!! god!! please make rathod remember her soon... ab ye riya kya kabab mein haddi banne ki koi vrath rakha hai kya?? hamesha shaina ki peeche bhaagthe rehte hai!! aww... arjun is jealous of SRK cute 😳.. hahaha riya forgot what she came for... update soon.. with more ariya!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum blossom update di...
loved it...
happy new yr di..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..:) ariya's convo was too gud.. srk comparision wid arjun..lol... continue soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
loved the fb scene...poor Shaina...i hope Rathod gets back his memory or atleast revives his love story
And ARIYA conv was super cool...romantic...i mean cute and flirty! lol

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Updates..👏
SRK Vs Arjun 🤪
Continue Soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi haruhi🤗 wish u happy ne year
😛 a biggg surprise even rathore sir can be too romantic poor shaina 😔
i'm little bit surprise by riya's answer🤪 arjun baaton baaton mein 4 baar riya ko propose kar chuka riya ab to samjho na
arjun got jealous ab to bas maza aayega🥳
update soon👍🏼
Edited by life93 - 12 years ago

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