FFWhile you were sleeping Chap 21B Pg142 31/1

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kirthiii

@kirthiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

oh no! you will update only next year? what will i do till then? 😭

please update soon...

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yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

wow ariya dance was amazing
cont soon

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Awesum updates dear...!! loved d song..dadi is a sweet n cute character..!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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Surya Sinkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Nice Updation Tina...
It was really lovable...
plz continue soon...

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diva

@rockz.diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Hey awww ariyaa dancing...romantic thaaa bg music was perfect..
me to ariya dreamland me chali gai thi eham eham 😛
dadi is relly very cuteee
n arjun n riya ka cute convo superbbb he waz teasng her awww
jus update soon itz superbb loved it ty for d pm

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nikki08

@nikki08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

hey loved d update...

song selection was just so perfect!

n d mixed feelings of arjun riya were written so well!!!!👍🏼

and i dnt kno wen u vil b reaching india but neway

welcome to india!!!!!!🤗

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Tina tum romance scene likhne me ekdam mahir ho..kya dance tha I was in dreamland..i wish dance kabhi khatam hi na hota.
i hope jaldi hi they understand their true feeling.
update when you get time..& welcome to India..

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Mine comment was due haha..
havnt noticed na..lolxx..
Chap:9
Awesome update
lol..rathore falling for riya😃
Rathore was so rude,angry and ignorant towards shaina
Poor her..she cried soo much..😭.seriously her time is not going good!!
And on his birthday was the limit..
Good that arjun told him to stop his rude remarks and he understood his mistakes..
Ariya love talk was awesome😳
haha..the best was dadi's remark for them being a couple😉
love dadi!!
Chap:10
Wow..nice..
Shaina jealous of riya..lol..
A baby case for the Etf!!
Such ignorant parents..argghh...they should be put to jail or the baby taken away..!!!
Arjun was really so nice,sweet and adorable that riya too fell dreamy for him😛
Haha..arjun too couldnt help teasing him..lolx
An ariyaa dance finally
Shadi sunkr tumhara hi yaad aa rha tha🤣
Chap:11A
Finally finally finally riya ka dhyan shaina se hata!!!hufff...
All credits to arjun😉
kash hm hote
Songs were romantic😉😛
Dadi toh is jodi maker lol...romantic pe romantic songs😳
Chap 11-B
Super super one...loved it...into my dreamyland
haha...dadi is always the sweetest..
ariya bhi khush,shree-trishna bhi khush😃
Ariya completely lost in each other..and arrival of new feelings..😊
Always love arjun's sweet marriage proposal talk😳
update soon
Have a happy and safe trip dear😉 i will be waiting with garlands🤣 Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year dear

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

tina :

read the enitre FF till now. and you know what, even with the ETF team involved it appeared more like a family drama. but it's okay if that's the way you have planned it to be. and in the total scenario that have ensured post rathore's memory loss, i'm feeling actually feeling bad for shaina than riya when she was almost thrown out of the house by arjun. and about dadi , ek baat bata, budhape mein log kuch extra sweet ho jate hai kya😕 ? woh toh jaise haath dhokar padi hai arjun-riya ko jodi babane ke liye when she should have concentrated more on rathore's health IMO. aur shree ka toh kya kehna, seems like he's got his girl too.

keep updating. would love to know what comes next.😊